Sureloc Holmes~~vs.~~G-Rated

[G-Rated]

6 bars...

3-0 KO...

4-1 TKO...

Explained Votes Only...

[Robert Are]

checkin in...didnt see the thread..Im eatin dinner, but Ima be back on to drop my verse...

[G-Rated]

Aight kool...Im bout to roll out, Ill drop when I get back to tha crib...Prolly be around 5 am or sum shit lol...Good Luck

[Robert Are]

*clears throat* Lemme think...

No spine like exoskeletons...but he accepted, might give em props for that
Thoughts are senseless, pennies fall out when I hit you with a copper bat
Im sick of ya highlights hoe, and ya fancy colors...I say I might shout
G write in capitals...like he was sending complaints to the white house(think)
Cuz I get no respect on this site, behind closed doors that I found shut
Not scarin me, no charity but feedback not gon build Holmes from ground up
Might wanna feed yaself 1st, no jabs punches or impacting hooks
Cuz I'll leave this whole page 'read' like the past tense of cracking books
Ya whole squad is dumb, thinkin they can beat me with obscene swirls
imagination gettin the best..God Knowles ya'll should rename to DreamGirls
Not on my top list, Disney gone bad...while he miss jabs like a late spar
Less than porn, but like Unidentified Dying Objects, he stay under the rate-r


Sumthin quick..Good luck...Im sure someone will find somethin to say about my verse discrediting it completely and everyone will agree..But hey! Go Ahead!

[G-Rated]

Lil Keystyle....

....Good Drop but Look....


Sureloc's "garbage", so like a "wasted" gymnast he'll take this fall
This kid rides Uncle Phil's dick so much, he can taste tha cholesteral

Ayo..I surpass this ho, this bitch "gassed" up like "gastro" flows
He aint "passin" me tha "L" like Snoop's last blaze after shows

Sureloc's a Mexi-chump, a Cesar Chavez monk...ya records in a slump
Kuz Look son...You still aint "beatin G-Rated" if ya was "Cinderella" drunk

Say..This lame kid is defective & like bad transplants he'll get rejected
Ya swagga's ineffective...He jacked his name from a detective

This niggas tha maggot-type...Admires Amish, so he's tha faggot-type
Look...Im "Big Ten" division and my "pens state" is braggin writes

So Listen up kid...The nature of this "wind" is guarenteed to ruin ya day
Kuz my spits are like "tornado's" & piece of shit holmes get carried away



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[Amishstad]

Sureloc Holmes

No spine like exoskeletons...but he accepted, might give em props for that
Thoughts are senseless, pennies fall out when I hit you with a copper bat
Average opener, no diss really..
Im sick of ya highlights hoe, and ya fancy colors...I say I might shout
G write in capitals...like he was sending complaints to the white house(think)
Pretty cool flip, if it was worded better this would've been sick
Cuz I get no respect on this site, behind closed doors that I found shut
Not scarin me, no charity but feedback not gon build Holmes from ground up
not a diss at all
Might wanna feed yaself 1st, no jabs punches or impacting hooks
Cuz I'll leave this whole page 'read' like the past tense of cracking books
dope punch
Ya whole squad is dumb, thinkin they can beat me with obscene swirls
imagination gettin the best..God Knowles ya'll should rename to DreamGirls
good punch again
Not on my top list, Disney gone bad...while he miss jabs like a late spar
Less than porn, but like Unidentified Dying Objects, he stay under the rate-r
wack man, didnt like this one at all.

had a couple good lines the rest were filler or werent worded
well enough to connect a good punch.

Sureloc's "garbage", so like a "wasted" gymnast he'll take this fall
This kid rides Uncle Phil's dick so much, he can taste tha cholesteral
that was fuckin gross but dope punch
Ayo..I surpass this ho, this bitch "gassed" up like "gastro" flows
He aint "passin" me tha "L" like Snoop's last blaze after shows
the multi and concept connection hit nicely
Sureloc's a Mexi-chump, a Cesar Chavez monk...ya records in a slump
Kuz Look son...You still aint "beatin G-Rated" if ya was "Cinderella" drunk
you should've chose something better then cinderella drunk,
would've been a sick punch here.
Say..This lame kid is defective & like bad transplants he'll get rejected
Ya swagga's ineffective...He jacked his name from a detective
nice set up but weak punch
This niggas tha maggot-type...Admires Amish, so he's tha faggot-type
Look...Im "Big Ten" division and my "pens state" is braggin writes
dope shit here
So Listen up kid...The nature of this "wind" is guarenteed to ruin ya day
Kuz my spits are like "tornado's" & piece of shit holmes get carried away
dope punch, really monotonous to use in my opinion but still a nice flip

overall a good battle

Vote G Rated

his consistantcy and overall strenght of his verse
took this easy. Holmes had nice concepts but needed
to revise and rethink his lines more. good show yall

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[G-Rated]

Thanks for the breakdown Amish....

VOTE UP....

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[Anonymous]

seems reall even both wrote some sick verses... but like amish said, G was more consistant, and i think sureloc had fillers with "Cuz I get no respect on this site, behind closed doors that I found shut
Not scarin me, no charity but feedback not gon build Holmes from ground up"
strong battle, in my opinion both y'all won

vote: G-Rated

[Illustration]

A tough call here..normally I break down bar for bar..but I'm strapped for time...

Sureloc - Man I've seen you around somewhere..besides BragginWrites..but your style is similar to mine..witty punches mixed with some dope concepts..and thats what you had..that 'pennies/copper bat' line was real dope..loved that...the 'dreamgirls' and the 'read' lines were real fresh concepts..and that 'rate-r' line was alrite..wordplay kinda was forced a tad in that closer..but definitely nice...

Best line = Cuz I'll leave this whole page 'read' like the past tense of cracking books

G-Rated - A very similar style man...however..lose the quotes around the wordplay..if the reader can't see the idea you're throwing around..then they should stop texting all together..a few here and there are okay...but not the whole verse..that doesn't lose points..anywho..the 'Dr. Phil' line had me crackin up..the 'detective' line was also a dope nameplay..as was your closer...that 'tornado' line was insane..however..the only flaw I saw was some forced wordplay..but again..thats no downfall..

Best line = Kuz my spits are like "tornado's" & piece of shit holmes get carried away

RESULTS...this was a tough call for me...cause both of you were evenly matched as far as bars go..the only major differences came with some forced wordplay for G..and an unnecessary braggin' line from Sureloc..that 'ground up' line may have been dope..but it wasn't hittin...and that was the only downside...I'm not voting a tie...but the way I saw it...G held ONE more consistent line than you man..

Vote = G-Rated...

I wanna see a rematch cause this shit was dope..

N return the fave if you can in my battle against Coldest...

[Robert Are]

thats a great breakdown man....props to you and a good battle to G-Rated...we will have to do some shit later, cuz I still havent beat you!