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†SaW† · 11-27-2006, 10:35 AM

4-5 bars.....

Rules....hmm
no hate votes
no dick riders...
only explained votes counted
due date: don't matter when

Checkin N...............

EA$Y · 11-27-2006, 10:36 AM

signin in

†SaW† · 11-27-2006, 11:06 AM

Peep it~

..Look his verse is like Fishin, dam his "lines" ain't "Reel/Real",
until da blade cut-below, wit his skin-out like uh fish-"Gill"..
..So he must hear-voices of screams, get OUTOFMYFUCCINMIND!,
Cuz we all know dis fag always drop-da-soap, includin da liquid-kind..
..Now switch da "beat" father, from masterbation toward his child-abuse,
cuz his verse couldn't be on-point, if he grab da "Horns" of uh "Wild-Moose"
..I don't need any personals, hmm..his FuccinMind only pleas Insanity,
wit impulses of asylum flaws, caused by "Big-Eyes" and little "Anime"..
..So ima put ur FuccinMind to da "Right", like uh Tab on a Essay,
N leave your Graveyard-speechless, now wat can da Rest-Say?..

Good Luck.....

EA$Y · 11-27-2006, 11:49 AM

no jabs, no hits, no disses hittin me
my diss' like talkin tattoos, they yell "YOU CAN'T GET RID OF ME!"

nigga spits a couple old lines that we all heard plenty
i'll murk you in every "show" like you South Park's Kenny

now why you pointin fingers callin this man crazy
look at his AV.....he must be Lucifer's baby

you sick fuck, outta luck when it comes to rhymin
his verse is like the dark....it never gets no shine in

nigga, i do this shit easy like A-B-C's
call him the new Weezy cuz he like Baby's "beef"

†SaW† · 11-27-2006, 11:55 AM

lol@ da devils baby lol good try man....uppin for votes

Tyme Lyne · 11-27-2006, 02:47 PM

damn Break down !!!!!!!!!!

Torment

..Look his verse is like Fishin, dam his "lines" ain't "Reel/Real",
until da blade cut-below, wit his skin-out like uh fish-"Gill"..

Creative...

So he must hear-voices of screams, get OUTOFMYFUCCINMIND!,
Cuz we all know dis fag always drop-da-soap, includin da liquid-kind..

HHAHAHHAHHAHHAH

..Now switch da "beat" father, from masterbation toward his child-abuse,
cuz his verse couldn't be on-point, if he grab da "Horns" of uh "Wild-Moose"

wtf?

..I don't need any personals, hmm..his FuccinMind only pleas Insanity,
wit impulses of asylum flaws, caused by "Big-Eyes" and little "Anime"..

Man why you give me that visual !!!! LOL

..So ima put ur FuccinMind to da "Right", like uh Tab on a Essay,
N leave your Graveyard-speechless, now wat can da Rest-Say?..

you aint lying with that "abstract is creativity" damn nice finish man !

aight yo!!!!!!!!

OUTTA!!!!!!

no jabs, no hits, no disses hittin me
my diss' like talkin tattoos, they yell "YOU CAN'T GET RID OF ME!"

heard that before ...

igga spits a couple old lines that we all heard plenty
i'll murk you in every "show" like you South Park's Kenny

typical....

now why you pointin fingers callin this man crazy
look at his AV.....he must be Lucifer's baby

you killed him with that one i aint gonna lie !!!

you sick fuck, outta luck when it comes to rhymin
his verse is like the dark....it never gets no shine in

okay.....

nigga, i do this shit easy like A-B-C's
call him the new Weezy cuz he like Baby's "beef"

ewwwugh i just got a flash back of them kissing each other ...LOL
weezy and baby doing that ...eugggghhhhhh!!!!!

In spite of the breakdown ....torment got this one with more creativeness , outta you had one punch that stuck out but the rest of yo drop was okay but torment got you on this one ...

Vote- Torment

†SaW† · 11-27-2006, 02:52 PM

lol thanks for the vote Liyah....yea my creativity is like man....i can't even describe the words yet....if u seen my little keystyle i did in open mic there's another example lol.....anyway thanks for votin 1-0 my way and uppin

Tyme Lyne · 11-27-2006, 03:02 PM

no problym !!!

EA$Y · 11-27-2006, 03:27 PM

LIYAH!!!
thanks for that honest feedback Liyah. appreciate it.
haven't seen you in da cage in a minute. good 2 see u around again

Varcity · 11-27-2006, 07:32 PM

Torrment got this one...

He was more creative,OUTTA yours was preddy basic,simple and somewhat senseless and I couldn't follow ya flowing structure at some points...to me torrment brung punches,wordplay,not that much multis but noticeable..nice wordplay,my favorite punch and clever line in this,was Torrment's last bar,that REST-SAY ish..

Gud battle overall yall...

Vote: Torrment

11-27-2006, 10:35 AM	#1 (permalink)
†SaW† Capo Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Woodland Ave.....Body Count Posts: 887	~OuttaMyFuccinMind V.s xXTormentXx~ 4-5 bars..... Rules....hmm no hate votes no dick riders... only explained votes counted due date: don't matter when Checkin N............... __________________ Abstract-is-Creativity..

