South Up vs. Varcity

[South Up]

rules already been explained...


edit: nevermind i jus wrote a lil keystyle so ill drop first

[South Up]

Look...Varcity got somethin' in common with tha Face of Cass
Tha Car is me, 100 miles per bar, ya bones Laced in Casts
So you him at last, not so fast, face tha facts, you wack
And you only Ballin when you Playin By Yaself or wit ya Nutsack
No homo, but foes know Sonny playin wit his life like Bono
And cuz of me ya record Bled-soe you can call me Romo
So Bite Rowe-mo, that's a no-no, a side only Hoes show
So my Twin fo-fo's have ya "Bend" to the ground and "Touch Toes"
My lyrical lucidity means its a sin-to-see you in my vicinity
Hysterical, you kiddin me? Only time Black's Street when he sing No Diggity...

i aint gonna explain shit..if you dont get it then

[Varcity]

Gud drop....I'm checkin and I'm droppin right after this

[Spyda™]

Damn hot one for South Up, You better Drop Something Good Varcity

[Varcity]

Originally Posted by South Up

Hysterical, you kiddin me? Only time Black's Street when he sing No Diggity...

Lmao...I aint gotta do nuffen,I'm a sit back..homie dissing himself..that was a nice punch,no wonder he took it..but lemme finish em!!

*Superman is Alive*

My flow's like a lobotomy kid,the wordplay's logical--
South is always down,so "South" being "Up" is not possible--

I'm "plain"[plane] sick like a "Pilot" with sickness....story told--
Let the boy unfold...I'll put a DEAD END to your Glory "ROAD"--

My bars a "100 Grand" like the chocolate,hotter than gravel--
If you South....I must be North,cuz I'm ONTOP of this battle--

Hiphop dead? Call me the grim reeper...laying them out--
Have em feeling like Tamia..with a stranger in house!!--

STOP! Let off a shot,put that the hawk in his mouth,
Then put the "BEAM" on his mans like a "Cordless Mouse"--

*Free ADS*...lol

[Varcity]

Bumpin for votes....

[South Up]

aight nice drop

lets get some votes

[Varcity]

Uppin for vo0o0otes....

[†SaWâ€]

(South Up)


Look...Varcity got somethin' in common with tha Face of Cass
Tha Car is me, 100 miles per bar, ya bones Laced in Casts
^^ good personal with cassidy n da hospital bit

So you him at last, not so fast, face tha facts, you wack
And you only Ballin when you Playin By Yaself or wit ya Nutsack
^^ hmm if u had some more creative twist in dat last line it would
more effective...eh

No homo, but foes know Sonny playin wit his life like Bono
And cuz of me ya record Bled-soe you can call me Romo
^^ hmm ok bar but wasn't feelin it much

So Bite Rowe-mo, that's a no-no, a side only Hoes show
So my Twin fo-fo's have ya "Bend" to the ground and "Touch Toes"
^^ nah filler, good wordplay though

My lyrical lucidity means its a sin-to-see you in my vicinity
Hysterical, you kiddin me? Only time Black's Street when he sing No Diggity...
^^ good closer

8.5/10


(Varcity)


My flow's like a lobotomy kid,the wordplay's logical--
South is always down,so "South" being "Up" is not possible--
^^ hmm i get ur concept but wasn't feelin much

I'm "plain"[plane] sick like a "Pilot" with sickness....story told--
Let the boy unfold...I'll put a DEAD END to your Glory "ROAD"--
^^ ok ok this bar is aight

My bars a "100 Grand" like the chocolate,hotter than gravel--
If you South....I must be North,cuz I'm ONTOP of this battle--
^^ i was expectin alittle more out of this bar, but eh

Hiphop dead? Call me the grim reeper...laying them out--
Have em feeling like Tamia..with a stranger in house!!--
^^ filler

STOP! Let off a shot,put that the hawk in his mouth,
Then put the "BEAM" on his mans like a "Cordless Mouse"--
^^ only effective bar

8.5/10

South: Seems your verse constructs with more wordplay than approachin an actual punch to hit you're challenger with. There were some good concepts i have to admit was good, but some was kinda fillers that wasn't really good to my perspective view. Other than that good drop.

Varcity: Same goes for you. Your verse had some good concepts but had the wrong approaches of using them correctly. The only line that had a more creative twist toward it; was the mouse line. Ino, but try to avoid less fillers an expand your mind out there some more aight.

In Conclusion: I felt both verses was fairly equal, and didn't really stand out much for me, however this was a good battle and i'm just laying out the real facts and suggestions......So

Vote: Tie

[DocThaExpert]

...wow...

aight....

South ya verse was aight but it was just like was tryna shove multis into every part possible, tha opening was tha best part of yours

Look...Varcity got somethin' in common with tha Face of Cass
Tha Car is me, 100 miles per bar, ya bones Laced in Casts

now Varcity...

only thing i wont feelin in ya verse

I'm "plain"[plane] sick like a "Pilot" with sickness....story told--

the second part was nice, but that ^ set up just aint do it fa me

STOP! Let off a shot,put that the hawk in his mouth,
Then put the "BEAM" on his mans like a "Cordless Mouse"--

^ my nig next to me startin dyin after he saw dat shit, nice finisher, so....

Final Vote:

Varcity