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12-03-2006, 04:17 PM
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Outlaw
Join Date: Oct 2006
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NawnCentz..|vs|..Illustration
hmmm... lets go 8 bars.. ok?? due by tuesday night at 12 pm
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12-03-2006, 04:21 PM
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Capo
Join Date: Nov 2006
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By Tuesday? I'll do mine later tonight....I don't need more than 10 minutes...
Consider this my check-in..Ima wish you luck before your own funeral...
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12-05-2006, 11:49 PM
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Outlaw
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Brooklyn, New York.. Get @ Me..
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I’ll hit’cha, prick! & I might even stick yah bitch,
But wait…someone take a picture…QUICK!- Cause I found Ill Avoiding My Text worse than Fantasia before being exposed as Illiterate !! I move quick, write piff, with my chosen, dope pen, Leave you frozen after this punch, close in, so- Nawn’ll Leave Illustration In Ruins without a reference to An Artist At Stone Henge !! I’ll bust beams & got a chain the size’a elephant tusk gleamin’, I crush demons, and it’s funny- This dude’s a Freddy Krueger Rapper…He’s Just Dreamin’ !! I accepted your challenge, & you stressin’, I got punches, for yah chin, & chest man, so- In this battle, I’ll Murder With A Watch..To prove you’ll be Dead, In A Second !! I’m Off The Top, like Bangs & Curls..my verse Shinin‘ like my Games A Pearl , You keep Taking In Nuts, this Lames’a Squirrel- & I bet this Kid Is So Fat, when Switchin’ Clothes..he Change The World !! Countinous punches ‘till you lost yah heart bitch, But honestly, you better of Not Showin’, Illustration- ………..like a Cautious Artist !! I’ll give this man l’s…packed with bullets & shells, Mess around? & I’ll CeaseYour Life, From The Beginning- Quicker than Julius’ Bio on the History Channel !! (CeaseYour=Caesar OMG) RGF don’t feel yah great….give’em the Cold Shoulder & Chill Yah Face, So if we were Sounding Out Your Name- ………..only time I say IllIsStraight !! Thanks For Trying Tho !! Signed, …NawnCentz…
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12-05-2006, 11:54 PM
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Thug
Join Date: Nov 2006
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wow..... ill drop some fire or you lose... vote on my battles please
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12-06-2006, 12:35 AM
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Capo
Join Date: Nov 2006
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Did you go 16...or 27?!?! No matter..I'ma make this one interesting..g'luck man...
I can flip a nameplay on you...but f'real..I'd rather try to loop thru a bar... Cause if Nawn's in the 'galaxy'..then all I gotta do is shoot for the 'star'... You're far from hard..and how many other cats will try to flip that name?... So take a 'picture' of this place..before I fuckin' rip you from your 'frame'... I'll give you somethin' to ponder..grab ya crew n I'll tear thru ya roster... Just know I'ma make your name go up in flames like Woodstock concerts... Fuck a nameplay or a personal..you're juss another fag on this site... That thought you were 'cool' as soon as I beat you with a bag of ice... Don't try fuckin' with me..cause honestly..I'm like nothin' you've seen... Ill murder you while you sleep..just call me the crusher of dreams... You'll catch some dickryde votes..I'm bein honest..people r hatin' on it.. They all know Nawn's 'ego trip' is so big..he can fuckin 'vacation' on it.. Watch me shatter your undefeated record..n slowly climb to the top... Gettin' Nawn so wound up..he'll find himself tied in a knot... You're everything I expected...a girl, a pussy, a bitch, and a whore... You stopped runnin your mouth as soon as your lips hit the floor...
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12-06-2006, 12:50 AM
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Join Date: Jan 2006
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This is hard cuz both we're completely different...in styles and content..
Nawn had alot of boasting type rhymes, hyping himself up, while Ill had a str8 up attacking verse.. Nawn: You had some lines that I'd heard before (i.e.- Freddy Kruger..dead in a second...Also, I felt like your format kind of messed up your verse as a whole..you executed better in your last couple battles..Here, your lines, even in a different format, were stretched, which messed up your flow Illustration: You went in attacking directly...You didnt have any of those "OMG, that was a killa"-type lines, but you went in attacking, no self hype. You also had some nice punches scattered throughout your verse, I think your best was the 'vacation' line...I know you probably been doing this for a while, but I think you should work on making harder hitting punches...Becuz you had nice lines everywhere, but only a couple were hard, the rest were like hard hitting ish..a few more tweaks wouldve made em harder ================================================== ======= VOTE: Illustration Why?...Cuz Nawn had lines that Ive seen before, and plus, I felt he kinda strayed from dissing Ill head on, he had nameplays, but they werent very hard or nuthin...And his flow threw me off alot
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12-06-2006, 07:33 AM
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Outlaw
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Brooklyn, New York.. Get @ Me..
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you are an idiot... smh
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12-06-2006, 07:43 AM
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Don
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Elkhart, dat C.O.E niggas...
