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12-07-2006, 10:42 AM
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JONES V-S KUNNIN FRUITY TOPICAL...The God Is Back
5-10 bars
Vote fairly..no hate Due today Topic:Fruit My fruity booty call..(turns on Ice Cream Beat) Popped the cherry now shes an incredible freak Strawberry blond, an ass that resembles a peach Met oversea s's made her wet till she peaks DAMN HO! Fucked her in Jamaica, she went wherever her Man Go Sex by the candles baby ya swellin melons are crazy Shes gets bitter like a lemon but her sex just amaze me After the coconut Malibu's she gets slick with tongue Banana makes her wild shes quick to lick on my plums Eve rided ruff on Adams apple's till its hurts and tears Started rolling down her face, were still the perfect pear Quick shit Goodluck
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12-07-2006, 10:44 AM
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Fruit
Planted an inch beneath the earth's soil covered crust, Diatary recommendations say that they are a daily must, Pushed upon the youth in order to begin a healthy lifestyle, One piece a day to keep a white gleaming priceless smile, Picked by backpackers in order to make money to finish a trip, Fruit flavoured dingers promoted by celebraties in order to look hip, AID's rates dropped due to a simply impact of fruity flavour, Very few people thought a seed would be the STI savor, The third bar is about this ad made by Jackie Chan years ago. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_X4wsGkXCGA
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12-07-2006, 10:50 AM
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nice verse
uppin for votes leave links and we'll hit ya shit up
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12-07-2006, 12:02 PM
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upppinnnn
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12-07-2006, 05:29 PM
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votee upppp
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12-07-2006, 05:46 PM
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you up shit too much
go vote on my battle with Torment. now Quote:
and imagery with the bitch. Real original approach on a weird topic like this. dope shit. Kunnin had a decent drop but his approach was monotonous and didnt keep my interest. Vote=Jones cuase his verse turned me on |
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12-07-2006, 05:54 PM
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Rap GodFather
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1-0 Ibrahim
You must spread some Reputation around before giving it to Amishstad again. I'll get back to you but.
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12-07-2006, 06:26 PM
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lol you pervert
word thanks 1-0
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12-07-2006, 07:46 PM
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Nice drops
 Kunnin took the more basic approach by just writing about the topic at hand...I felt some of your lines had room to create other concepts instead of stretching just one...For instance: "One piece a day to keep a white gleaming priceless smile" ...This bar was filled out with 3 words, focusing on one thing...You could have used that room to make a more indepth concept with an abstract comparison...Not just filler description words. However, I still enjoyed your drop... Jamal took a more creative approach to this battle, by describing events & the female anatomy through 'fruity' concepts...Very nice... My Vote: Jamal |
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