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Wreck · 12-09-2006, 07:51 AM

4-6 bars limit
due within the next day or so
spit when you spit
good luck kunnin
checkin in, ill post mine in alil bit

topic: death, heaven/hell (which ever)

Wreck · 12-09-2006, 08:16 AM

o yea kunnin, i got a ? was wondering if i can spit more then 6 bars, mines a bar more, 7 bars

Kunnin' · 12-09-2006, 08:19 AM

Yea that's alright I spose.

Reserved for the lawyers, killers and the majority of employers,
Criteria non existant for the likes of relationship destroyers,
While the divine land was created only for the gifted and religious,
Red wine, gold platters and cavier presented to the prestigious,
As the evil suffer downstairs slaving for the devils happiness,
Many attempting suicide to avoid the humilation without success,
Heaven purely fully of delight by a repetative schedule,
Trapped in a world of perfectness is nothing short of cruel,
Variety needed throughout life weather it is through birth,
Or a mourning of a relative, variety is all that is needed on earth,

Bar 1 and 3 = Hell
Bar 2 and 4 = Heaven
Bar 5 = Wouldn't have a clue
Tried to have all subjects in there at one point. Far from best but... yes.

DJ-Hennessy · 12-09-2006, 08:35 AM

^^^
Damn Kunnin you should rap some that shit for audio!!
Id love to see what it sounds like, When i be reading it, it gotta good flow!!

Wreck · 12-09-2006, 08:39 AM

real nice verse kunnin, you mixed all of em in one, ima go with alil bit of each too (my bars are alil longer, hopefully they fit) here it goes:

how can the rgf god's say they chose me over destiny
when death forever has first class seats to get the best of me

but unfortunately in heaven, even a blind poet can't even see his own dreams
so first and foremost if you're gona bury my casket right, you should bury me a G for Jesus' safekeepings

cause im stormin through gates of hell, man i already got the keys for my afterbirth seeds
the cloud's talk gossip on OG's, they even speak about the wars on the streets to the dead mcs (r.i.p pac)

in 50 years when im entombed, i'll be their watchin each wedding on earth paying dues to my pops n giving advice to brides and grooms coming up like flower's blooming in the church

just don't enshrine a wall full of all my old belongings
because heaven is like a baby, without my wings right now i wouldnt even be walking or crawling

talking in my sleep is irrelevant because god keeps me awake, no SATs(seasonal angel testing)
im the savior for stillborn babies, even virgin mary told me sunday was the best day of the week

the angel's forgot to stay in elysium compared to hell where compared to bad reports, im ripped for no face value
no pride taken for coming back to birth's throne, lord ive been here long enough, its been like <s>child</s> angel abuse, you get what you've been through

last bar: elysium- 1 : the abode of the blessed after death in classical mythology aka the blessed after death

just in case nobody didnt know what elysium meant

VOTES

Wreck · 12-09-2006, 08:58 AM

votes ppl, please, break down votes 2

South Up · 12-09-2006, 09:05 AM

real nice shit by both...

kunnin: i was feelin your shit all tha way thru...tha way you talked bout heaven n hell interchangeably, pointing out tha flaws in both and detailin it..real nice...good vocab, flow was on point, one of tha most complete topical drops ive seen in a while...tha only problem i have wit it is tha last bar..compared to how solid and intent tha rest of tha drop was, tha closer seemed kinda weak and random...

wreck: i liked how you took a different approach, instead of detailing tha concept of death or heaven/hell itself, you did it from your point of view and you did it nicely..it was a kinda pac style verse so it was fittin you said r.i.p pac in it lol...still nice execution for tha topic...bar-wise..your problem of stretching bars is still pretty persistent here..there was a couple instances where i'd be vibin wit a bar just to be thrown off at tha end from it not rhymin or it being too long...

kunnin pros: solid approach of tha topic, vocab, flow and different perspectives all on point..a real complete drop

kunnin cons: good approach but you could have put your own spin on it...tha closer also hurt you

wreck pros: your point of view in your bars, tha environments you had in your bars (talkin to tha virgin mary, etc...)

wreck cons: your bar structure still flaws a lot of your shit, unnecessary things like tha SAT thing...concepts that didnt really add to tha topic or didnt work out...

overall this was a real nice topical battle and props to both of ya..but my vote goes to

Kunnin Kadava

Wreck · 12-09-2006, 09:09 AM

^^ thanks for the vote breakdown n everything man, 1-0 kunnin

Kunnin' · 12-09-2006, 09:10 AM

^ Propz, well I would if it would let me. Nice way to vote.

Wreck you actually suprised me with yours verse.