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I'll vote after school..
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12-06-2006, 11:13 AM
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Capo
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Woodland Ave.....Body Count
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(..NawnCents..)
I’ll hit’cha, prick! & I might even stick yah bitch, But wait…someone take a picture…QUICK!- Cause I found Ill Avoiding My Text worse than Fantasia before being exposed as Illiterate !! ^^ hmm ok concept but not a good opener as much I move quick, write piff, with my chosen, dope pen, Leave you frozen after this punch, close in, so- Nawn’ll Leave Illustration In Ruins without a reference to An Artist At Stone Henge !! ^^ good stone line I’ll bust beams & got a chain the size’a elephant tusk gleamin’, I crush demons, and it’s funny- This dude’s a Freddy Krueger Rapper…He’s Just Dreamin’ !! ^^ nah that freddy line was weak...be more creative I accepted your challenge, & you stressin’, I got punches, for yah chin, & chest man, so- In this battle, I’ll Murder With A Watch..To prove you’ll be Dead, In A Second !! ^^ ok concept....but lets see some creative twist man I’m Off The Top, like Bangs & Curls..my verse Shinin‘ like my Games A Pearl , You keep Taking In Nuts, this Lames’a Squirrel- & I bet this Kid Is So Fat, when Switchin’ Clothes..he Change The World !! ^^ last line was weak but i felt the flow and wordplay nicely done Countinous punches ‘till you lost yah heart bitch, But honestly, you better of Not Showin’, Illustration- ………..like a Cautious Artist !! ^^ wats wit all these decorations and dots lol...good bar but eh I’ll give this man l’s…packed with bullets & shells, Mess around? & I’ll CeaseYour Life, From The Beginning- Quicker than Julius’ Bio on the History Channel !! (CeaseYour=Caesar OMG) ^^ hmm ok good bar RGF don’t feel yah great….give’em the Cold Shoulder & Chill Yah Face, So if we were Sounding Out Your Name- ………..only time I say IllIsStraight !! ^^ lol good closer 8.5/10 (Illustration) I can flip a nameplay on you...but f'real..I'd rather try to loop thru a bar... Cause if Nawn's in the 'galaxy'..then all I gotta do is shoot for the 'star'... ^^ eh nah wasn't feelin this bar You're far from hard..and how many other cats will try to flip that name?... So take a 'picture' of this place..before I fuckin' rip you from your 'frame'... ^^ filler I'll give you somethin' to ponder..grab ya crew n I'll tear thru ya roster... Just know I'ma make your name go up in flames like Woodstock concerts... ^^ good concept but less creative approach i'm seeing..dull Fuck a nameplay or a personal..you're juss another fag on this site... That thought you were 'cool' as soon as I beat you with a bag of ice... ^^ wtf.....wow nice filler Don't try fuckin' with me..cause honestly..I'm like nothin' you've seen... Ill murder you while you sleep..just call me the crusher of dreams... ^^ are you serious ????? You'll catch some dickryde votes..I'm bein honest..people r hatin' on it.. They all know Nawn's 'ego trip' is so big..he can fuckin 'vacation' on it.. ^^ last line was ok Watch me shatter your undefeated record..n slowly climb to the top... Gettin' Nawn so wound up..he'll find himself tied in a knot... ^^ once again good concepts but ur depth isn't reaching the creative points man You're everything I expected...a girl, a pussy, a bitch, and a whore... You stopped runnin your mouth as soon as your lips hit the floor... ^^.............weak closer 7.9/10 Flow: Nawn Personals:Nawn more attempts Mulitis: blah Wordplay: Nawn Punches: Nawn Creativity: Nawn better usage approach Enjoyment: tie Overall: Nawn...for better concepts Nawn: even though you won, still you have to fix your new structure thats killin some of your lines into some jumble gym or some shit. Other than that your flow is fine and wordplay is good and just try to elevate better creative approaches aight. Ill: your verse ok for a freestyle in a open mic, because honestly that wasn't really a battle verse in my eyes. Don't worry though man even though u keep seein some of are linse you seen before is maybe quite true but the fact of the matter is that your lines are just basic as my cable channels. So you have to work on your in-depth creative puches and use them for good concept attempts aight. Good battle toward both challengers~
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12-06-2006, 11:37 AM
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Capo
Join Date: Nov 2006
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Alrite hold on there Tor..I appreciate the vote and all..but do you NOT know what a multi is? I had plenty 'loop thru the bar/shoot for the star'..'fag on this site/bag of ice'...'fuckin with me/nuthin you've seen/crusher of dreams'...
Thats juss complete horseshit if you ask me..cause for some reason..you don't know how to read punchlines or understand concepts..cause if you think the 'rip you out the frame' is a filler..or the 'beat with a bag ice' is..then you just proved to me you are a RETARD... It stands 1-0 me...cause you need to learn how to read punches...
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