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12-03-2006, 04:34 PM
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Wherewolves
 
Join Date: Jan 2006
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Anonymous [VS] Sureloc Holmes
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Check in...Verses due in 24 after you check *consider this my check* First to 5 Votes (3-0 Auto KO) Voting open for 3 days after both verses drops, whoever got the most votes after those 3 days wins Breakdowns appreciated No biting Flipping Recycling shit Good Luck, I'll drop in a few minutes
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12-03-2006, 07:08 PM
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Wherewolves
Join Date: Jan 2006
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No homo as he froze total, take him on a verbal ride and he love it
Its funny his username is what authors use to hide from the public! Loc is metal, cant break me cuz I'll leave this wack whore dead Gay ass like Tyra Banks, fag is real big on it and he'll do anything for(e) head! When I see your lines...its like a river cuz run rhymes dry Bars are like the vowels in his name...'o' 'u' suck and sumtimes 'y'! Go ahead and recycle...save the earth and throw em in a trash heap At least now they'll know you, cuz like vinyl on a butt, ya got ya ass beat! Good Luck
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12-03-2006, 11:20 PM
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Thug
Join Date: Nov 2006
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just cuz you jacked sureloc doesn't make you brilliant/
i'll make you feel stupid, have you bawl like an infant/ there is always a revolution, something all kings had to endure/ just cuz your king of the cage doesn't lock(loc) your battles for sure/ homes(holmes), i'll have you shitting and pissing till your pampers leak/ your the type of nigga who isn't achocol related, but still eager to streak/ they showed ya mama's vagina but blurred your ugly face/ if FOX had shown it, big lawsuit and one hell of a case/ tried not to topic it.. lol |
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12-04-2006, 12:26 AM
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Wherewolves
Join Date: Jan 2006
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uh...votes beyotches!!!
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12-04-2006, 01:22 AM
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Don
Join Date: Jun 2006
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sureloc- came at em n every bar... nice wordplay etc.
anon last bar lost me didnt get it n some of it was jus... not really hard hittin vote sureloc
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12-04-2006, 10:40 AM
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Capo
Join Date: Jun 2006
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weak battle.... but umm
surloc: ur verse was more entertaining and had some good concepts Anonymous: keep working on your bars and concepts man your gettin better by each battle. Vote: Holmes
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12-04-2006, 10:43 AM
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Capo
Join Date: Nov 2006
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Again..another good battle..
Sureloc - Definitely the verse I expected from you...not like your verse against Rowe..you brought punchline after punchline..that 'hide from the public' line was EASILY the dopest of your verse..that 'tyra banks' line was dope..been flipped before but thats real nice..the 'vowels' line was decent..and the closer was alrite... Anon - You DEFINITELY dropped the topical style for this one..and you definitely improved...however..you did lack a little creativity in some of your lines..the 'lock/king of the cage' line was pretty good..but that 'alcohol' line had me rollin..the closer was pretty decent as well..but I wish you coulda squeezed that concept into one line.. In the end...this battle wasn't as one-sided as I though..Anon came with a MUCH better verse..and did have some pretty good shit..however..Loc edged him in the punchline department..that 'public/authors' line was dope as fuck..and was enough to hold off Anonymous.. Vote = Sureloc.. Anon..keep improving man...
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