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Area51 · 12-07-2006, 08:53 PM

4-5 bars (8-10 lines)
house rules
must check in before dropping verse
deadline is 48 hours after both checks

this is my check

Classik · 12-07-2006, 10:41 PM

checkin in

Area51 · 12-08-2006, 03:43 AM

ok due saturday at 10pm
good luck

Classik · 12-09-2006, 06:38 PM

bump whos goin first?

Area51 · 12-09-2006, 06:53 PM

dont matter, ill probably write mine in like an hour, got a couple things to do first
you can drop first if you want or you can wait, its up to you

Area51 · 12-09-2006, 07:34 PM

This Faggot Claims He A Gunna But Aint Never Held A Twenty-Two
Hows He Gonna Beat Me When Hes Got His Own Identity Confused
Warpin This Bitches Mind.. Hes To Young To Be Seein These Curses
How Are You A "Gunna" When You Dont Even Pack Heat In Your Verses
My Punchlines Come Like Bullets, Fuck A K.O. Leave Ya Dyin
Call Me A Doctor Cuz One Shot'll Leave This "Youngin" Cryin
Dont Even Bother Postin Up... Aint No Point Once You Read Mine
My Verse Is Like Coke Cuz The Voters Hooked In Since The First Line

Classik · 12-09-2006, 08:18 PM

im the brown paper bag that ripens-this-FRUIT
perish him eazily cuz all i gotta do is beet-the-root
the 22 hittin duke in the face now he lookin like a doughnut-whole
dis kid gets beat on harder then a wack-a-mole
you area 51 cuz ya rhymes is like a ski mask they stay unknown
im area 51 cuz my rhymes 2 big for the city n need a empty place to be blown
you can only beat me once in a blue moon ill kill you then bring you back like kenny in the cartoon
ill send a buzz~to~the~light~year so you can see my Star-Boom cuz ill throw alot @ ya like i was in a dart room

JDaKidd · 12-09-2006, 10:35 PM

Quote:

This Faggot Claims He A Gunna But Aint Never Held A Twenty-Two
Hows He Gonna Beat Me When Hes Got His Own Identity Confused
They didnt really rhyme that good, it did, but not good
Warpin This Bitches Mind.. Hes To Young To Be Seein These Curses
How Are You A "Gunna" When You Dont Even Pack Heat In Your Verses
Nice
My Punchlines Come Like Bullets, Fuck A K.O. Leave Ya Dyin
Call Me A Doctor Cuz One Shot'll Leave This "Youngin" Cryin
Nice
Dont Even Bother Postin Up... Aint No Point Once You Read Mine
My Verse Is Like Coke Cuz The Voters Hooked In Since The First Line
Good closer

Quote:

im the brown paper bag that ripens-this-FRUIT
perish him eazily cuz all i gotta do is beet-the-root
OK
the 22 hittin duke in the face now he lookin like a doughnut-whole
dis kid gets beat on harder then a wack-a-mole
lol alright
you area 51 cuz ya rhymes is like a ski mask they stay unknown
im area 51 cuz my rhymes 2 big for the city n need a empty place to be blown
Others are gonna say the lil same word shit, but I do that sometime. If u work it right it can be hot, but this was ok
you can only beat me once in a blue moon ill kill you then bring you back like kenny in the cartoon
ill send a buzz~to~the~light~year so you can see my Star-Boom cuz ill throw alot @ ya like i was in a dart room
dont use the @ sign but this was not better than Area 51 closer

Flow: 51
Punches: 51
Wordplay: None (that I saw)
Mutis: YG
Enjoyment: 51 (both was good tho)

Damn, 51 was pretty good. I think that

Quote:

My Punchlines Come Like Bullets, Fuck A K.O. Leave Ya Dyin
Call Me A Doctor Cuz One Shot'll Leave This "Youngin" Cryin

won it, that was hard. Even tho the only thing he got on was your name, it was hot. Pretty good for a new comer. YG yours was good, but not enough for 51. 51 I see u have the same open problem as me. Cant never get a good opener but in the body its str8 crack. Work on that. Good verse by both but

My Vote: 51

Kanye East · 12-09-2006, 10:41 PM

I thought both were weak. They both kept on talkin bout the same shit. Coke lines/Killin Niggas and shit/Shots at The Doctor/And Using Each others Names.

