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Wreck · 12-09-2006, 03:11 AM

aiight i wasnt on at all during the week to reply to this but nice verse, heres mine, is gona be one of my final battles or my final if that:

sticks and stones can break wreck's bones but you can't stop me with this nice shit
now all alone on the throne, i jab coldest ice (cold as ice) and attack em with the icepick

label me the king like t.i., dispose of all the evidence
throw away fake ice cube like hes taxes, faxes and bills, but forget about dead presidents

hip hop is dead but the spirit lives within me in my apartment
while im fighting the overpaid, underboss veteran, words minute unlike his body like of eric cartman

so while im gone, sean comb ya hair with my gold coins
and run all over ya as if cold was the runway for a rolls royce'

bar 2 line 2: they have the dead presidents on money, just to clarify that

VOTES

Wreck · 12-09-2006, 06:15 AM

votess

South Up · 12-09-2006, 06:20 AM

im goin wit coldest..wreck your bars werent bad but tha length difference between your 1st line and 2nd line in your first 3 bars kinda threw off tha flow..neither of you spit anything amazing but coldest had a few nice concepts wit tha wreck/recreation and tha theme about wreck's mom thru his whole verse...on tha flipside wreck had some good play on tha cold concept..but it wasnt anything new...

so my vote: coldest

good battle tho..wreck just work on keeping your bars tha same length...not just text length but around tha same syllable length too..coldest..you been round here long nuff you know what it is, just keep doin what you do

go vote on me vs. anonymous!!

Wreck · 12-09-2006, 06:24 AM

aiight thanks for the vote south up, 1-0 coldest

Anonymous · 12-09-2006, 11:37 AM

wreck.. your flow is off and i couldn't find the rhythm to your verse, work on that, its also because you got too much to say, me thinks lol..
coldest: i know you drop fire, but i didn't see anything amazing with this verse, like south i like how you used his name, maybe you can help me incorporate that in my verses.. lol

my vote: coldest

The Coldest · 12-09-2006, 01:25 PM

lol maybe n uppin 2-0

12-09-2006, 01:25 PM	#16 (permalink)
The Coldest Don Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: the dirty Posts: 2,052	lol maybe n uppin 2-0 __________________ alot of cats saying they do, but do the opposite, im a real stand up guy, they just opt to sit

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12-09-2006, 03:11 AM	#11 (permalink)
Wreck Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: jerseyyyyyy, 11-10 Battle Record Posts: 7,508	aiight i wasnt on at all during the week to reply to this but nice verse, heres mine, is gona be one of my final battles or my final if that: sticks and stones can break wreck's bones but you can't stop me with this nice shit now all alone on the throne, i jab coldest ice (cold as ice) and attack em with the icepick label me the king like t.i., dispose of all the evidence throw away fake ice cube like hes taxes, faxes and bills, but forget about dead presidents hip hop is dead but the spirit lives within me in my apartment while im fighting the overpaid, underboss veteran, words minute unlike his body like of eric cartman so while im gone, sean comb ya hair with my gold coins and run all over ya as if cold was the runway for a rolls royce' bar 2 line 2: they have the dead presidents on money, just to clarify that VOTES

12-09-2006, 06:15 AM	#12 (permalink)
Wreck Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: jerseyyyyyy, 11-10 Battle Record Posts: 7,508	votess

12-09-2006, 06:20 AM	#13 (permalink)
South Up Banned Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: The Struggle Posts: 21,091	im goin wit coldest..wreck your bars werent bad but tha length difference between your 1st line and 2nd line in your first 3 bars kinda threw off tha flow..neither of you spit anything amazing but coldest had a few nice concepts wit tha wreck/recreation and tha theme about wreck's mom thru his whole verse...on tha flipside wreck had some good play on tha cold concept..but it wasnt anything new... so my vote: coldest good battle tho..wreck just work on keeping your bars tha same length...not just text length but around tha same syllable length too..coldest..you been round here long nuff you know what it is, just keep doin what you do go vote on me vs. anonymous!!

12-09-2006, 06:24 AM	#14 (permalink)
Wreck Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: jerseyyyyyy, 11-10 Battle Record Posts: 7,508	aiight thanks for the vote south up, 1-0 coldest

12-09-2006, 11:37 AM	#15 (permalink)
Anonymous Thug Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 238	wreck.. your flow is off and i couldn't find the rhythm to your verse, work on that, its also because you got too much to say, me thinks lol.. coldest: i know you drop fire, but i didn't see anything amazing with this verse, like south i like how you used his name, maybe you can help me incorporate that in my verses.. lol my vote: coldest