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Join Date: Dec 2006
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5 bars house rules 24 hours from both cheqs...this my cheq
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Don
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checkin in.. ill drop in like 30min
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Jews In Space > Super Spicey DopeSauce. dumbfuck.
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Don
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sumthin quick...
See.. I pit you against my click u wont get so far cuz the black a'hit ya private parts like censor bars..!!/ go ahead and rap, you wont get signed to no mean-label cuz you steal hot lines\hotlines like u tryin to get free-cable..!!/ See, i go hard as hell and add a lil hype-to-it and this white boy get stomped on like i was runnin a black rights-movement..!!/ So before you drop, dont talk bout fuckin my moms cuz we know u kiddin cuz last time you got pussy was when ya mom bought u a kitten..!!/ I dont think this fuckn noob know my shit lethal-right? So imma get my free win and watch him leave-the-site..!!/ Ask for explanations...
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Jews In Space > Super Spicey DopeSauce. dumbfuck.
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Criminal
Join Date: Dec 2006
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son u cant beat me, wen u lose dont start rantin,
only time u type tight is wen ya hands is crampin, stab this bitch three times like a tricerotops headbut, guess its extra drawspace cuz im bouta leave u folded up, ima rule this forum bow down n call me ur highness, u need schoolin u dum fuk das da only thing das priceless, keep a 40 wit a dot in da middle like a straight a student,(4.0 gpa) leave this nigga all red like a bad test,study up u nuissance, bouta put infrared dots on his body call it hives, i raise my arm like the teacher called on me, only time u raise arms is wen u go 4 a dive, uppin 4 votes |
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Don
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uppin for votes, lets get it poppin
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Jews In Space > Super Spicey DopeSauce. dumbfuck.
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born was aight, but my vote goes for pyrceless. Pryce had a good flow and punches. born had some punches but most were weak
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Underboss
Join Date: Dec 2006
Posts: 1,155
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pryceless:
See.. I pit you against my click u wont get so far cuz the black a'hit ya private parts like censor bars..!!/ lol.. alright opener go ahead and rap, you wont get signed to no mean-label cuz you steal hot lines\hotlines like u tryin to get free-cable..!!/ lol.. pretty good... See, i go hard as hell and add a lil hype-to-it and this white boy get stomped on like i was runnin a black rights-movement..!!/ decent So before you drop, dont talk bout fuckin my moms cuz we know u kiddin cuz last time you got pussy was when ya mom bought u a kitten..!!/ not bad.. I dont think this fuckn noob know my shit lethal-right? So imma get my free win and watch him leave-the-site..!!/ could've had better for your closer... decent.. born: son u cant beat me, wen u lose dont start rantin, only time u type tight is wen ya hands is crampin, pretty decent concept.. not bad stab this bitch three times like a tricerotops headbut, guess its extra drawspace cuz im bouta leave u folded up, weak ima rule this forum bow down n call me ur highness, u need schoolin u dum fuk das da only thing das priceless, this was weak.. keep a 40 wit a dot in da middle like a straight a student,(4.0 gpa) leave this nigga all red like a bad test,study up u nuissance, ehh... decent at best.. bouta put infrared dots on his body call it hives, i raise my arm like the teacher called on me, only time u raise arms is wen u go 4 a dive, weak and stretched.. prycless takes this, strait up he had much better punches vote-prycless
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how about a Holocaust in Space?
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Criminal
Join Date: Dec 2006
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^^^the weak line bout highness priceless was a setup for the next few lines bout skool...i dont wanna sound like im bitchin or shit but im startin 2 think people on this forum dont understand werdplay unless its spelled out 4 them...and im speakin in general cuz people ratin my lines as weak n bad wen theres 2 meanings...im breakin shit down from now on
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Underboss
Join Date: Dec 2006
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i saw that it was a setup for the next line, but either way it was weak...
you should try to lose using entire bars as your setup, all it does is waste space that you could be using for another punch no hate im just tryin 2 give you some feed to improve with
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