Come on guys damn

Area51 · 12-09-2006, 11:35 PM

^lol i was just usin those as metaphors, if you payed attention to the verse you would have realised that, i didnt say anything like "im gonna shoot you" or shit like that

and thanks for votin JD, i can come with a good opener once in a while... but yea that is somethin i have trouble with

1-0 uppin

12-07-2006, 08:53 PM	#1 (permalink)
Area51 Underboss Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 1,155	YoungGunna22 vs Area51 4-5 bars (8-10 lines) house rules must check in before dropping verse deadline is 48 hours after both checks this is my check

12-07-2006, 10:41 PM	#2 (permalink)
Classik Rap GodFather Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: ..--.:KENTUCKY:.--.. Posts: 6,243	checkin in __________________ Back 2 Da ClassiK Style.. www.validusapparel.bigcartel.com BEATS- http://www.myspace.com/classikproductionz

12-09-2006, 06:38 PM	#4 (permalink)
Classik Rap GodFather Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: ..--.:KENTUCKY:.--.. Posts: 6,243	bump whos goin first? __________________ Back 2 Da ClassiK Style.. www.validusapparel.bigcartel.com BEATS- http://www.myspace.com/classikproductionz

12-09-2006, 08:18 PM	#7 (permalink)
Classik Rap GodFather Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: ..--.:KENTUCKY:.--.. Posts: 6,243	im the brown paper bag that ripens-this-FRUIT perish him eazily cuz all i gotta do is beet-the-root the 22 hittin duke in the face now he lookin like a doughnut-whole dis kid gets beat on harder then a wack-a-mole you area 51 cuz ya rhymes is like a ski mask they stay unknown im area 51 cuz my rhymes 2 big for the city n need a empty place to be blown you can only beat me once in a blue moon ill kill you then bring you back like kenny in the cartoon ill send a buzz~to~the~light~year so you can see my Star-Boom cuz ill throw alot @ ya like i was in a dart room __________________ Back 2 Da ClassiK Style.. www.validusapparel.bigcartel.com BEATS- http://www.myspace.com/classikproductionz

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12-08-2006, 03:43 AM	#3 (permalink)
Area51 Underboss Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 1,155	ok due saturday at 10pm good luck

12-09-2006, 06:53 PM	#5 (permalink)
Area51 Underboss Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 1,155	dont matter, ill probably write mine in like an hour, got a couple things to do first you can drop first if you want or you can wait, its up to you

12-09-2006, 07:34 PM	#6 (permalink)
Area51 Underboss Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 1,155	This Faggot Claims He A Gunna But Aint Never Held A Twenty-Two Hows He Gonna Beat Me When Hes Got His Own Identity Confused Warpin This Bitches Mind.. Hes To Young To Be Seein These Curses How Are You A "Gunna" When You Dont Even Pack Heat In Your Verses My Punchlines Come Like Bullets, Fuck A K.O. Leave Ya Dyin Call Me A Doctor Cuz One Shot'll Leave This "Youngin" Cryin Dont Even Bother Postin Up... Aint No Point Once You Read Mine My Verse Is Like Coke Cuz The Voters Hooked In Since The First Line

12-09-2006, 10:41 PM	#9 (permalink)
Kanye East Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 825	I thought both were weak. They both kept on talkin bout the same shit. Coke lines/Killin Niggas and shit/Shots at The Doctor/And Using Each others Names. Come on guys damn

12-09-2006, 11:35 PM	#10 (permalink)
Area51 Underboss Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 1,155	^lol i was just usin those as metaphors, if you payed attention to the verse you would have realised that, i didnt say anything like "im gonna shoot you" or shit like that and thanks for votin JD, i can come with a good opener once in a while... but yea that is somethin i have trouble with 1-0 uppin