11-27-2006, 11:06 AM	#3 (permalink)
†SaW† Capo Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Woodland Ave.....Body Count Posts: 887	Peep it~ ..Look his verse is like Fishin, dam his "lines" ain't "Reel/Real", until da blade cut-below, wit his skin-out like uh fish-"Gill".. ..So he must hear-voices of screams, get OUTOFMYFUCCINMIND!, Cuz we all know dis fag always drop-da-soap, includin da liquid-kind.. ..Now switch da "beat" father, from masterbation toward his child-abuse, cuz his verse couldn't be on-point, if he grab da "Horns" of uh "Wild-Moose" ..I don't need any personals, hmm..his FuccinMind only pleas Insanity, wit impulses of asylum flaws, caused by "Big-Eyes" and little "Anime".. ..So ima put ur FuccinMind to da "Right", like uh Tab on a Essay, N leave your Graveyard-speechless, now wat can da Rest-Say?.. Good Luck..... __________________ Abstract-is-Creativity..

11-27-2006, 11:55 AM	#5 (permalink)
†SaW† Capo Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Woodland Ave.....Body Count Posts: 887	lol@ da devils baby lol good try man....uppin for votes __________________ Abstract-is-Creativity..

11-27-2006, 02:47 PM	#6 (permalink)
Tyme Lyne Rap GodFather Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In VA...Clearing Her Mind... Posts: 4,741	damn Break down !!!!!!!!!! Torment ..Look his verse is like Fishin, dam his "lines" ain't "Reel/Real", until da blade cut-below, wit his skin-out like uh fish-"Gill".. Creative... So he must hear-voices of screams, get OUTOFMYFUCCINMIND!, Cuz we all know dis fag always drop-da-soap, includin da liquid-kind.. HHAHAHHAHHAHHAH ..Now switch da "beat" father, from masterbation toward his child-abuse, cuz his verse couldn't be on-point, if he grab da "Horns" of uh "Wild-Moose" wtf? ..I don't need any personals, hmm..his FuccinMind only pleas Insanity, wit impulses of asylum flaws, caused by "Big-Eyes" and little "Anime".. Man why you give me that visual !!!! LOL ..So ima put ur FuccinMind to da "Right", like uh Tab on a Essay, N leave your Graveyard-speechless, now wat can da Rest-Say?.. you aint lying with that "abstract is creativity" damn nice finish man ! aight yo!!!!!!!! OUTTA!!!!!! no jabs, no hits, no disses hittin me my diss' like talkin tattoos, they yell "YOU CAN'T GET RID OF ME!" heard that before ... igga spits a couple old lines that we all heard plenty i'll murk you in every "show" like you South Park's Kenny typical.... now why you pointin fingers callin this man crazy look at his AV.....he must be Lucifer's baby you killed him with that one i aint gonna lie !!! you sick fuck, outta luck when it comes to rhymin his verse is like the dark....it never gets no shine in okay..... nigga, i do this shit easy like A-B-C's call him the new Weezy cuz he like Baby's "beef" ewwwugh i just got a flash back of them kissing each other ...LOL weezy and baby doing that ...eugggghhhhhh!!!!! In spite of the breakdown ....torment got this one with more creativeness , outta you had one punch that stuck out but the rest of yo drop was okay but torment got you on this one ... Vote- Torment __________________ Some Things Change, and Some Shyt Stays The SAme . HIPHOP AINT DEAD. IT STILL LIVES IN ME !

11-27-2006, 02:52 PM	#7 (permalink)
†SaW† Capo Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Woodland Ave.....Body Count Posts: 887	lol thanks for the vote Liyah....yea my creativity is like man....i can't even describe the words yet....if u seen my little keystyle i did in open mic there's another example lol.....anyway thanks for votin 1-0 my way and uppin __________________ Abstract-is-Creativity..

11-27-2006, 10:36 AM	#2 (permalink)
EA$Y Leecher Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 2,478	signin in

11-27-2006, 11:49 AM	#4 (permalink)
EA$Y Leecher Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 2,478	no jabs, no hits, no disses hittin me my diss' like talkin tattoos, they yell "YOU CAN'T GET RID OF ME!" nigga spits a couple old lines that we all heard plenty i'll murk you in every "show" like you South Park's Kenny now why you pointin fingers callin this man crazy look at his AV.....he must be Lucifer's baby you sick fuck, outta luck when it comes to rhymin his verse is like the dark....it never gets no shine in nigga, i do this shit easy like A-B-C's call him the new Weezy cuz he like Baby's "beef"

11-27-2006, 03:02 PM	#8 (permalink)
Tyme Lyne Rap GodFather Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In VA...Clearing Her Mind... Posts: 4,741	no problym !!! __________________ Some Things Change, and Some Shyt Stays The SAme . HIPHOP AINT DEAD. IT STILL LIVES IN ME !

11-27-2006, 03:27 PM	#9 (permalink)
EA$Y Leecher Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 2,478	LIYAH!!! thanks for that honest feedback Liyah. appreciate it. haven't seen you in da cage in a minute. good 2 see u around again

11-27-2006, 07:32 PM	#10 (permalink)
Varcity Rap GodFather Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: R.I.P STACK BUNDLEZ & CAVLAR Posts: 7,222	Torrment got this one... He was more creative,OUTTA yours was preddy basic,simple and somewhat senseless and I couldn't follow ya flowing structure at some points...to me torrment brung punches,wordplay,not that much multis but noticeable..nice wordplay,my favorite punch and clever line in this,was Torrment's last bar,that REST-SAY ish.. Gud battle overall yall... Vote: Torrment __________________ A&R's like Ray Charles in Space,they aint SEEING THIS STAR- Varcity Join The Movement

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