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Thug
Join Date: Nov 2006
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ima get at you tomorrow...
4 bars no dickride explain votes 3-0 KO 4-1 TKO this time you drop first... nvm.. i'll do it if your a younggunna, im a veteran child soldier/ i'll fuse your gun barrels together with lead solder/(40% tin, 60% lead) hold up, you called your self a gunna? nah brother/ the only thing you popped was popcorn in november/ adding Shakespeare, Will add punch to any line/ YG, can't see, that lyrically i commit murder crimes/ it doesn't matter what TIME, doesn't matter NIGHT or DAY/ i can out do you in MULTIS, PERSONALS, PUNCHES, or WORDPLAY/ Last edited by Anonymous; 12-05-2006 at 11:27 AM.. |
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Thug
Join Date: Nov 2006
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yeah 8 hours ago i bumped this... drop man... i'm making deadline wednesday 12 pm more than enough time
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stay Anonymous, jus dont show ya face like its Friday the 13th and you Jason Voorhees i thought i would try something new n down shallow wrote a song called Anonymousyou need to get away from this close combat so get the lead, ill kill you any were it aint gotta be Overseas I make you go looney like the toons on tv ,itull take more then night goggles for you ta see me when saint nick comes tell him you want non rap glee, cuz in these 4 bars im chopin you down like a Christmas tree Im all the way @ the top wile you just "Down shawllow" in a ditch you behind me,that why im playin mlb and you just in fast pitch i already got this win yea i already kno cuz like Benard Hopinks ima get this quik KO n fast pitch is soft ball for girls if u didnt kno
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Thug
Join Date: Nov 2006
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ok votes... thanks for replying
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Join Date: Dec 2005
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Mutis: None Wordplay: None Punches: YG (even tho they aint hit hard) Personal: YG Enjoyment: YG YG clearly won, but Anon you elevatin, I give you that, good job by both. Anon work on punches cuz most of what u spit is fillers. YG I know you only do audio, but this text so its different and u gotta make it look different in text. On here they look like wtf on your shit but I know cuz I've seen you write like this and rap it on a beat and make it on beat. But work on the flow a lil. My Vote: YG |
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Thug
Join Date: Nov 2006
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solder isn't the same word as soldier
@ 2nd line: yeah they don't rhyme @ 3rd line: wordplay with will shakespeare and a bit of internal rhyme in a formof a multi you voted already so i respect you took your time.. but im explaining what i wrte, not swaying anything |
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Join Date: Oct 2006
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Flow: Anon...
Mutis: None Wordplay: None Punches: YG (Weak, But I Guess Its There) Personal: None Enjoyment: Anon... Basically, this was a boring battle & YG's verse was waaaay too stretch to even flow togther. My vote is for Anonymous
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