Rap GodFathers Community



Closed Thread
Old 11-30-2006, 10:50 AM   #1 (permalink)
Banned
 
Join Date: Nov 2006
Posts: 186
uncle phil is an unknown quantity at this point
Default Torment Vs uncle phil

10 lines
5 votes
no swaying (meanin dont say shit defending your verse)

coooooooooool due tonite
uncle phil is offline  

Sponsored Links
Old 11-30-2006, 10:55 AM   #2 (permalink)
Capo
 
†SaW†'s Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Woodland Ave.....Body Count
Posts: 887
†SaW† is an unknown quantity at this point†SaW† is an unknown quantity at this point†SaW† is an unknown quantity at this point†SaW† is an unknown quantity at this point
Send a message via Yahoo to †SaW†
Default

lol@ defendin...anyway Checkin in....I'll prolly drop later cuz i gotta go somewhere tonite.
__________________
Abstract-is-Creativity..
†SaW† is offline  
Old 11-30-2006, 10:57 AM   #3 (permalink)
Banned
 
Join Date: Nov 2006
Posts: 186
uncle phil is an unknown quantity at this point
Default

Dood doesn't get girls... so then with that said
No girl i seen put mint n her mouth she'd rather have bad breath
Phil is well respect... by rappers gangsta and whores
they call you torment? well they call me mentor
I got it locked kid kill you... leave u in a pinned submission
n they'll have doctors from all over tryin to stabalize ment condition
wrote this in 10 seconds.. serious though im knowin you will flop
you movin UP in the ranks dawg?
yeah you are... coz im goin straight to the top
bullets'll leave dood in seizures really on the ground buggin
if not he'll be hidin in a hole next to Amishstad's cousin

last line refers to amishstad hes arab... keystyle
uncle phil is offline  
Old 11-30-2006, 11:12 AM   #4 (permalink)
Capo
 
†SaW†'s Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Woodland Ave.....Body Count
Posts: 887
†SaW† is an unknown quantity at this point†SaW† is an unknown quantity at this point†SaW† is an unknown quantity at this point†SaW† is an unknown quantity at this point
Send a message via Yahoo to †SaW†
Default

hmm quick keystyle aight peep it~

..Look your life is at stake/steak, like beef wit Vampires,
don't Sign-in, just leave Phil Logged-out like weak-Campfires..
..Nicca i pulled ur girl-thread, until i Tell-her/Tailor-Fast
Cuz like Clips-of-Garbage, dis kid verse is Trailer-Trash..
..Gettin these easy wins, all-weak/week like 7-days,
so you beatin me ?, nah just losin in eleven-ways..
..Off the head keystyle, givin my keyboard-props,
Cuz i gymnastic-sandles, but his style been flip-Flop..lol
..Therefore fuck his family, and take this quick-kill,
Cuz tor so sick, ima takeout uncle n call Dr. Phil....Eazy

lol Next....and Uppin
__________________
Abstract-is-Creativity..
†SaW† is offline  
Old 11-30-2006, 08:17 PM   #5 (permalink)
Wherewolves
 
Robert Are's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Scream Phoenix, AZ
Posts: 20,012
Robert Are has a reputation beyond reputeRobert Are has a reputation beyond reputeRobert Are has a reputation beyond reputeRobert Are has a reputation beyond reputeRobert Are has a reputation beyond reputeRobert Are has a reputation beyond reputeRobert Are has a reputation beyond reputeRobert Are has a reputation beyond reputeRobert Are has a reputation beyond reputeRobert Are has a reputation beyond reputeRobert Are has a reputation beyond repute
Send a message via AIM to Robert Are
Default

Dood doesn't get girls... so then with that said
No girl i seen put mint n her mouth she'd rather have bad breath
Shouldve spelt 'mint' as 'ment'...bet nobody sees this one, I do though..Nice line
Phil is well respect... by rappers gangsta and whores
they call you torment? well they call me mentor
Nice punch,better wording wouldve made this better though
I got it locked kid kill you... leave u in a pinned submission
n they'll have doctors from all over tryin to stabalize ment condition
Nice wordplay
wrote this in 10 seconds.. serious though im knowin you will flop
you movin UP in the ranks dawg?
yeah you are... coz im goin straight to the top
Lol...Im stupid...took me a sec to get this...
bullets'll leave dood in seizures really on the ground buggin
if not he'll be hidin in a hole next to Amishstad's cousin
Nice closer...

