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Old 12-04-2006, 11:50 PM   #1 (permalink)
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ima get at you tomorrow...

4 bars
no dickride
explain votes
3-0 KO
4-1 TKO

this time you drop first... nvm.. i'll do it

if your a younggunna, im a veteran child soldier/
i'll fuse your gun barrels together with lead solder/(40% tin, 60% lead)
hold up, you called your self a gunna? nah brother/
the only thing you popped was popcorn in november/
adding Shakespeare, Will add punch to any line/
YG, can't see, that lyrically i commit murder crimes/
it doesn't matter what TIME, doesn't matter NIGHT or DAY/
i can out do you in MULTIS, PERSONALS, PUNCHES, or WORDPLAY/

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Old 12-05-2006, 11:28 AM   #2 (permalink)
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bumping for YG...
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Old 12-05-2006, 07:31 PM   #3 (permalink)
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yeah 8 hours ago i bumped this... drop man... i'm making deadline wednesday 12 pm more than enough time
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Old 12-05-2006, 09:18 PM   #4 (permalink)
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stay Anonymous, jus dont show ya face like its Friday the 13th and you Jason Voorhees
you need to get away from this close combat so get the lead, ill kill you any were it aint gotta be Overseas

I make you go looney like the toons on tv ,itull take more then night goggles for you ta see me
when saint nick comes tell him you want non rap glee, cuz in these 4 bars im chopin you down like a Christmas tree

Im all the way @ the top wile you just "Down shawllow" in a ditch
you behind me,that why im playin mlb and you just in fast pitch

i already got this win yea i already kno
cuz like Benard Hopinks ima get this quik KO
i thought i would try something new n down shallow wrote a song called Anonymous
n fast pitch is soft ball for girls if u didnt kno
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Old 12-05-2006, 09:22 PM   #5 (permalink)
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ok votes... thanks for replying
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Old 12-05-2006, 09:37 PM   #6 (permalink)
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if your a younggunna, im a veteran child soldier/
i'll fuse your gun barrels together with lead solder/(40% tin, 60% lead)
Damn, if its something you never do (well a least text) never rhyme the same shit twice
hold up, you called your self a gunna? nah brother/
the only thing you popped was popcorn in november/
Damn, 1st was the same words now they dont rhyme
adding Shakespeare, Will add punch to any line/
YG, can't see, that lyrically i commit murder crimes/
Not really direct or nothin, just a bar. a topical bar
it doesn't matter what TIME, doesn't matter NIGHT or DAY/
i can out do you in MULTIS, PERSONALS, PUNCHES, or WORDPLAY/
The best out of everything, but nothin really cuz its not showing nothin. You could have just say " I can out do you cuz Im a better rapper"
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stay Anonymous, jus dont show ya face like its Friday the 13th and you Jason Voorhees
you need to get away from this close combat so get the lead, ill kill you any were it aint gotta be Overseas
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I make you go looney like the toons on tv ,itull take more then night goggles for you ta see me
when saint nick comes tell him you want non rap glee, cuz in these 4 bars im chopin you down like a Christmas tree
lol, this made me laugh for some reason but its str8 for a 2nd bar, if this was any other 1, it would not be good
Im all the way @ the top wile you just "Down shawllow" in a ditch
you behind me,that why im playin mlb and you just in fast pitch
SHit was OK, not great OK
i already got this win yea i already kno
cuz like Benard Hopinks ima get this quik KO
Didnt flow with the other bars
Flow: Anon
Mutis: None
Wordplay: None
Punches: YG (even tho they aint hit hard)
Personal: YG
Enjoyment: YG

YG clearly won, but Anon you elevatin, I give you that, good job by both. Anon work on punches cuz most of what u spit is fillers. YG I know you only do audio, but this text so its different and u gotta make it look different in text. On here they look like wtf on your shit but I know cuz I've seen you write like this and rap it on a beat and make it on beat. But work on the flow a lil.

My Vote: YG
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Old 12-05-2006, 09:42 PM   #7 (permalink)
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solder isn't the same word as soldier
@ 2nd line: yeah they don't rhyme
@ 3rd line: wordplay with will shakespeare and a bit of internal rhyme in a formof a multi
you voted already so i respect you took your time.. but im explaining what i wrte, not swaying anything
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Old 12-05-2006, 11:02 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Flow: Anon...
Mutis: None
Wordplay: None
Punches: YG (Weak, But I Guess Its There)
Personal: None
Enjoyment: Anon...

Basically, this was a boring battle & YG's verse was waaaay too stretch to even flow togther.

My vote is for Anonymous
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Flow: Anon...
Mutis: None
Wordplay: None
Punches: YG (Weak, But I Guess Its There)
Personal: None
Enjoyment: Anon...

Basically, this was a boring battle & YG's verse was waaaay too stretch to even flow togther.

My vote is for Anonymous
thats wat the commas are for it means pause n i had personals
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1-1 keep it coming
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