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Criminal
Join Date: Dec 2006
Posts: 89
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6-8 bars
no feeding, 1 round house rules voting etc w/e |
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Criminal
Join Date: Dec 2006
Posts: 89
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cheqin in....cheq in n drop the latest 48 hours after u cheq
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Thug
Join Date: Nov 2006
Posts: 238
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i check... be ready to drop by tomorrow if you can
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Criminal
Join Date: Dec 2006
Posts: 89
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iight kool ima drop wen i get home around 6
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Criminal
Join Date: Dec 2006
Posts: 89
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iight,
spit it hot keep it cocked let of da shot n watch u drop, ima get da number one spot 2 hold the title, rip out ya spinal n watch u slump im homicidal, jus shoot up da whip so u ride breathin weezy son, 4 real, leave dis nigga ridin weezy like george jefferson, n who this eager bitch acceptin my challenge, he think he g, show him my 44 so he sit calm (sitcom) like he on tv, bet this nigga talk big on da internet, but face 2 face he shut his mouth, cuz if i pull a hamma on em, he wont do jack like jill dont put out, start 2 fuk ya bitch, but she ugly so i leave her n never cum baq, leave dat bitch randy n wantin mor like moss want a new contract, in terms ov talent, anonymous a toddler next 2 a legend 4 real, gess its gud my guns'll make this kid shake like a happy meal, treat u like a virgin asshole, wit my trigga finger i make u flinch, no one knows this nigga, compare him 2 an anonymous snitch, das y wen they say ya name on stage, u hear more "who's" than the grinch if u need breakdown on ne line jus get at me...uppin 4 annonymous |
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Thug
Join Date: Nov 2006
Posts: 238
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good drop... i'll drop when i get a chance
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that was nice Born...you battled somewhere else before?..
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Criminal
Join Date: Dec 2006
Posts: 89
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yea all over i help run a strictly text/audio battle site 2...i seen niggaz here rhymin nice so i thawt id cum here try n get a few wins then promote my site...cheq it...its got potential if we could only get members lol no one wants 2 join...only got 17 members in the week and a half we been up...cheq it people www.rapattlearena.com
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Thug
Join Date: Nov 2006
Posts: 238
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you was born into a world with jst ya mama/
nigga, you just upset cuz you found out im big poppa/ making a name for yourself? don't make me laugh wussy/ i'm just coasting in this battle, so add the math, pussy/ no way am i going to lose, i ethered the best without care/ there's no love if RGF, you'd get your ass beat by a care bear/ aiyyo born, i'll have you scared to tha point you miscarried/ it's not my flaut your om's a bimbo and thought bout marriage/ i do this shit alot, i did it to your aunt Brenda, im deadly/ do i really need to rhyme my last line, i won already/ you nigga ain't serious, you think you can rhyme, your not edgy/ you ugly, nobody would date you, not even veronica or betty/ |
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Wow this battle was very average and had plenty played concepts haha...
first to point out: that jefferson line < Cassidy said that but in another concept 2nd point: that sitcom line was already said by Murder Mook smh....eh Born: your verse had too man played concepts from real life people who been on tv or dvd's haha.....and people sayin my shit was played ??? Yawns @ false accusations. Anyway other than those played lines i mentioned i guess the rest was ok for a rookie starting off. eh Anonymous: just too simple and broad, you really have to work on better concepts and atleast have one Punchline within your verse man. smh how i try and help people with punchlines and creativity, but yet don't get mine and says Wtf is Pretezel-Documents haha..seriously this guy anonymous does try his hardest to win battles but just needs to expand his mind from simple material. Vote: Born for less weak lines even though they were beyond played.
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