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12-11-2006, 11:06 PM
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Nerdy Athiest
 
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D|E|A|T|H [VS] Sureloc Holmes
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VOTES MUST BE EXPLAINED.. must check in first so i know you'll show after check in, must drop in 24 hours or you will be dq'd... checkin in...good luck..expect my drop in a minute or so
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12-12-2006, 03:03 AM
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Outlaw
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must be past your bedtime but heres my check in
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12-12-2006, 03:16 PM
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Outlaw
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this is my first battle and versus some clown named sureloc holmes
he dont know me but when im around be sure to lock your homes i creep and i crawl in the darkness yah only make moves at night hit you with the touch of DEATH theres no need for a fist fight yah i layed it on you like im the butter and you're the toast sureloc might be a detective but he cant see me cuz imma ghost i shouldda dissed your wifey, those jokes i have the most but there's no way you have a woman with 45 hundred posts
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12-13-2006, 12:49 AM
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Nerdy Athiest
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oh great...another pac dickrider...but when he sinnin he stuck
cuz he ride so much cock, youd think he was drivin a popeye delivery truck! he tryin to preach to us in his sig...i see hes bland and bluffin but when somebody say 'penis'...only time he stand for somethin! a rookie whos wack, with a remote, you think you can win sleeper? i mean, i can control death...guess you can call me the grim reaper
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12-13-2006, 12:49 AM
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Nerdy Athiest
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oh shit, i only did 6...oh well
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12-13-2006, 02:19 AM
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Underboss
Join Date: Dec 2006
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sureloc takes this easilly...
death barely had punches... and his personals were weak... locs personals were much better... lol @ surelocs opener.. i thought that was good... anyway.. vote-sureloc
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12-13-2006, 02:33 AM
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Flow: Both
Punches: Sureloc Personals: Sureloc Wordplay: Sureloc Enjoyment: Sureloc Sureloc takes this without a challenge...Better punches...He had some pretty nice plays on tha s/n & sig...The only thing I will fault you on is your second line. You tried to fit too many useless words in that one line...It would have flowed perfectly with just: oh great...another pac dickrider...but when he sinnin he stuck He ridin so much cock its like he drivin a popeye delivery truck ^^Now you got tha punch, wordplay, & simile... DEATH you need to work on your punches & bring creative concepts that will make ppl think...Your rhymes are really basic & that bores tha reader...Keep elevatin... My Vote: Holmes
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12-13-2006, 06:28 AM
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Outlaw
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0-2 and in my defense he made the rule for 8 lines and only dropped 6, also was over the 24 hr deadline and "you can call me the grim reaper" was already used by me. Fuck a DQ though As long as i get a rematch.
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12-13-2006, 11:21 AM
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Capo
Join Date: Jun 2006
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Seriously this was a weak battle haha.....both came average and didn't support enuff creativity in my eyes or atleast hard hittin punches enuff. eh..
Death: your verse was really average and needs some more support to hold up a steady flow and always try to give good concepts. Surloc: that shit looked like chicken scratch compared to what i seen you dropped in the past which was actually good smh. So with less weak lines i say you got this win. Vote: Surloc......elevation is Creation
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12-13-2006, 03:34 PM
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Rap GodFather
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Damn i would have voted for holmes too ..o well i missed this shyt too .
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