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12-09-2006, 01:51 PM
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Jones V-S Torment
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Due in 24 hrs after check in 3-0 K.O or First to 5 wins all votes must be explained your gay check
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12-09-2006, 02:05 PM
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Capo
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Checkin in...have it due in 30 minutes or more because i won't be on later on or tonight
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12-09-2006, 02:50 PM
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Jones sinking these prick faggots, cant breath & im still at it
YO Torment is as abstract as Killa Cam pimping in pink jackets Im defeating cats with ether raps seek the pad this vets revealing ya You wanna fuck my Mum? into Milfs?..ill fuck yours im into Necrophilia I should stop with the battle raps matter a fact Fuck Ya'll pay me Im a beast, crazy thats me in Torments avy eating his Unborn baby! Rainbow flow, State of Minds purple but ill blaze you till ya blue This little pre teens a minor, Liyah got more facial hair than you Im wilder still Jones flow alone is like a slimey pill , its grimey Ill Torment brings all the noise, but no heat like university fire drills holllaarrrrrr
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12-09-2006, 03:12 PM
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Capo
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Good try, but Peep it~
..Look lets get Serius"Jones", opposition of da Jin-Battle, Cuz if Snitches had LineNumbers, he'll be da 1st-To-Tattle.. ..So like "Pretezel-Documents", don't get ur Info-Twisted, Cuz his Punches is a Mistake, like it was Typo-Fisted.. ..Like Christmas-at-Asylums, dam he really Mentally-"Gifted", dis pussy thought he won, but from robbin his arms got "Lifted".. ..internationally squeezed n EastLondon, until he suffcated"Purple", or da bullets can do track-meet's on his body, yea Run"Circles"..lol .. In fact jones can't see-me, so i'll scan-eyes and detect-vision, Therefore Jones n battlin ur Light-Weight, like a Skinny-"Electrian"...Eazy Good luck...
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12-09-2006, 03:17 PM
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pretzel documents? lol
you need to stop trying so hard with the wordplay, your losing meaning meh vote up
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12-09-2006, 03:21 PM
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Capo
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lol i ain't tryin hard....i got plenty of concepts i just use the one that makes more sense and realiable eh w/e man uppin votes
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12-09-2006, 05:16 PM
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shutup you idiot
vote up
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12-09-2006, 08:00 PM
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upppppppppppppppppppppppppp
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12-10-2006, 08:48 AM
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Uppppppp
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12-10-2006, 10:42 AM
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ummm....tor no hate, this is pure opinion...Im really mistaking the abstract factor for rediculousness..alot of times you ruin your verse by using things like "make your bones shake like skeleton earthquakes"..the fuck is a skeleton earthquake...and the fuck is a pretzel document...
jones you had a couple ok punches...not your best and the flow was off..but you took my vote
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