1-0 to me, so far anyway

Wreck · 12-09-2006, 09:12 AM

^^ thanks man, your verse was real nice, flowed alot better then mine did lol, needa work on my run on sentences

anyway, 1-0 kunnin, keep on votin peeps

12-09-2006, 07:51 AM	#1 (permalink)
Wreck Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: jerseyyyyyy, 11-10 Battle Record Posts: 7,508	kunnin kadava vs Wreckless (topic battle) 4-6 bars limit due within the next day or so spit when you spit good luck kunnin checkin in, ill post mine in alil bit topic: death, heaven/hell (which ever)

12-09-2006, 08:19 AM	#3 (permalink)
Kunnin' Rap GodFather Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Geelong, Australia Posts: 14,384	Yea that's alright I spose. Reserved for the lawyers, killers and the majority of employers, Criteria non existant for the likes of relationship destroyers, While the divine land was created only for the gifted and religious, Red wine, gold platters and cavier presented to the prestigious, As the evil suffer downstairs slaving for the devils happiness, Many attempting suicide to avoid the humilation without success, Heaven purely fully of delight by a repetative schedule, Trapped in a world of perfectness is nothing short of cruel, Variety needed throughout life weather it is through birth, Or a mourning of a relative, variety is all that is needed on earth, Bar 1 and 3 = Hell Bar 2 and 4 = Heaven Bar 5 = Wouldn't have a clue Tried to have all subjects in there at one point. Far from best but... yes. __________________ -FREE GRAPE- Last edited by Kunnin'; 12-09-2006 at 08:24 AM.. Reason: Typo

12-09-2006, 08:35 AM	#4 (permalink)
DJ-Hennessy Rap GodFather Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Ireland Posts: 5,991	^^^ Damn Kunnin you should rap some that shit for audio!! Id love to see what it sounds like, When i be reading it, it gotta good flow!! __________________

12-09-2006, 09:10 AM	#9 (permalink)
Kunnin' Rap GodFather Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Geelong, Australia Posts: 14,384	^ Propz, well I would if it would let me. Nice way to vote. Wreck you actually suprised me with yours verse. 1-0 to me, so far anyway __________________ -FREE GRAPE-

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12-09-2006, 08:16 AM	#2 (permalink)
Wreck Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: jerseyyyyyy, 11-10 Battle Record Posts: 7,508	o yea kunnin, i got a ? was wondering if i can spit more then 6 bars, mines a bar more, 7 bars

12-09-2006, 08:39 AM	#5 (permalink)
Wreck Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: jerseyyyyyy, 11-10 Battle Record Posts: 7,508	real nice verse kunnin, you mixed all of em in one, ima go with alil bit of each too (my bars are alil longer, hopefully they fit) here it goes: how can the rgf god's say they chose me over destiny when death forever has first class seats to get the best of me but unfortunately in heaven, even a blind poet can't even see his own dreams so first and foremost if you're gona bury my casket right, you should bury me a G for Jesus' safekeepings cause im stormin through gates of hell, man i already got the keys for my afterbirth seeds the cloud's talk gossip on OG's, they even speak about the wars on the streets to the dead mcs (r.i.p pac) in 50 years when im entombed, i'll be their watchin each wedding on earth paying dues to my pops n giving advice to brides and grooms coming up like flower's blooming in the church just don't enshrine a wall full of all my old belongings because heaven is like a baby, without my wings right now i wouldnt even be walking or crawling talking in my sleep is irrelevant because god keeps me awake, no SATs(seasonal angel testing) im the savior for stillborn babies, even virgin mary told me sunday was the best day of the week the angel's forgot to stay in elysium compared to hell where compared to bad reports, im ripped for no face value no pride taken for coming back to birth's throne, lord ive been here long enough, its been like <s>child</s> angel abuse, you get what you've been through last bar: elysium- 1 : the abode of the blessed after death in classical mythology aka the blessed after death just in case nobody didnt know what elysium meant VOTES

12-09-2006, 08:58 AM	#6 (permalink)
Wreck Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: jerseyyyyyy, 11-10 Battle Record Posts: 7,508	votes ppl, please, break down votes 2

12-09-2006, 09:05 AM	#7 (permalink)
South Up Banned Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: The Struggle Posts: 21,091	real nice shit by both... kunnin: i was feelin your shit all tha way thru...tha way you talked bout heaven n hell interchangeably, pointing out tha flaws in both and detailin it..real nice...good vocab, flow was on point, one of tha most complete topical drops ive seen in a while...tha only problem i have wit it is tha last bar..compared to how solid and intent tha rest of tha drop was, tha closer seemed kinda weak and random... wreck: i liked how you took a different approach, instead of detailing tha concept of death or heaven/hell itself, you did it from your point of view and you did it nicely..it was a kinda pac style verse so it was fittin you said r.i.p pac in it lol...still nice execution for tha topic...bar-wise..your problem of stretching bars is still pretty persistent here..there was a couple instances where i'd be vibin wit a bar just to be thrown off at tha end from it not rhymin or it being too long... kunnin pros: solid approach of tha topic, vocab, flow and different perspectives all on point..a real complete drop kunnin cons: good approach but you could have put your own spin on it...tha closer also hurt you wreck pros: your point of view in your bars, tha environments you had in your bars (talkin to tha virgin mary, etc...) wreck cons: your bar structure still flaws a lot of your shit, unnecessary things like tha SAT thing...concepts that didnt really add to tha topic or didnt work out... overall this was a real nice topical battle and props to both of ya..but my vote goes to Kunnin Kadava

12-09-2006, 09:09 AM	#8 (permalink)
Wreck Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: jerseyyyyyy, 11-10 Battle Record Posts: 7,508	^^ thanks for the vote breakdown n everything man, 1-0 kunnin

12-09-2006, 09:12 AM	#10 (permalink)
Wreck Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: jerseyyyyyy, 11-10 Battle Record Posts: 7,508	^^ thanks man, your verse was real nice, flowed alot better then mine did lol, needa work on my run on sentences anyway, 1-0 kunnin, keep on votin peeps