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Varcity · 12-10-2006, 08:01 PM

First to 5 wins, 4-1 is a T.K.O and 3-0 is a K.O...
No d/r votes...
Plz don't take long to drop
4 bars...

Lets get it...

Classik · 12-10-2006, 08:34 PM

This rapper lookin down at his defeat, see he not sick, but still he got coxsakie
His verse isn't that ill either, couldn't clear the virus if he downloaded Mac-a-feet
You can find this duke standin on the corner holdin a sign that says Trick-or-treat
he must like to stay healthy n toss salads cuz he told his costumer C-ass-id-eat(Cassidy)
i always heard theres prices on heads well whats the head-price?
knock ya head off ya shoulders now you stuck in a pile of head-lice
Varsity's like the white girl in horror movies, hes a dumb-bitch
he read my raps n his testosteron goes up so now he cum-quick

Classik · 12-10-2006, 08:37 PM

o yea coxsakie is a foot virus n macafee is a computer program 2 stop viruses
n closer well...when u get a lil happy das wat happens

Varcity · 12-10-2006, 10:08 PM

Lets go....

Who are you gunning? What kinda trash is my eyes detecting?--
You couldn't spit "Fire" through "Walls" with an "Anti-Virus Protection"--

Ya lines aint affective,ya bunch of candy bars are melting--
I'll put the "Hawk" to your head like a "Cardinals Helmet"--

You my child,you a "son of a gun",forseeking ya plans....
You couldn't "Raise Bars" with that "Cingular Plan"--

You aint a Don check my Asylum,
The result of this battle is me putting this link in the Rankings saying I WON!!--

Prycele$$ · 12-10-2006, 10:22 PM

Varcity had a few punch played, ive heard that cardinal helmet concept before, and JDaKidd used that cingular bar against me (cept he said sprint)..

YG had a strong startin bar and strong end bar, thats all... and Varcitys starts and ends were harder anyway...

so cat wise

Flow: YG
Punches: Varc
Personals:.. ehh YG, atleast he had that cassidy bar..
Wordplay: YG
Multis: Varc
Enjoyment: Varc

close battle, nice read but it seemed weak both sides, as in, yall can come harder, keep up the good shit tho

Vote: Varcity

Varcity · 12-10-2006, 10:36 PM

It was only 4 bars,I mean there's no sense in going hard in 4 bars...but thanx for the vote...lets get sum more plzzz

1-0,I'm up

Varcity · 12-11-2006, 11:39 AM

can we get sum more votes plzzz

Amishstad · 12-11-2006, 04:26 PM

Vote-YG

I honestly thought his lines were
a bit more cleaver. His bars lacked
mutli rhymin which would've gave him
the easy win structure and rhyme
scheme wise. No one ever puts shit
down for rhyme scheme now that I
think about it...

Punches hit a bit harder with the originality.
Varc's first bar was coo but the rest lacked
in originality, nothing real fresh.

return the favor. Vote on any of my battles

D|E|A|T|H · 12-11-2006, 04:37 PM

vote is for varcity

Yg had too many gay referances and i dont know who thought that cassidy line was nice but i thought it was wack wordplay or not... varcity's opener was nice anyways im out

**G-Rated** · 12-11-2006, 06:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by YG's Breakdown

This rapper lookin down at his defeat, see he not sick, but still he got coxsakie
His verse isn't that ill either, couldn't clear the virus if he downloaded Mac-a-feet
Nice Opener...With better wording this could have did more damage...Very creative, both the setup & follow through reference 'feet'...Good shit
You can find this duke standin on the corner holdin a sign that says Trick-or-treat
he must like to stay healthy n toss salads cuz he told his costumer C-ass-id-eat(Cassidy)
Fresh approach, but the wordplay is too forced...Not good
i always heard theres prices on heads well whats the head-price?
knock ya head off ya shoulders now you stuck in a pile of head-lice
ehh...Nothin hard hittin...Needs re-wording
Varsity's like the white girl in horror movies, hes a dumb-bitch
he read my raps n his testosteron goes up so now he cum-quick
haha @ tha white chick in horror films...Decent closer

Quote:

Originally Posted by Varcity's Breakdown

Who are you gunning? What kinda trash is my eyes detecting?--
You couldn't spit "Fire" through "Walls" with an "Anti-Virus Protection"--
This comes across nice, but its not good...The analogy is off, the whole point of an 'Anti-Virus Protection' is to NOT let anything get through...Its designed to PROTECT, not SUBJECT...A virus protection does not HELP something GET THROUGH...This was a double negative concept...I think you were more focused on gettin that wordplay in & you forgot about a concept that coordinated with what you were tryn to say...
Ya lines aint affective,ya bunch of candy bars are melting--
I'll put the "Hawk" to your head like a "Cardinals Helmet"--
Needs more creativity here...This has been done before in a similar context, be more fresh with your concepts...Add your own originality to it...
You my child,you a "son of a gun",forseeking ya plans....
You couldn't "Raise Bars" with that "Cingular Plan"--
The son of a gun play has been done on YG atleast 3 different times in the cage...And there was a 'raise bars' play done once before as well...You should have made this more original...And you rhymed plan with plan
You aint a Don check my Asylum,
The result of this battle is me putting this link in the Rankings saying I WON!!
Flow is a bit off....But sadly this was your best bar bc it was the most original...The rest of your concepts werent fresh & you didnt flip them to make em yours...

