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12-03-2006, 04:59 PM
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Wherewolves
 
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Sureloc Holmes [VS] Amishstad {REMATCH=CLASSIC ISH}
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No KO Rule... Voting open for 3 days after both drop First to 5 votes. or whoever has most votes after 3 days After you check in...verse is due in 48 hours Breakdowns {OR VOTES DONT COUNT} -Punches -Flow -Creativity -Metaphors -Multis -Enjoyment Good Luck....Consider this my check in 
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12-03-2006, 05:04 PM
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Capo
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Chicago, IL
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checkin in.
you should edit that to a no ko rule. the voting here sucks and we both know it well. it needs to go a full 5. bring the heat man. and no use of picutres. i dont have yours to diss. |
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12-03-2006, 11:00 PM
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Wherewolves
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Yo rhymes miss the spot...But mine will make Klarishna cough
Amish think he better than Loc?pfffff...  This hoe's got them candy bars, but how can you even blame him? Thats all he ate when he was ina hole with Unc Osama durin terrorist trainin! Stumbled onto the Fathers like an orphan, wack with an even worse buzz Amishstad? Amish dad got more bombs than his son's entire verse does! Stop your feedback...couldnt give me heat if you sent me the missles Ya pointers are makin me SHIT like you added I-T to the end of my initials! I see him with his choo-choo lines...but the end is like dissing aloof I got loco motives...but Amish's train of thought is missing caboose! Im insisting the truth...he forcing the issue, we should ban jestors Cuz he got more forced vows to kill than his damn ancestors! Must have rubber gloves on while typing...he cause static hardly Cuz Amish is more afraid of G's votes than the Democratic Party! Amish should be dominating all, so I'll kill you so you might do fine in Heaven And you'd think he could get through plain lines...I mean, he plotted 9/11! Good Luck...If you dont get anything...then just say so in your breakdowns...
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12-05-2006, 01:48 AM
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Capo
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Born a poor fag, Loc's fam cant afford jack n live on a patch of ground Lucky if they even give you their time, but even thats a hand-me-down You hot? Please,You drop knees to Amish, just check his Mag I wouldnt try to "rip it", you'll just drop trash like thin Hefty bags Wreck this fag, thrash a blitzkreig to this dick fiend's main arteries You wont have presense in your "sixteen", like ALL your birthday parties! You couldnt "rape" with words, a win wont just happen, I'm dope rappin' I got "offensive lines" that "touch down", pussy! like Penn State's Scott Paxon! You crazy to step, get ya heart ripped when I spark splifs n spit genius.... It's obvious too see your close to "nuts"..when Loc's been on Am's penis Loc on my team? You the handicap and bad at rap; no! but thanks No crew would pick you, not even a squad of thiefs heisting banks Holmes is down in ranks, losin in battles cause he's always lackin'.... ..Any "sense" in his vereses---to even receive an allergic reaction I give props for your 63 battles,But Know how Loc "came" up with them lines? Cause Loc is "outstanding"...with a cardboard sign saying "i fuck for rhymes" **if any explinations are needed please ask** |
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12-05-2006, 01:50 AM
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Banned
Join Date: Nov 2006
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hey sureloc what u get for your b day. A wii or what
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12-05-2006, 01:53 AM
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Capo
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Chicago, IL
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nigga get the fuck outta here with that mundane
small talk. pm him for that. not in battle thread son. Go drop your verse on OUR battle! VOTES!! |
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12-05-2006, 02:12 AM
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Don
Join Date: Nov 2006
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 I assuming amishstad is of middle eastern decent or something from the look of locs verse. If so then you hit him hard with personals even if they were racist jokes lol. I was enjoying amish's verse more though, just seemed more creative. I think Loc needs to work on his set ups. They're kinda lame. Quote:
Best verse Ive seen from amish...here I was thinkin duke was kinda weak but hes better than I thought and from the looks of it you underestimated his skills as well Loc. Loc u needa up your multis Cough.. Off... Him... Trainin... get some inner multis and multiple syllable multis goin..same with you too Amish..but when you started off you had some straight double word multis.. hefty bag..check the mag...good shit.. Multis - Amish.. Personals - I wanna give this to Loc, as long as amish's middle eastern.. Punches - Amish Wordplay - Amish Enjoyment/Creativity - Amish.. Flow...Tie Amish gets the vote....pce
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12-05-2006, 03:13 AM
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Capo
Join Date: Nov 2006
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im not middle eastern.
