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D|E|A|T|H · 12-13-2006, 05:07 PM

ok 8 lines
3-0 is a KO
24 hours
ill go first

D|E|A|T|H · 12-13-2006, 05:11 PM

i havnt been here that long and i prolly wont stay
it dosnt take much to realize that aye is straight gay

he sent me a pm saying "do you have a big dick"
i replied saying yah but im not sending my pic

i write my shit fast aye looks like your taking your time
make sure when you diss me that atleast that shit rhymes

in just 4 minutes this rhyme i compiled it
aye aye aye what the fuck aye are you tryna be a pirate?

aye-h · 12-13-2006, 05:17 PM

mutilation the way i destroy a rapper
humiliation is what you must be after

dont care how many times you won it doesnt matter
but dog, u battlin aye so u climbin up the ladder

you think you bad, im badder, you fast im faster
call yourself a rap godfather bitch im the rap master

shit, i break bones when i rap u up like some plaster
cuz i cast more lines than any fisherman or trapper

D|E|A|T|H · 12-13-2006, 05:21 PM

alright let's get some votes

**G-Rated** · 12-13-2006, 06:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DEATH's Breakdown

i havnt been here that long and i prolly wont stay
it dosnt take much to realize that aye is straight gay
NO...Weak ass opener...Your quite right...If you dont elevate, you wont be stayin...But if you want to elevate, you'll stay

he sent me a pm saying "do you have a big dick"
i replied saying yah but im not sending my pic
Damn you really on sum gay shit...Nasty shit dood, but Ill give this to you as a personal kuz aye-h prolly would do sum shit like that..

i write my shit fast aye looks like your taking your time
make sure when you diss me that atleast that shit rhymes
NO...Okay where are you dissin him?

Atleast bring one punch to the battle, so far this is not good...
in just 4 minutes this rhyme i compiled it
aye aye aye what the fuck aye are you tryna be a pirate?
Tha aye/pirate concept..pretty good, but you didnt do anything with this concept...Make it hit & structure it like a real punch...Not a good closer...

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aye-h's Breakdown

mutilation the way i destroy a rapper
humiliation is what you must be after
This is your opener?? NO...Youre humiliating yourself, bring a punch & be creative...This is bad...
dont care how many times you won it doesnt matter
but dog, u battlin aye so u climbin up the ladder
Do your research, he's only won 1 time...Climbin up the ladder?? How is that a diss??

you think you bad, im badder, you fast im faster
call yourself a rap godfather bitch im the rap master
Filler...Beyond weak, so far you have not had a decent concept...Bad & badder? Fast & fast? Rap godfather & rap master...NO!! Where are your punches?
shit, i break bones when i rap u up like some plaster
cuz i cast more lines than any fisherman or trapper
Fish lines are played unless you can pull it off with creativity & you did not do that...This closer is str8 garbage...Serious elevation is needed...

This was str8 trash on both ends...Complete fillers, no punches, the only thing you both had was flow & that's not hard considering the basic rhymes you came up with...Serious elevation to both...Be more creative, work with your concepts, betta yet come up with some half decent ones...Incorporate some meta's n wordplay...I dont know who to vote for kuz this is as bad as it gets, no hate...Just bein honest...But imma give this to DEATH, his shit wasnt as bad as aye-h, but it was still bad...

My Vote: DEATH

South Up · 12-13-2006, 06:37 PM

...cosign g-rated completely word-for-word

my vote: death

D|E|A|T|H · 12-13-2006, 06:53 PM

thanks for the votes im tryna lost the filler shit make each bar a straight diss... ill throw some metaphors n wordlplay in in the future.. maybe i just put my shit down too fast and i dont liek that gay shit at all but seems to work with all the gay cum and dick lines i see sureloc use.
thanks cane we get one more voter this shit is in the bag

South Up · 12-13-2006, 07:03 PM

lmao...

Born · 12-13-2006, 07:19 PM

vote death jus because...yall didnt cum hard at all no homo...exactly how the 2 above me sed it...at least death tried 2 diss him

**G-Rated** · 12-13-2006, 07:25 PM

KO for Death...

Dont use Sureloc as an example...I dont care who uses "cum" lines, shits past played...There's no more creativity left that you could possibly do with a "cum" line...

Ranking...

12-13-2006, 05:07 PM	#1 (permalink)
D\|E\|A\|T\|H Outlaw Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 179	Aye-h vs. Death ok 8 lines 3-0 is a KO 24 hours ill go first __________________ If you stand for nothing, you will fall for anything It's better to be hated for what you are then loved for what you are not.

12-13-2006, 05:11 PM	#2 (permalink)
D\|E\|A\|T\|H Outlaw Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 179	i havnt been here that long and i prolly wont stay it dosnt take much to realize that aye is straight gay he sent me a pm saying "do you have a big dick" i replied saying yah but im not sending my pic i write my shit fast aye looks like your taking your time make sure when you diss me that atleast that shit rhymes in just 4 minutes this rhyme i compiled it aye aye aye what the fuck aye are you tryna be a pirate? __________________ If you stand for nothing, you will fall for anything It's better to be hated for what you are then loved for what you are not.

12-13-2006, 05:21 PM	#4 (permalink)
D\|E\|A\|T\|H Outlaw Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 179	alright let's get some votes __________________ If you stand for nothing, you will fall for anything It's better to be hated for what you are then loved for what you are not.

12-13-2006, 06:53 PM	#7 (permalink)
D\|E\|A\|T\|H Outlaw Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 179	thanks for the votes im tryna lost the filler shit make each bar a straight diss... ill throw some metaphors n wordlplay in in the future.. maybe i just put my shit down too fast and i dont liek that gay shit at all but seems to work with all the gay cum and dick lines i see sureloc use. thanks cane we get one more voter this shit is in the bag __________________ If you stand for nothing, you will fall for anything It's better to be hated for what you are then loved for what you are not.

12-13-2006, 07:25 PM	#10 (permalink)
G-Rated RGFMod Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: ★☆ Texas ☆★ Posts: 7,816	KO for Death... Dont use Sureloc as an example...I dont care who uses "cum" lines, shits past played...There's no more creativity left that you could possibly do with a "cum" line... Ranking... __________________ Back To My Roots.

12-13-2006, 05:17 PM	#3 (permalink)
aye-h Gangster Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 315	mutilation the way i destroy a rapper humiliation is what you must be after dont care how many times you won it doesnt matter but dog, u battlin aye so u climbin up the ladder you think you bad, im badder, you fast im faster call yourself a rap godfather bitch im the rap master shit, i break bones when i rap u up like some plaster cuz i cast more lines than any fisherman or trapper

12-13-2006, 06:37 PM	#6 (permalink)
South Up Banned Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: The Struggle Posts: 21,091	...cosign g-rated completely word-for-word my vote: death

12-13-2006, 07:03 PM	#8 (permalink)
South Up Banned Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: The Struggle Posts: 21,091	lmao...

12-13-2006, 07:19 PM	#9 (permalink)
Born Criminal Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 89	vote death jus because...yall didnt cum hard at all no homo...exactly how the 2 above me sed it...at least death tried 2 diss him

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