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11-26-2006, 01:34 PM
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Don
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Detroit, MI
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Rowe V. Anonymous
iight no less than 5 bars.
check in RIGHT NOWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!
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11-26-2006, 06:59 PM
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Thug
Join Date: Nov 2006
Posts: 238
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sorry was at work, consider this my check in
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11-27-2006, 12:38 AM
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Don
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Detroit, MI
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dont worry about it..try to drop soon though my dude...
Ya Boy Rowe Stays Bombin It!! My flows Is Accomplishments!A 'Star That's Observed' By More Than Just 'Astronomers!'/// Im known to Leave most Crowds In Astonishment!Nobody Knows duke..Thats Why He Prefers Anonymous!/// DID THIS NIGGA REPLACE HIS BRAIN WITH ROCKS? TRYNA BE THUG...HE GON HAVE A FATE THE SAME AS PAC's!!// LIKE 50 CENTS BEEF, I HAD THE'GAME IN LOCKS'(GAME AND LOX)THIS LAME'S 'LUDICROUS/ludacris' TO EVER TRY TO CLAIM MY SPOT!!!(#1 SPOT)// MY GAME IS HOT, PLUS YOU KNOW MY FLOW'S DEVINE! I TOLD THIS NIGGA IM A STAR IM SUPPOSED TO SHINE! ANONYMOUS, IF A CHOSE TO RHYME? U MIGHT AS WELL 'PUTCHA BRAIN IN A FAN' CUZ IMA BLOW YA MIND!! I COULD PAY TO HAVE U FUCKED BUT I AINT TALKIN BOUT A HOOKERS FEE!(NO HOMO)IM OFF THE HOOK BUT ON THE EDGE SO AINT NO PUSHIN ME!// THE LAST MUFUCKA THAT HAD TRIED TO BUTCHER ME HAD TO'BITE THE CLIPS/CLIPSE'..HE THOUGHT HE 'STOLE A RHYME FROM PUSHA T'!!!// SO STOP LYIN TRYNA CLAIM YOU FELT! ANONYMOUS A NOBODY! YO THIS LAME NEEDS HELP! BUT IMA JUST REFRAIN MYSELF CUZ NIGGAS KNOW THE NAME ROWE...'ANONYMOUS'...GET A NAME FOR YASELF!!!//get that?
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11-27-2006, 10:15 AM
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Thug
Join Date: Nov 2006
Posts: 238
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haha nice... k my turn
I'm battling this nigga Rowe, who can possibly be a hoe/ I never seen him or her before, so I could be battling Yoko Ono/ I can be on top of the battling mountain, just wondering how longs the hike take/ A victory from this nigga? This is like asking a fat man "do you like cake?"/ See if your a chemical, I'm a catalyst, you wouldn't be shit without me/ calling yourself a lyricist, is like you being a word and me being a dictionary/ I got a fucking Immortal Technique in my tech, you fucking ref/ I spit to uncontrolable decibels that this nigga went deaf/ His or her avatar shows us a picture of Joe Budden/ I can't tell it's gender yet, but we know that who you want humpin/ Battling me again will erase you from existance like mellow-yellow/ Register again, post in the introduction topic with a simple hello/ ...Cuz we all know Rowe is officially X'd yo... First Bar: Yoko Ono, wife of John Lennon, of japanise cultural but i think she looks like a dog Second Bar: Contains literacy device: Rhetorical ( question that doesn't need an answer ) Third Bar: Some Chemicals that are mixed are very slow and would take a long time to fuse, but a Catalyst helps speeds the reaction time up (used as a metaphor), also used a similie to show the difference between you as a lyricist and me as a lyricist Fourth Bar: Immortal Technique, a rapper who was the first person to ever receive a source quote even though he was never signed (most famous songs are Dance with the Devil, and Bin Laden ft. KRS-ONE and Chuck D of Public Enemy). Decibels: a unit used to express the intensity of a sound wave. Fifth Bar: no need to explain Sixth Bar: Mellow-Yellow was a popular soft drink that literally disappeared, i dunno if y'all seen it recently, but i haven't seen it in a year. lol no more funny ass commercials, also It tells homeboy Rowe to make a new name for himself.. Seventh half bar: LOL... uh simple.. real simple... now votes please and thank you |
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11-27-2006, 10:22 AM
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Capo
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Woodland Ave.....Body Count
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Eh...
Rowe: I was actually feeling your verse, although there was some mid-fillers i spotted so it's still good man, i like how u broke his name down and still manage to use some good punches inbetween. Anonymous: ino, your verse wasn't really hittin for me man, didn't leave no marks or abusive approach on me. bad structure with lines forced and some fillers. Keep elevatin man. Vote: Rowe.....better rounded verse
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11-27-2006, 10:42 AM
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Don
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Massachusetts
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Quote:
My vote for Rowe
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11-27-2006, 10:46 AM
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Thug
Join Date: Nov 2006
Posts: 238
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respect... more votes
but honestly, i feel like im getting robbed... i hit him way more than he hit me... his opener was very sick but he lost steam as he wrote... i kept the attack as strong as possible... i'm not sure y'all understood what i was sayings, hopefully you read the fillers i wrote... cuz if you don't understand the verse than it pointless to bother voting... 2-0 Rowe Last edited by Anonymous; 11-27-2006 at 12:58 PM.. |
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11-27-2006, 02:33 PM
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Rap GodFather
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: In VA...Clearing Her Mind...
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Anonymous you know how to structure yo verse ?
First of all ...U did not follow the rules ....Five Bars , is ten lines Two lines in a Bar And after that Third line ....I was like WTf? Rowe: You had some punches dawg ...i gotta GIVE YOU THAT ! them Similies ...wow like they aint never been done before .. but how many times you gonna address that dude with no name in that drop man ? LOL damn ! anonymous ....anonymous ...got me wondering hummm... Naw just joking ...Overall you hit that dude where it hurt em . Vote Rowe |
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