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Kunnin' · 12-09-2006, 08:45 PM

First to one vote
4 Bars
12 Hours to drop
Topic is free

Good Luck

Wreck · 12-09-2006, 08:47 PM

good luck 2 both of ya, dont forget to post ya topic right before your verse so we all know what its bout, just sayin

problem2k6 · 12-09-2006, 09:10 PM

FREE
you called me out so now its on and crackin
topic battllin is a skill that you are really lackin
im a real boss you just overhere plain actin
you losin in the fourth quarter so its time to start hackin
times up and you lost, the problem just finished
twelve hour deadline? tell me why it only took me five minutes
these punchlines are direct and they stingin you like a bee
cuz all it takes is four bars to demolish ya career for free

Kunnin' · 12-09-2006, 09:14 PM

Inner Demons

The incineration of the church brang me nothing but joy,
But the inner demons it has created in me has began to destroy,
Waking up in cold sweats after the nightly murderous dream,
I now experience mental insanity to a new extreme,
Paranoia sets in while I enter the normal society,
Altered my pet crime from arson to murder for variety,
Moving into slow and painful beheadings and disfigures,
The inner monster slowly turning me into a lone figure,

Wreck · 12-09-2006, 09:34 PM

both verses were good, problem yours flowed nicely but you didnt have much or any world play and it seemed you were too broad with your approach, you needed to take a step further into what you were writing about.

kunnin, real good wordplay and pretty good flow except for the last bar:

Moving into slow and painful beheadings and disfigures,
The inner monster slowly turning me into a lone figure,

^^ now thats a good bar but next time dont use figure twice

kunnin seemed alittle more descriptive in my mind, problem, your verse was real good man but try to put in some wordplay next time here and there, dont overdo your verse with too many big words because you want it to flow nice and you dont wanna look like your just takin big words outa the dictionary and fittin em in

kunnin pro's- real good worldplay and approach as far as your topic
kunnin con's- work on ya flow alittle bit, it was real good 95% of the verse, just change the ending next time

problem pro's- excellent flow, i put your verse to a beat when i was listenin to it and it fit perfectly
problem's cons- work on putting a few words in their next time, just use synonyms of the same words you used in ya verse and itll make it sound alittle more professional

altogether, this was a real good battle in my mind, problem kept coming with the lines about how kunnin needed to catch up and how to demolish him in 4 bars for free, i really liked that. and kunnin was just solid up and down with his punches and worldplay, this was a not bad topic battle but

my vote: kunnin kadava

both of yall were real good, just work on a few minute things and you'll be good

D|E|A|T|H · 12-09-2006, 11:06 PM

i dont believe this clown wreck is giving advice haha

Kunnin' · 12-09-2006, 11:09 PM

Shut your mouth the battle is over don't freepost.

Wreck · 12-09-2006, 11:17 PM

thats funny that you callin me a clown you pussy ass mothafucka, i dont see you doin shit on this fuckin thread on this fuckin rgf site, take your whack, rookie fuckin pussy ass piece of shit back to hell where you fuckin belong you fuckin asswipe douchebag, do you see me voting on the battle and breaking it down? yes, then shut the fuck up. "clown," little boy i been givin ya mom piggy back rides to the mall to feed her fat ass way be4 you can call me a fuckin clown, one thing to say im givin advice in a vote you dumbwitted cocksuckin faggot, but "clown" is a underachiever in yourself whose only been postin 18 threads on this mothafuckin sight, get the fuck outa here before i snap your body in half

12-09-2006, 08:45 PM	#1 (permalink)
Kunnin' Rap GodFather Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Geelong, Australia Posts: 14,384	Kunnin'_Kadava VS Problem2K6 First to one vote 4 Bars 12 Hours to drop Topic is free Good Luck __________________ -FREE GRAPE-