This battle was pretty close, but YG was the most creative here...Concepts were original & with better wording most of them would have been onpoint...

Flow: Same
Punches: YG [Original]
Wordplay: YG [the wordplay in his opener got this for him]
Creativity: YG
Multies: -----
Enjoyment: Same

My Vote: YG

12-10-2006, 08:01 PM	#1 (permalink)
Varcity Rap GodFather Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: R.I.P STACK BUNDLEZ & CAVLAR Posts: 7,276	YoungGunna22 ..::vs::.. Varcity First to 5 wins, 4-1 is a T.K.O and 3-0 is a K.O... No d/r votes... Plz don't take long to drop 4 bars... Lets get it... __________________ RIP GRANDPA,FOREVER

12-10-2006, 08:34 PM	#2 (permalink)
Classik Rap GodFather Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: ..--.:KENTUCKY:.--.. Posts: 6,243	This rapper lookin down at his defeat, see he not sick, but still he got coxsakie His verse isn't that ill either, couldn't clear the virus if he downloaded Mac-a-feet You can find this duke standin on the corner holdin a sign that says Trick-or-treat he must like to stay healthy n toss salads cuz he told his costumer C-ass-id-eat(Cassidy) i always heard theres prices on heads well whats the head-price? knock ya head off ya shoulders now you stuck in a pile of head-lice Varsity's like the white girl in horror movies, hes a dumb-bitch he read my raps n his testosteron goes up so now he cum-quick __________________ Back 2 Da ClassiK Style.. www.validusapparel.bigcartel.com BEATS- http://www.myspace.com/classikproductionz

12-10-2006, 08:37 PM	#3 (permalink)
Classik Rap GodFather Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: ..--.:KENTUCKY:.--.. Posts: 6,243	o yea coxsakie is a foot virus n macafee is a computer program 2 stop viruses n closer well...when u get a lil happy das wat happens __________________ Back 2 Da ClassiK Style.. www.validusapparel.bigcartel.com BEATS- http://www.myspace.com/classikproductionz

12-10-2006, 10:08 PM	#4 (permalink)
Varcity Rap GodFather Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: R.I.P STACK BUNDLEZ & CAVLAR Posts: 7,276	Lets go.... Who are you gunning? What kinda trash is my eyes detecting?-- You couldn't spit "Fire" through "Walls" with an "Anti-Virus Protection"-- Ya lines aint affective,ya bunch of candy bars are melting-- I'll put the "Hawk" to your head like a "Cardinals Helmet"-- You my child,you a "son of a gun",forseeking ya plans.... You couldn't "Raise Bars" with that "Cingular Plan"-- You aint a Don check my Asylum, The result of this battle is me putting this link in the Rankings saying I WON!!-- __________________ RIP GRANDPA,FOREVER

12-10-2006, 10:22 PM	#5 (permalink)
Prycele$$ Don Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Elkhart, dat C.O.E niggas... Posts: 2,747	Varcity had a few punch played, ive heard that cardinal helmet concept before, and JDaKidd used that cingular bar against me (cept he said sprint).. YG had a strong startin bar and strong end bar, thats all... and Varcitys starts and ends were harder anyway... so cat wise Flow: YG Punches: Varc Personals:.. ehh YG, atleast he had that cassidy bar.. Wordplay: YG Multis: Varc Enjoyment: Varc close battle, nice read but it seemed weak both sides, as in, yall can come harder, keep up the good shit tho Vote: Varcity __________________ Jews In Space > Super Spicey DopeSauce. dumbfuck.

12-10-2006, 10:36 PM	#6 (permalink)
Varcity Rap GodFather Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: R.I.P STACK BUNDLEZ & CAVLAR Posts: 7,276	It was only 4 bars,I mean there's no sense in going hard in 4 bars...but thanx for the vote...lets get sum more plzzz 1-0,I'm up __________________ RIP GRANDPA,FOREVER

12-11-2006, 11:39 AM	#7 (permalink)
Varcity Rap GodFather Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: R.I.P STACK BUNDLEZ & CAVLAR Posts: 7,276	can we get sum more votes plzzz __________________ RIP GRANDPA,FOREVER

12-11-2006, 04:26 PM	#8 (permalink)
Amishstad Capo Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Chicago, IL Posts: 814	Vote-YG I honestly thought his lines were a bit more cleaver. His bars lacked mutli rhymin which would've gave him the easy win structure and rhyme scheme wise. No one ever puts shit down for rhyme scheme now that I think about it... Punches hit a bit harder with the originality. Varc's first bar was coo but the rest lacked in originality, nothing real fresh. return the favor. Vote on any of my battles

12-11-2006, 04:37 PM	#9 (permalink)
D\|E\|A\|T\|H Outlaw Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 179	vote is for varcity Yg had too many gay referances and i dont know who thought that cassidy line was nice but i thought it was wack wordplay or not... varcity's opener was nice anyways im out __________________ If you stand for nothing, you will fall for anything It's better to be hated for what you are then loved for what you are not.

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