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D|E|A|T|H · 12-11-2006, 08:12 PM

4-8 bars
house rules
24 hours from check-in or DQ

this is my check in

problem2k6 · 12-11-2006, 09:12 PM

ill drop it after school i got some finals rite now...u drop urs tho...u challenged!!! goolduck bro

D|E|A|T|H · 12-12-2006, 03:03 AM

aight homie before i goto sleep

problem2k6 · 12-12-2006, 04:44 AM

first off, you calling me out is a mutha fuckin joke
its like kanye advertising in a pepsi commercial with a can of coke
i spit fire you gonna lose, u better off takin some meth
with ya pathetic rhymes now you have a reason to call yaself death
problems career juss started and im winnin battles call me a wise-man
the m-v-p of this rap shit, like troy smith give me my heisman
juss remember in a battle with me you will always be the second best
like i said im troy smith youre mcfadden, except with votes cuz you get less
i should have three and you should have none so we can call it a knock-out
so before you lay your verse im givin you an option like a contract, to OPT-OUT

D|E|A|T|H · 12-12-2006, 07:40 AM

damn not bad homie imma lay my shit it the am.. too much beer and liquor tonite to be rhymin

D|E|A|T|H · 12-12-2006, 03:40 PM

alright i have a headache you can say that im hungover
after this verse, even your vote i will have won over

you think that imma joke well im not guna go away
i dont use too many multis yah i might use one a day

i got 2006 problems but yo ass aint one
imma cook you like a t-bone, do ya'll like it well done?

some other clown tried to flip it and it just sounded wack
your about to lose this battle, you can say you both got jacked

ok im done wit you, its alright try not to look so shook
its all just a chess game, im the king and you're a rook

if ya'll need something explained lemme know but pretty straight forward

**G-Rated** · 12-12-2006, 04:38 PM

Coldest vs. Problem:

"i got 2006 problems but ya ass aint one"

DEATH vs. Problem:

"i got 2006 problems but yo ass aint one"

...

Quote:

Originally Posted by Problem's Breakdown

first off, you calling me out is a mutha fuckin joke
its like kanye advertising in a pepsi commercial with a can of coke
Decent opener...Watch your wording
i spit fire you gonna lose, u better off takin some meth
with ya pathetic rhymes now you have a reason to call yaself death
haha...Decent personal...Once again, needs rewording to make it hit harder with the nameplay..
problems career juss started and im winnin battles call me a wise-man
the m-v-p of this rap shit, like troy smith give me my heisman
uhh...Nuttin hard-hittin..filler
juss remember in a battle with me you will always be the second best
like i said im troy smith youre mcfadden, except with votes cuz you get less
filler...Avoid goin over the same concepts
i should have three and you should have none so we can call it a knock-out
so before you lay your verse im givin you an option like a contract, to OPT-OUT
Weak closer...Your wording is killing you

Quote:

Originally Posted by Death's Breakdown

alright i have a headache you can say that im hungover
after this verse, even your vote i will have won over
NO!! Weak opener...
you think that imma joke well im not guna go away
i dont use too many multis yah i might use one a day
uhh, hell no...filler...
i got 2006 problems but yo ass aint one
imma cook you like a t-bone, do ya'll like it well done?
Besides the fact that u copied exactly what coldest said...That was a wack ass line...
some other clown tried to flip it and it just sounded wack
your about to lose this battle, you can say you both got jacked
What...Damn this is just too basic, be creative son
ok im done wit you, its alright try not to look so shook
its all just a chess game, im the king and you're a rook
Ive seen way more creative chess concepts...Bad closer

Problem takes this hands down...But you need to work on tightening your flow & wording your concepts better...Your punches are a bit weak, so work on making them hit at full capacity...Be more creative...

My Vote: Prob

D|E|A|T|H · 12-12-2006, 04:48 PM

one L for me... can we get some more votes?!

D|E|A|T|H · 12-12-2006, 04:50 PM

and i thought my one-a-day multi vitamin shit was clever lol

**G-Rated** · 12-12-2006, 04:58 PM

^^Sorry that was not clever...It wasnt even set up to be creative...

How does this:

you think that imma joke well im not guna go away

Setup a vitamin play??

12-11-2006, 08:12 PM	#1 (permalink)
D\|E\|A\|T\|H Outlaw Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 179	D\|E\|A\|T\|H vs. Problem2k6 4-8 bars house rules 24 hours from check-in or DQ this is my check in __________________ If you stand for nothing, you will fall for anything It's better to be hated for what you are then loved for what you are not. Last edited by D\|E\|A\|T\|H; 12-12-2006 at 03:17 PM..

12-12-2006, 03:03 AM	#3 (permalink)
D\|E\|A\|T\|H Outlaw Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 179	aight homie before i goto sleep __________________ If you stand for nothing, you will fall for anything It's better to be hated for what you are then loved for what you are not.

12-12-2006, 07:40 AM	#5 (permalink)
D\|E\|A\|T\|H Outlaw Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 179	damn not bad homie imma lay my shit it the am.. too much beer and liquor tonite to be rhymin __________________ If you stand for nothing, you will fall for anything It's better to be hated for what you are then loved for what you are not.

12-12-2006, 03:40 PM	#6 (permalink)
D\|E\|A\|T\|H Outlaw Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 179	alright i have a headache you can say that im hungover after this verse, even your vote i will have won over you think that imma joke well im not guna go away i dont use too many multis yah i might use one a day i got 2006 problems but yo ass aint one imma cook you like a t-bone, do ya'll like it well done? some other clown tried to flip it and it just sounded wack your about to lose this battle, you can say you both got jacked ok im done wit you, its alright try not to look so shook its all just a chess game, im the king and you're a rook if ya'll need something explained lemme know but pretty straight forward __________________ If you stand for nothing, you will fall for anything It's better to be hated for what you are then loved for what you are not.

12-12-2006, 04:48 PM	#8 (permalink)
D\|E\|A\|T\|H Outlaw Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 179	one L for me... can we get some more votes?! __________________ If you stand for nothing, you will fall for anything It's better to be hated for what you are then loved for what you are not.

12-11-2006, 09:12 PM	#2 (permalink)
problem2k6 Criminal Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 69	ill drop it after school i got some finals rite now...u drop urs tho...u challenged!!! goolduck bro

12-12-2006, 04:44 AM	#4 (permalink)
problem2k6 Criminal Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 69	first off, you calling me out is a mutha fuckin joke its like kanye advertising in a pepsi commercial with a can of coke i spit fire you gonna lose, u better off takin some meth with ya pathetic rhymes now you have a reason to call yaself death problems career juss started and im winnin battles call me a wise-man the m-v-p of this rap shit, like troy smith give me my heisman juss remember in a battle with me you will always be the second best like i said im troy smith youre mcfadden, except with votes cuz you get less i should have three and you should have none so we can call it a knock-out so before you lay your verse im givin you an option like a contract, to OPT-OUT

12-12-2006, 04:50 PM	#9 (permalink)
D\|E\|A\|T\|H Outlaw Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 179	and i thought my one-a-day multi vitamin shit was clever lol __________________ If you stand for nothing, you will fall for anything It's better to be hated for what you are then loved for what you are not.

12-12-2006, 04:58 PM	#10 (permalink)
G-Rated RGFMod Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: ★☆ Texas ☆★ Posts: 7,816	^^Sorry that was not clever...It wasnt even set up to be creative... How does this: you think that imma joke well im not guna go away Setup a vitamin play?? __________________ Back To My Roots.

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