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12-10-2006, 05:33 PM
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Wherewolves
 
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JDaKidd [VS] The Coldest [IC Tourney]
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Both Must Check In Before Drop If a battler does not check in by Tuesday, he's dq'd After your check in, you have 24 hours to drop VOTES MUST BE EXPLAINED OR THEY WONT BE COUNTED! Breakdowns into categories arent necessary, but they would be appreciated NO CLUTTERING THE THREADS ASSHOLES! No order for drops, just drop in 24 after your check in  Lets get it goin bitches...Come strong, this tourney is for the IC, which can potentially mean a title shot for the Heavyweight..So dont slack with this one...NOTE: You have until Tuesday to check in, so dont check in unless you know youre absolutely going to drop in 24 hours
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12-12-2006, 12:36 AM
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Don
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alot of cats saying they do, but do the opposite, im a real stand up guy, they just opt to sit  |
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12-12-2006, 10:13 PM
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JDaKidd vs The COldest? Sureloc must have made a MICTH MATCH
Cuz he can only spit fresh after eating a pack of TIC TAC'S This dudes a loser, so I bang on him like I DRUM THE BEAT (Beat = Lose) Your bullets only hit head and shoulders cuz you aim FROM THE FEET (sig) It's not the finals, but he couldn't take my heat if he was D. Wade This actor verse is like a boradway show cuz all his lines played When you signed up, it was like a open win just STOLE YA PLACE You must be a underboss the way ya always stay BELOW THE WASIT Yea, you The Coldest, but even with that man you still ain't sick I eat your words quick like when a chick gettin her pussy lick I'll have you going down to the bottom like I try to DRILL A SHIP Your avater speaks it all cuz your verse only has a LIL FLIP |
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12-12-2006, 11:11 PM
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Don
Join Date: Jun 2006
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I gank this dudes glasses, cant see me like im john cena
send da kid for a loop, not doing hullah but bitch i seen ya do it, ya make music?, how? you flow like a brick put glue fluid on ya punch, threw it, they still dont stick this battle shows no green, i leave you crimson instead beat you like a step child when im done they call you a red head steal ya career like a stereo then leave it all pined drop and sweep ya up quicker than leaves in the fall time battle this artist, inter the con, crack him destroy his mental this addict couldnt sell his on work, he had to deploy his rental "show me what you got" earned this youngin the name JAY initiate tag during recess the only time JDA's game play (rap game)
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12-13-2006, 02:07 AM
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Underboss
Join Date: Dec 2006
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JDaKidd vs The COldest? Sureloc must have made a MICTH MATCH Cuz he can only spit fresh after eating a pack of TIC TAC'S played.. kinda weak.. This dudes a loser, so I bang on him like I DRUM THE BEAT (Beat = Lose) Your bullets only hit head and shoulders cuz you aim FROM THE FEET (sig) ehh... the second line isnt really dissing him... It's not the finals, but he couldn't take my heat if he was D. Wade This actor verse is like a boradway show cuz all his lines played decent... but the funny thing is.. its played lol When you signed up, it was like a open win just STOLE YA PLACE You must be a underboss the way ya always stay BELOW THE WASIT kinda funny... decent.. Yea, you The Coldest, but even with that man you still ain't sick I eat your words quick like when a chick gettin her pussy lick very weak.. I'll have you going down to the bottom like I try to DRILL A SHIP Your avater speaks it all cuz your verse only has a LIL FLIP ehhh... not really hard hitting.. Coldest: I gank this dudes glasses, cant see me like im john cena send da kid for a loop, not doing hullah but bitch i seen ya weak opener.. do it, ya make music?, how? you flow like a brick put glue fluid on ya punch, threw it, they still dont stick alright concept but its worded poorly, decent... this battle shows no green, i leave you crimson instead beat you like a step child when im done they call you a red head im sorry no offence but... 'when im done they call you a red head'?.... weak... steal ya career like a stereo then leave it all pined drop and sweep ya up quicker than leaves in the fall time ehh.. decent at best.. battle this artist, inter the con, crack him destroy his mental this addict couldnt sell his on work, he had to deploy his rental weak... "show me what you got" earned this youngin the name JAY initiate tag during recess the only time JDA's game play could've been worded to hit much harder... decent.. JDaKidd... to me it looked like you were sacrificing punches for multis... always make puches your first priority, you can fix the multis once you got some decent punches... also some of your lines were played... Coldest... you had some decent concepts that if worded better could have hit much harder... work on that.. you both had a couple shitty lines that shouldn't have made the battle verse... anyway my vote goes to Coldest, you both had about the same amount of decent bars, but Coldest takes it cuz his were more original.. just work on the stuff i pointed out for next time... vote-Coldest
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how about a Holocaust in Space?
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12-13-2006, 05:36 PM
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Wherewolves
Join Date: Jan 2006
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multis: Jda Punches: eh..neither had spectacualar anything wordplay: neither creativty/ originality: Coldest My Vote: The Coldest Advice to the Coldest: You definitley need to work on your punches, you have a nnice flow, but i get bored reading your shit sometimes, that doesnt mean you need to add color or capitals or shit like that, just work on making hard hitting punches. Advice to JDa: Work on your originality, alot of your lines have been done before, and if your going to do lines that are played, add a twist to em, or spice it up by making em your own and making em at least a bit original
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