th cold v. problem

[The Coldest]

4-6 first to five
3-0 ko
ya got 2 hours

[The Coldest]

i got 2006 problems but ya ass aint one
my words easy buttons they kryptonite so ya faint son
im ahead of ya time like im livin near da atlantic
this years time up i end ya premature like teens who cant stand it
i play ya like a game but ya life gone i reset ya career
you try to build ya team but i unplug ya life source no more fiction here
its my season im thrivin i sand ya ego then i charge ya
you take a bottle of viagra and you still cant be harder

[problem2k6]

so you claim i aint a problem but you talkin out ya ass
after this im movin up on the ladder, you on ya way to last
you stole a rhyme from jay but yet you claim you tha coldest
challenging p was a mistake, i think you might be the boldest
that was suicidal you might as well put the glock to ya head
call me omar little the way i fill ya whole body with lead
you shook, like how they do in AND 1 they juss juke ya
now get rid of that sig and juss stay off the dick of king koopa

[The Coldest]

nice lets get some votes

[problem2k6]

yea.... hopefully people vote... i need some constructive criticism... im still tryin to get the hang of this... juss started..... good luck to u

[The Coldest]

you too, not that bad homie

[Area51]

ill try to leave some constructive feed...

coldest:
i got 2006 problems but ya ass aint one
my words easy buttons they kryptonite so ya faint son
this was weak, if you wanted to make this better you couldve said in the first line something like how he thinks hes superman, then the kryptonite line would've related to it and hit harder
im ahead of ya time like im livin near da atlantic
this years time up i end ya premature like teens who cant stand it
ehh... weak, try to word your lines so theyre even, and try to word your disses so their more insulting..
i play ya like a game but ya life gone i reset ya career
you try to build ya team but i unplug ya life source no more fiction here
very weak... the second line all you basically said was "ill unplug ya life source", wich is just sayin youll kill him, its not really dissing him
its my season im thrivin i sand ya ego then i charge ya
you take a bottle of viagra and you still cant be harder
your best line, this is a played concept but not bad for a beginer

problem:

so you claim i aint a problem but you talkin out ya ass
after this im movin up on the ladder, you on ya way to last
this wasnt that good... its not really dissin him that hard..
you stole a rhyme from jay but yet you claim you tha coldest
challenging p was a mistake, i think you might be the boldest
weak..you just called him brave basically, NEVER compliment your opponent...
that was suicidal you might as well put the glock to ya head
call me omar little the way i fill ya whole body with lead
im not getting this line... whos omar... anyway try to lay off lines about filling people with lead and shooting them, if your gonna talk about stuff like that it has to be really creative
you shook, like how they do in AND 1 they juss juke ya
now get rid of that sig and juss stay off the dick of king koopa
this was actually kinda funny, i like that you included a personal in here, lines allways hit harder if theirs a personal involved

this was close, for both of you your best lines were your closers, so im gonna say problem won because he had the better closer

keep at it you guys will definitly imrove

vote-problem

[problem2k6]

thanks for voting... 1-0...can we get some more votes in...thanks a lot

[D|E|A|T|H]

my votes for problem

first line was tight... disagree with area51 cuz he wasnt tryna diss him he was tryna say hes on the come up and that king koopa shit killed him.. your shits good minus the gun talk..


coldest nice drop.. when i u said "i got 2006 problems but your ass aint one" i was like dammmnnnn what's next then you didnt do anything nice with it anyways overall good job but my vote goes to problem

[problem2k6]

thanks for voting death.... 2-0....