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JDaKidd · 10-28-2006, 10:03 PM

South Up 1st
No bar limit
3-0 KO
4-1 TKO
South Up due on Oct. 30
**** due on Oct. 31

South Up · 10-29-2006, 08:32 AM

aight..im checkin in now...ill hit this later today

South Up · 10-29-2006, 09:08 PM

Everythin about you gay-- names, posts, nigga you real Happy
Got me yawnin at ya charades, face lookin' like my Avy
Come get at me Scrappy, and I ain't talkin dude on BME
Must be Halloween, you win this? You must be Bein Me
Only way you touchin or seein me is a Meet-n-Greet
And you try either one, streetsweep you off ya feet
Simply put homeboy, South yearn to hurt rookies
You a sweet wigga, but still ass like Burnt Cookies
And I ain't The Coldest, but I'm spittin' Vivid Tundra
Ya old ass jokes moldin', Jim Carrey off Living Color
No homo but I needa Rubber, way I Fucked this bitch
Round 3 over doja, ya Mouthpiece in the Spit Bucket, shit...

i wrote this shit mad drowsy and quick...hopefully **** comes thru and drops so he dont get DQ'ed...good luck

ThatRapperIsGay · 10-29-2006, 10:16 PM

South up will get fucked up, make him magenta and sharquiest(green)
Rotten peach bruisen badly,making your whole georgia deceased
When u spit like South, makes you not hard to defeat
Thinking big words, will card you street?
You must be a movie set, cause all i see are dead lines
And ugly you bet; parking tickets the only way he fines
South-Up, Tha-God, dis poor kid's Bipolar
Skating on the roof, the only way he's a high roller
Out of touch with the times, like little house on the prairie
Cought him shoppin at the food mart, trying to buy a blackberry
Saw him dressed up like eighties, said he's rockin a new era
I told him so now he hates me, the tears messin the mascara
Bitch loves the beef, thats y he lives in the Deli(dele)
interestes:girls cash cars, screamin get in my belly
Niggas spits caulk, cause his rhymes r filler
Your Ambitionz? hell your weak rhymes r the killa
Lost all your weight, like your rhymes were fat camp
And the fuck ur Sig say? you the Toss Salad Champ?
A killa-Cam fan, but your Killa-Season's over
Had no luck in this battle, like he lost a four leaf clover
Change yall names to Scotch, cause ur rhymes on the rocks
My rhymes keep you itchin for more, like chicken pox
And homies a geek, he's rockin the Nature Boy Flair
Trys to rock with God, but vs. me, he had no prayer
**** won the battle, blah blah blah
Cause South came as deep as a training bra

Ghost · 10-30-2006, 12:54 AM

wow south...thats gotta be the worst drop you ever did...the punches were meh, they werent anything special..and didnt hit hard..the only thing you had goin for you is the 1 thing **** didnt have for him...the flow

**** you lacked the flow, but you had some funny punches and nice multis here n there..but you gotta connect the punches with a decent set up so it hits better...you got the basics down, but theres more to punchlines then thinkin of em n typin em

JDaKidd · 10-30-2006, 05:52 PM

I agree with what Ghost say about this as your worse battle, but the verse still was good, u tryed punches, but really didnt add up sometimes. And u said, Face lookin like MY avy, u dont get on your own Avy, get on his. I understand what u sayin, but dont get on your Avy, thats like shootin yourself. **** your flow did add either, make it like you rappin on a beat, u will have 1 short line, then a long 1, but overall, **** won with better punches, mutis was hot, and personal

My votte: ****

South Up · 10-30-2006, 06:18 PM

..2-0 ****

**Robert Are** · 10-31-2006, 12:04 AM

****....Got this one for me...but one thing that I would give as advice would to shorten your verses, it gets kind of boring as you read it...but it had enough punches and jokes to keep it alive

And yeah, South, Ive seen better from you before...Thought that you wouldve stepped up a bit this being the Heavyweight Title on the line, but compared to TRIGs verse, it just didnt keep my attention and didnt really have any personal punches

MY VOTE: ****

ThatRapperIsGay · 10-31-2006, 12:47 AM

**** is going to the Finals!!!!!! Thanks for the tips, propped who i could.

South Up · 10-31-2006, 10:11 AM

..i shoulda jus waited to drop yesterday instead of doin it tired as hell sunday..

lol fuck it, congratz **** and good luck in tha finals

10-28-2006, 10:03 PM	#1 (permalink)
JDaKidd Conartist Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 10,487	Heavyweight Championship Round 3 - South Up vs ThatRapperisGay South Up 1st No bar limit 3-0 KO 4-1 TKO South Up due on Oct. 30 **** due on Oct. 31

