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Don
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5 Bars Max
No recycling, biting and shit... Due Tomorrow by midnight... No hate votes, dickride votes or buddy votes... |
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RGF's Phantom...
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Ghost'a Spit flames, and you simply duck n wine
it's seems if he run outta lean, its tha only way he'a make sumthin rhyme cause that slurr aint workin dog, call it a lisp I say you just clackin em down you can say Im similar to nomads the way Im PACKIN A-ROUND you aint halfa my caliba, I shouldnt be messin with young people cause tha only way you get hype on stage..is you start a riot wit tha eagle get no Rap Hustle love, even though he ass kisser so I'll pop ta leave em leakin like he was nothin more then a common blister why the fuck you here dunny? we already got a better 14 year old cause he KO'd ya ass...n left ya in tha bin like alchoholics when the beers cold I gotta be out, wouldnt make the deadline tomorow..so I did a lil keystyle
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Don
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lol aight
Imma keystyle too Look man, i look around here and u doin the most-bitchin So after im done, niggas be like 'Ghost(non)-Ex(istant)'..!!/ Aight then, I was never trash, didnt even need the raphustle fuck this ghost-man, You a phantom right? well then meet the Ghostbusta..!!/ . . . . See the only way this man shoot 'Banana Clips' If he was filmin a movie on Fruits and Shit..!!/ Look, call me a roman candle the way i fire(at)crackers This man the fountain, like the way he blownin up after(i light him up)..!!/ . . . . look man I hunt these 'herbs' down like a marijuana-hunter And ill leave this man wit (bullet) burns and red spots like he hadda-bad-summer..!!/ Ok votes open, REMEMBER, WE BOTH KEYSTYLED SO VOTE ON THAT!! <<sorry just had to put that before everyone is like "weak battle" |
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Capo
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(Ghost-Ex)
Ghost'a Spit flames, and you simply duck n wine it's seems if he run outta lean, its tha only way he'a make sumthin rhyme ^^ hmm i see your concept, but wasn't feeling the opener cause that slurr aint workin dog, call it a lisp I say you just clackin em down you can say Im similar to nomads the way Im PACKIN A-ROUND ^^ nice..i like the last line you aint halfa my caliba, I shouldnt be messin with young people cause tha only way you get hype on stage..is you start a riot wit tha eagle ^^ i was expecting more from this bar, but eh ok get no Rap Hustle love, even though he ass kisser so I'll pop ta leave em leakin like he was nothin more then a common blister ^^ blisters don't really bleed, only pimples do if you pop em wrong...but eh why the fuck you here dunny? we already got a better 14 year old cause he KO'd ya ass...n left ya in tha bin like alchoholics when the beers cold ^^ lol nice last closer though 7.8/10 (YoungDA) Look man, i look around here and u doin the most-bitchin So after im done, niggas be like 'Ghost(non)-Ex(istant)'..!!/ ^^ hmm nice last line, but to me it was moreover forced Aight then, I was never trash, didnt even need the raphustle fuck this ghost-man, You a phantom right? well then meet the Ghostbusta..!!/ ^^ nope..played concept with the ghostbuster...... See the only way this man shoot 'Banana Clips' If he was filmin a movie on Fruits and Shit..!!/ ^^ eh...wasn't really feelin it Look, call me a roman candle the way i fire(at)crackers This man the fountain, like the way he blownin up after(i light him up)..!!/ ^^ didn't really rhyme lol but ok look man I hunt these 'herbs' down like a marijuana-hunter And ill leave this man wit (bullet) burns and red spots like he hadda-bad-summer..!!/ ^^ nice closer 7.9/10 Ghost-Ex: your concepts was ok, but at some points I really wasn't feeling them like that, and maybe it was just a quick keystyle ino, but it was still a good verse overall. YoungDA: your verse wasn't much amazement either, only reason I think you won by a inch is for better concepts and more attempted punchlines directed at the challenger, but still some elevation is required and needed. Vote: YoungDA good battle toward both though.....Chea ![]() |
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my vote: youngDA |
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RGF's Phantom...
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I said im gona pop and leave him LEAKIN like blisters...leakin doesnt have to be bleedin..but when you pop a blister..they do leak..theres clear liquid inside..so thats what I meant with that
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Ghost you dont have to give us background info on blisters...lol.
Okay let's see... YoungDA: That Ghostbuster reference is played, I see that in almost every battle GX is in...Plus it wasnt very creative anywayz, so that was a big no...You did have sum nyce punches, but a few a them seemed like they were missing somethin...Nyce meta's in the closer tho...but Ive seen that "had a bad summa/red dots" used in a pic battle on another forum Ghost:Your punches were not as hard-hittin compared to your usual ones...But you had some nyce ones: eagle on stage/nomad packin, were the best out of the bunch...Very nyce closer... Because GX's content was a bit more creative & more original...Im givin him my vote...I co-sign with Torments breakdown, but I think Ghost has that one-tenth of an edge...lol
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