12-09-2006, 09:14 PM	#4 (permalink)
Kunnin' Rap GodFather Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Geelong, Australia Posts: 14,384	Inner Demons The incineration of the church brang me nothing but joy, But the inner demons it has created in me has began to destroy, Waking up in cold sweats after the nightly murderous dream, I now experience mental insanity to a new extreme, Paranoia sets in while I enter the normal society, Altered my pet crime from arson to murder for variety, Moving into slow and painful beheadings and disfigures, The inner monster slowly turning me into a lone figure, __________________ -FREE GRAPE-

12-09-2006, 11:06 PM	#6 (permalink)
D\|E\|A\|T\|H Outlaw Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 179	i dont believe this clown wreck is giving advice haha __________________ If you stand for nothing, you will fall for anything It's better to be hated for what you are then loved for what you are not.

12-09-2006, 11:09 PM	#7 (permalink)
Kunnin' Rap GodFather Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Geelong, Australia Posts: 14,384	Shut your mouth the battle is over don't freepost. __________________ -FREE GRAPE-

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12-09-2006, 08:47 PM	#2 (permalink)
Wreck Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: jerseyyyyyy, 11-10 Battle Record Posts: 7,508	good luck 2 both of ya, dont forget to post ya topic right before your verse so we all know what its bout, just sayin

12-09-2006, 09:10 PM	#3 (permalink)
problem2k6 Criminal Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 69	FREE you called me out so now its on and crackin topic battllin is a skill that you are really lackin im a real boss you just overhere plain actin you losin in the fourth quarter so its time to start hackin times up and you lost, the problem just finished twelve hour deadline? tell me why it only took me five minutes these punchlines are direct and they stingin you like a bee cuz all it takes is four bars to demolish ya career for free

12-09-2006, 09:34 PM	#5 (permalink)
Wreck Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: jerseyyyyyy, 11-10 Battle Record Posts: 7,508	both verses were good, problem yours flowed nicely but you didnt have much or any world play and it seemed you were too broad with your approach, you needed to take a step further into what you were writing about. kunnin, real good wordplay and pretty good flow except for the last bar: Moving into slow and painful beheadings and disfigures, The inner monster slowly turning me into a lone figure, ^^ now thats a good bar but next time dont use figure twice kunnin seemed alittle more descriptive in my mind, problem, your verse was real good man but try to put in some wordplay next time here and there, dont overdo your verse with too many big words because you want it to flow nice and you dont wanna look like your just takin big words outa the dictionary and fittin em in kunnin pro's- real good worldplay and approach as far as your topic kunnin con's- work on ya flow alittle bit, it was real good 95% of the verse, just change the ending next time problem pro's- excellent flow, i put your verse to a beat when i was listenin to it and it fit perfectly problem's cons- work on putting a few words in their next time, just use synonyms of the same words you used in ya verse and itll make it sound alittle more professional altogether, this was a real good battle in my mind, problem kept coming with the lines about how kunnin needed to catch up and how to demolish him in 4 bars for free, i really liked that. and kunnin was just solid up and down with his punches and worldplay, this was a not bad topic battle but my vote: kunnin kadava both of yall were real good, just work on a few minute things and you'll be good

12-09-2006, 11:17 PM	#8 (permalink)
Wreck Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: jerseyyyyyy, 11-10 Battle Record Posts: 7,508	thats funny that you callin me a clown you pussy ass mothafucka, i dont see you doin shit on this fuckin thread on this fuckin rgf site, take your whack, rookie fuckin pussy ass piece of shit back to hell where you fuckin belong you fuckin asswipe douchebag, do you see me voting on the battle and breaking it down? yes, then shut the fuck up. "clown," little boy i been givin ya mom piggy back rides to the mall to feed her fat ass way be4 you can call me a fuckin clown, one thing to say im givin advice in a vote you dumbwitted cocksuckin faggot, but "clown" is a underachiever in yourself whose only been postin 18 threads on this mothafuckin sight, get the fuck outa here before i snap your body in half