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U know da rules...your da challenger so,upiin for ya verse and I'll respond right after...1
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Criminal
Join Date: Oct 2006
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Its a quick kill when I'm sick I spit ill//
To get rich, Varc. better off catching wind to get millz//(Windmills) So get real, I'ma have him playing dead like possums// Cuz Varc. scared the way my crew got more "Bat-men" than Gothem// He thinking I can't stop him, will send him on the fright train// With weak punches and no blows, no wonder he can't fight mayne// But its aiight mayne, cuz at the end I'ma have him runnin' like track teams// with fast beams, I'll have Varc. press against the wall like a flat screen// With 5 bars equal to destroy your 5 boroughs you live in// Its a given, when Viet'll have Varc. not walking straight like he's crippin'// (Crip Walking) Alright Mayne. Thats My Verse. I'll Be Waiting On Yours And Good Luck.
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*Peters Parker is back!!*
As I hit vietnam with venomous spits,targeting small fries-- Battling me? Without the I.V,you still putting your life ON LINE-- This newbie stealing my wording structure,thought I couldn't tell?-- Viet married to the game? Well I'm a slaughter this "groom",renact the moments of "Sean Bell"--(R.I.P) You suffer in ranks..I'm tough and as hard as you think-- The last TOP 5 you been in,had Myspace apart of the link-- Viet Kidd?there's no past.....why are you hyper dog..... There's no hope! My verses filt with more "quotes" than a "Geico Call"--(lol) Walk in my shoes and get motion sickness,this kid in a rage-- Send VIET to the "City Of Angels" without "Nicholas Cage"-- *Caspeeeer*
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Varc took the cake on this one, soz Viet just felt Varc's one the better, with varc's references to Pete Parker, a.k.a spidey, i thought was pritty dope, liked the 2nd bar varc, references to the groom, and the react of sean bell, was kool
Viet u had a nice flow, nice use of words! both of ya had direct word play, but, Varc takes it for me |
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Aiiight thanx for voting..nice sig lol... 1-0 my way..lets get sum more votes people
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Flow: Both
Punches: Var Wordplay: Var Multies: ----- Enjoyment: Var Varcity got this one for me...For creative concepts & better punches... My Vote: Var |
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Join Date: Nov 2006
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A dope battle here...won't break it down like I usually do..
Viet - A very good verse..but the main problem I saw was the wordplay lackin'...and the punches you threw weren't as effective as I hoped to see.. Quote:
The 'windmills' line didnt' really hit..the 'batmen' was more generic than anything..and that 'crippin' line juss needed to be reworded.. Varcity - Again..another solid verse from you man..some of your wordplay was mediocre at best..but then you had some lines that were insane...so it was a verse full of ups n downs..yet still full o' solid punches... Quote:
The 'City of Angels' was an okay concept..not hard-hittin..if you had flipped the 'Sean Bell' line a little better it woulda been dope..but I saw it comin' from a mile away..and the 'IV' concept was a blah in my eyes..seen WAY too many of those.. In the end...Varcity edged this one out with the punches...both were fairly equal when it came to the wordplay and flow...Varcity held more consistency with his multis as well.. Vote = Varcity.. Good battle fellas
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Gud looks... 2-0 bumpping for votes..
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Bumping for votes people...
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Thug
Join Date: Nov 2006
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co-signing with ill and g-rated... tough battle but veit has some nice lines.. its just varc had better ones.. no hard fillings bro this was a nice drop on both parts.. return the favour
vote on anonymous vs jdakidd Anonymous vs JDaKidd and YG vs. anonymous YG vs. Anonymous please and thanks |
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