im mexican. but yea. thanks for the vote uppin |
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12-05-2006, 09:15 AM
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I enjoyed reading both drops...Sureloc's entire verse was a build-up to his last bar, very creative...Nice punches, flow, personals & you had some dope concepts...From the start you came direct & continued with the creative wordplay & meta's...Sureloc's drop exercised the mind & was more indepth than Amish's...Amish's opener was a nice concept, but his wording did not allow that hard hit...The Hefty line was very crafty & was your best line in the entire drop...The "sixteen" play would have been a creative concept, if Loc was turning 16...And since you quoted him, you should have made this a factual play...Amish had the usual fillers & self-hype in his bars...And your closer was weak...Sureloc's closer put the icing on the cake...It was what he worked up to & it was nice...
Punches: Sureloc [more indepth concepts] Flow: Both Creativity: Sureloc Metas: Sureloc Multis: Sureloc [Amish had NO multies] Personals: Sureloc Wordplay: Both Enjoyment: Both My Vote: Sureloc Good Job to Both...
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12-05-2006, 11:19 AM
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Outlaw
Join Date: Nov 2006
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This hoe's got them candy bars, but how can you even blame him?
Thats all he ate when he was ina hole with Unc Osama durin terrorist trainin! - was alright lol Stumbled onto the Fathers like an orphan, wack with an even worse buzz Amishstad? Amish dad got more bombs than his son's entire verse does! - was ok... Stop your feedback...couldnt give me heat if you sent me the missles Ya pointers are makin me SHIT like you added I-T to the end of my initials! - lol pretty funny I see him with his choo-choo lines...but the end is like dissing aloof I got loco motives...but Amish's train of thought is missing caboose! - eh was ok Im insisting the truth...he forcing the issue, we should ban jestors Cuz he got more forced vows to kill than his damn ancestors! - didn't make me laugh... Must have rubber gloves on while typing...he cause static hardly Cuz Amish is more afraid of G's votes than the Democratic Party! - filler sounding... Amish should be dominating all, so I'll kill you so you might do fine in Heaven And you'd think he could get through plain lines...I mean, he plotted 9/11! - lmfao ok this was a hard punch overall. sureloc had structure but shit was pretty weak to me his best line was his last... let's see Amishes shit Born a poor fag, Loc's fam cant afford jack n live on a patch of ground Lucky if they even give you their time, but even thats a hand-me-down - creative wordplay on that You hot? Please,You drop knees to Amish, just check his Mag I wouldnt try to "rip it", you'll just drop trash like thin Hefty bags - good simile but just the 2nd line was hot. Wreck this fag, thrash a blitzkreig to this dick fiend's main arteries You wont have presense in your "sixteen", like ALL your birthday parties! - dope with the syllables I liked it still a filler You couldnt "rape" with words, a win wont just happen, I'm dope rappin' I got "offensive lines" that "touch down", pussy! like Penn State's Scott Paxon! - Oooh damn that was ill lol using ppl outside in sports that was nice. You crazy to step, get ya heart ripped when I spark splifs n spit genius.... It's obvious too see your close to "nuts"..when Loc's been on Am's penis - filler and played 2nd line Loc on my team? You the handicap and bad at rap; no! but thanks No crew would pick you, not even a squad of thiefs heisting banks - idk about bank heisting needs an explaination but surely has to have one. Holmes is down in ranks, losin in battles cause he's always lackin'.... ..Any "sense" in his vereses---to even receive an allergic reaction - filler... I give props for your 63 battles,But Know how Loc "came" up with them lines? Cause Loc is "outstanding"...with a cardboard sign saying "i fuck for rhymes" - hard punch with the wordplay and slighty personal. Amish had a nice flow structure and nice syllable structure and that made the effectiveness in his lines to sound doper if Loc had that he could get a better chance to win this but... Vote = AMISH |
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