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Old 12-01-2006, 09:22 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Yo lets make this interesting and take it to 11 bars..only if you wid it,if you not,keep it at 5 aiiight....now who going first?
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Old 12-02-2006, 12:47 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Waiting 4 your check homie...
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Torr I aint droppin until you check in b,lets get this poppen
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Checkin in man......and just make it 5 bars don't feel like typin novels lol
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aiiigh,i'll try and get at this wen i get home,im in skool right now
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My bad for the stall..I'm home now so I'm checkin in now and I'll drop right after this...1
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Aight here's mine Peep it~

..Look your record 5-0, so he must deal wit that Cop-ish,
cuz battlin bunk-beds, Var still couldn't really Top-dis..
..Until ur brains blown in da dustpan, equip da Street-Sweeper,
or just leave "Metal" in ur middle-section, like a Trapper-Keeper..
..Cuz like Fishin-robots, i'll have Var Hooked-to-Machines,
Body parts tossed in da pot, until it's Cooked-to-Extreme..
..Varcity of wat? nicca ur whole career was by da Mas-cot,
so ima have ur feet-runnin, for bein "Nosey" like its Fast-Snot..
...He supports a cassidy Lunchbox, but ain't he from Harlem,
yea until my fist go "Hollywood", now his face met da "Star"dom..Eazy

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Buisy so quick drop....


I "aim" without the toothpaste,even among those--
Last time I seen an "EL"(L) my "WAY".."JOHN" was playing with the "Broncos"--(get it? John Elway)

"Life disappear" I'm a "reeper" with magic,my written's the truth--
My flow's "evident",enough to bring 'Joseph Ward' back,so now they calling me "Living Proof"--(get it?)

Without "internet connection" I'm "Net" ZERO(no losses),so why risk pitty yo?--
The way I "runaway" with this win,I should'a featured in that "ludacris" video--

If you FILL(feel) froggy,then LEE(P),enough with the battling--
He claims S.W.P..which stands for 'S'uckers 'W'ith 'P'assion-- (look at his location)

I "murder words",call me a "predicate" felon,I enjoy the rukus--
I'll leave MENT TOR(N) in between the 2 like Latoya Luckett--

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Gud shit..bumpin for vooootes...
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Varcity:

Quote:
I "aim" without the toothpaste
WTF!! who needs toothpaste to aim ???? that shit had me laughin man...

Yea dude a lot of lines just werent connectin at all...
you had some forced wordplay that was unbareable...


Quote:
If you FILL(feel) froggy,then LEE(P),enough with the battling--
that set up was garbage! do you ever feel froggy V? do ya?

you had no good punches, any wordplay you attempted
was lame and extremely forced. and flow was off
Better wording AND choice
of words would do you swell lad.

Torment:

Structured way better I see, flow was on point.
I didnt like your punches as well, they werent
well thought of

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..Until ur brains blown in da dustpan, equip da Street-Sweeper,
or just leave "Metal" in ur middle-section, like a Trapper-Keeper..
its really wording, and the direction you aimed the punch wasnt
a good one. it landed on a weak concept, you can tell this was keyed...

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..Cuz like Fishin-robots, i'll have Var Hooked-to-Machines,
Body parts tossed in da pot, until it's Cooked-to-Extreme..
best line if your verse, it has mad potential to be dope though.

overall this was a weak battle. Cats should not
key verses so much, when there is no rush.
Really just take your time next time both of you,
and Im sure you can drop some impressive punches.

Ima go with Tor on this one, his structure, flow, and
less lame and embarressing wordplay was used. I
wasnt feelin Var's punches at all. plus he needs toothpaste
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