10-30-2006, 12:54 AM	#5 (permalink)
Ghost RGF's Phantom... Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: *********************** This Years Record 163/20/112 *********************** Posts: 7,118	wow south...thats gotta be the worst drop you ever did...the punches were meh, they werent anything special..and didnt hit hard..the only thing you had goin for you is the 1 thing ** didnt have for him...the flow ** you lacked the flow, but you had some funny punches and nice multis here n there..but you gotta connect the punches with a decent set up so it hits better...you got the basics down, but theres more to punchlines then thinkin of em n typin em __________________

10-31-2006, 12:04 AM	#8 (permalink)
Robert Are Wherewolves Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Scream Phoenix, AZ Posts: 20,012	**....Got this one for me...but one thing that I would give as advice would to shorten your verses, it gets kind of boring as you read it...but it had enough punches and jokes to keep it alive And yeah, South, Ive seen better from you before...Thought that you wouldve stepped up a bit this being the Heavyweight Title on the line, but compared to TRIGs verse, it just didnt keep my attention and didnt really have any personal punches MY VOTE: ** __________________ www.myspace.com/wherewolvesattackfromspace

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10-29-2006, 08:32 AM	#2 (permalink)
South Up Banned Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: The Struggle Posts: 21,091	aight..im checkin in now...ill hit this later today

10-29-2006, 09:08 PM	#3 (permalink)
South Up Banned Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: The Struggle Posts: 21,091	Everythin about you gay-- names, posts, nigga you real Happy Got me yawnin at ya charades, face lookin' like my Avy Come get at me Scrappy, and I ain't talkin dude on BME Must be Halloween, you win this? You must be Bein Me Only way you touchin or seein me is a Meet-n-Greet And you try either one, streetsweep you off ya feet Simply put homeboy, South yearn to hurt rookies You a sweet wigga, but still ass like Burnt Cookies And I ain't The Coldest, but I'm spittin' Vivid Tundra Ya old ass jokes moldin', Jim Carrey off Living Color No homo but I needa Rubber, way I Fucked this bitch Round 3 over doja, ya Mouthpiece in the Spit Bucket, shit... i wrote this shit mad drowsy and quick...hopefully **** comes thru and drops so he dont get DQ'ed...good luck

10-29-2006, 10:16 PM	#4 (permalink)
ThatRapperIsGay Banned Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,641	South up will get fucked up, make him magenta and sharquiest(green) Rotten peach bruisen badly,making your whole georgia deceased When u spit like South, makes you not hard to defeat Thinking big words, will card you street? You must be a movie set, cause all i see are dead lines And ugly you bet; parking tickets the only way he fines South-Up, Tha-God, dis poor kid's Bipolar Skating on the roof, the only way he's a high roller Out of touch with the times, like little house on the prairie Cought him shoppin at the food mart, trying to buy a blackberry Saw him dressed up like eighties, said he's rockin a new era I told him so now he hates me, the tears messin the mascara Bitch loves the beef, thats y he lives in the Deli(dele) interestes:girls cash cars, screamin get in my belly Niggas spits caulk, cause his rhymes r filler Your Ambitionz? hell your weak rhymes r the killa Lost all your weight, like your rhymes were fat camp And the fuck ur Sig say? you the Toss Salad Champ? A killa-Cam fan, but your Killa-Season's over Had no luck in this battle, like he lost a four leaf clover Change yall names to Scotch, cause ur rhymes on the rocks My rhymes keep you itchin for more, like chicken pox And homies a geek, he's rockin the Nature Boy Flair Trys to rock with God, but vs. me, he had no prayer **** won the battle, blah blah blah Cause South came as deep as a training bra

10-30-2006, 05:52 PM	#6 (permalink)
JDaKidd Conartist Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 10,487	I agree with what Ghost say about this as your worse battle, but the verse still was good, u tryed punches, but really didnt add up sometimes. And u said, Face lookin like MY avy, u dont get on your own Avy, get on his. I understand what u sayin, but dont get on your Avy, thats like shootin yourself. ** your flow did add either, make it like you rappin on a beat, u will have 1 short line, then a long 1, but overall, won with better punches, mutis was hot, and personal My votte: **

10-30-2006, 06:18 PM	#7 (permalink)
South Up Banned Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: The Struggle Posts: 21,091	..2-0 ****

10-31-2006, 12:47 AM	#9 (permalink)
ThatRapperIsGay Banned Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,641	**** is going to the Finals!!!!!! Thanks for the tips, propped who i could.

10-31-2006, 10:11 AM	#10 (permalink)
South Up Banned Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: The Struggle Posts: 21,091	..i shoulda jus waited to drop yesterday instead of doin it tired as hell sunday.. lol fuck it, congratz **** and good luck in tha finals