Uncle Phil: 9/10


..Look your life is at stake/steak, like beef wit Vampires,
don't Sign-in, just leave Phil Logged-out like weak-Campfires..
Better wording wouldve improved this
..Nicca i pulled ur girl-thread, until i Tell-her/Tailor-Fast
Cuz like Clips-of-Garbage, dis kid verse is Trailer-Trash..
Shouldve flipped it around, second line to first etc..
..Gettin these easy wins, all-weak/week like 7-days,
so you beatin me ?, nah just losin in eleven-ways..
Eh...
..Off the head keystyle, givin my keyboard-props,
Cuz i gymnastic-sandles, but his style been flip-Flop..lol
Eh again..Ive heard alot of 'flip-flop' combos in battles
..Therefore fuck his family, and take this quick-kill,
Cuz tor so sick, ima takeout uncle n call Dr. Phil....Eazy
Not a good closer

Toment: 8/10


Phil got this for me cuz his verse was fresher, and he had very nice name/wordplays on Torment...Tor had nice lines, but his wording kind of messed em up, and his punches werent hard hitting
Robert Are is offline  
Old 12-01-2006, 10:25 AM   #6 (permalink)
Capo
 
†SaW†'s Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Woodland Ave.....Body Count
Posts: 887
†SaW† is an unknown quantity at this point†SaW† is an unknown quantity at this point†SaW† is an unknown quantity at this point†SaW† is an unknown quantity at this point
Send a message via Yahoo to †SaW†
Default

lol@ fresher...prolly my little cousin but thats another story w/e 0-1 uppin
__________________
Abstract-is-Creativity..
†SaW† is offline  
Old 12-01-2006, 11:52 AM   #7 (permalink)
Rap GodFather
 
Varcity's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: R.I.P STACK BUNDLEZ & CAVLAR
Posts: 7,276
Varcity has much to be proud ofVarcity has much to be proud ofVarcity has much to be proud ofVarcity has much to be proud ofVarcity has much to be proud ofVarcity has much to be proud ofVarcity has much to be proud ofVarcity has much to be proud ofVarcity has much to be proud ofVarcity has much to be proud ofVarcity has much to be proud of
Send a message via AIM to Varcity Send a message via Yahoo to Varcity
Default

this is a good battle..

WORDPLAY: BOTH
FLOW: BOTH
ENJOYMENT: BOTH


i think this was a tie..but if i had to vote i'll pick TOR,i was leaning to his side more on this battle,it was a great battle..i was gonna call this a tie but if you need a vote it'll goto TOR
__________________
RIP GRANDPA,FOREVER
Varcity is offline  
Old 12-01-2006, 11:55 AM   #8 (permalink)
Capo
 
†SaW†'s Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Woodland Ave.....Body Count
Posts: 887
†SaW† is an unknown quantity at this point†SaW† is an unknown quantity at this point†SaW† is an unknown quantity at this point†SaW† is an unknown quantity at this point
Send a message via Yahoo to †SaW†
Default

Hmm ties i hate to wear with suits lol. anyway umm it can be a tie or vote it's your choice. 2-1 Uncle way or 1-1 if it isn't a tie. eh
__________________
Abstract-is-Creativity..
†SaW† is offline  
Old 12-01-2006, 01:47 PM   #9 (permalink)
Don
 
Playa2K6's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: Dallas, Texas
Posts: 2,499
Playa2K6 will become famous soon enoughPlaya2K6 will become famous soon enoughPlaya2K6 will become famous soon enoughPlaya2K6 will become famous soon enoughPlaya2K6 will become famous soon enoughPlaya2K6 will become famous soon enoughPlaya2K6 will become famous soon enoughPlaya2K6 will become famous soon enoughPlaya2K6 will become famous soon enoughPlaya2K6 will become famous soon enoughPlaya2K6 will become famous soon enough
Default

Torment.
__________________
MAN!!! This blog is fucking hot: http://illestrealesttalk.wordpress.com/
Playa2K6 is offline  
Old 12-01-2006, 02:10 PM   #10 (permalink)
Capo
 
†SaW†'s Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Woodland Ave.....Body Count
Posts: 887
†SaW† is an unknown quantity at this point†SaW† is an unknown quantity at this point†SaW† is an unknown quantity at this point†SaW† is an unknown quantity at this point
Send a message via Yahoo to †SaW†
Default

umm Playa if you going to vote it has to be explained because i don't want any half-assed votes just for safe measure and not bullshit from Phil if he sees some vote like that. so if u could explain y u pick me and y u didn't pick phil it would be helpful.....aight
__________________
Abstract-is-Creativity..
†SaW† is offline  
Closed Thread

« Previous Thread | Next Thread »
Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On
Forum Jump


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 03:41 AM.
Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.7.4
Copyright ©2000 - 2009, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.



1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57