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12-13-2006, 07:44 PM
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::...MrBonesChamp___VS___G-Rated...::
4-6 Barz...
3-0 KO... 4-1 TKO... :emo001:
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12-13-2006, 09:44 PM
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Criminal
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let me clarify my name...a bit
This my check.........
The name Mrboneschamp..Champ of dominoes..so call me Sir dominoes... Plus I So-domy hoes..n actually Cum stain, even ya mommy knows... Yo lyrics gay, cause orally with men he probaly "blow"...so, I off this foe.. Say u "Ill", gotta cold? it's blow blow.."double barrell" plug his 'nose'.. Punk ya brains exposed..in unmockry time..haha what a fuckry crime.. Plus Yo 'punches' gonna be'Real Old' like Stallone fighting in 'Rocky 9'... Bitch you get ripped to shrags..stripped to rags n shipped to fags n shit.. Yo, How can shim/(he,she)spit?..this 'G'ay Rated' fag prob getting Ghetto Gag, it's sick.. Taught I was battling a Vet but you Wack like whats that clown's name?... This is Simple Son..so..stained cum, you only got Krusty da Clown's Fame... What'a lame cookie..U Now spookie? Taught this was an easy battle against some rookie?. Bitch you couldn't drop 'dope shit' if u only ate Crack head *pookies' dookie.... *Pookie is the crackhead Chris Rock played in New Jack City..for you urban movie challenged... |
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12-14-2006, 01:24 AM
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Quick Keystyle...
Look...U initiated ya death...And I'm about to shatter ya skeleton chest This shit is hard to digest...YOU SUCK!! So u ignored like Wreckless' text This lame's far from tha best...If I known ya skills, I'd object...U versus Me? I'll rattle Bones, so visciously...Its like I'm givin out a fuckin cripplin disease Ok, now I'm being obscene...But to let off steam...Fuck ya cowardice skills Listen...I'm devouring Bones quicker than homeless doods at a pot luck meal I got you duckin what's real...I'm just taking Bones out like an anatomy quiz So get tha vowel out ya name...I'm replacing u...Kuz bitch thats what you iz!! [Fuckin CHUMP] Ya rhymes are lackin tha fizz...This kid's just anotha wack, deflatable herb Ill put Mr. Bones underground; he tastin earth and gettin graveyard served I enlighten with words...I'm splittin ya ligaments & now you comin up short FUCK MR. BONES CHAMP kuz this battle just brought a curse to this corpse
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12-14-2006, 01:46 AM
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Underboss
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Lack luster battle
Bones Had alot of mutlis and the flow and wordplay was nice but the punches were soft and played as hell.some good concepts but nothing was hitting hard Best line Punk ya brains exposed..in unmockry time..haha what a fuckry crime.. Plus Yo 'punches' gonna be'Real Old' like Stallone fighting in 'Rocky 9'... good diss, but not hitting..and your wording avoided an obvious multi overall 5/10 G-rated Rolercoaster verse..up n down..started strong..then filler...then strong..then filler..too many obvious bones punches..when you try and get all ''horrocore'', you kinda loose the power of the punch..set ups good but then you end it wit a soft punch Best line I got you duckin what's real...I'm just taking Bones out like an anatomy quiz So get tha vowel out ya name...I'm replacing u...Kuz bitch thats what you iz!! dope play on his name..this and that wrekless line is what i liked..do more of that..less of the graveyard chat Overall 6.5/10 V-G-Rated Both of you drop votes on mine and holme's battle when both verses are in Peace
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12-14-2006, 04:24 AM
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Capo
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just feedback. im not voting. I hate G
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both need to sit and revise thier lines a thousand more times before posting. This could've been worth my time if they had done that. but no. keep at it sons |
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12-14-2006, 04:47 AM
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Thanks for the votes...
We both keyed...I did that shit in 10 minutes... Not take 3-4 days like most fucks in tha cage... I aint makin excuses tho...Just speakin tha truth
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12-14-2006, 04:53 AM
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Rap GodFather
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Mr Funny Bones ...
nice multies and word play but them punches wont as hard as G's though. Gotta go with G |
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12-14-2006, 07:06 AM
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Criminal
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I key up everything I do..I aint got the time to sitting for days writing shit...good battle and good feedback..thank all...
oh and I am from the caribbean where Fuckry is a word... |
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12-14-2006, 09:49 AM
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Capo
Join Date: Jun 2006
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Hmm
Bones: you had alot of multis and wordplay with ok flow, but your punches wasn't really hitting for me as much. Lack alot of creativity and had some forceful areas within the attempt to diss G-rated name. Work on your concepts a bit more and you might have a chance next time. G-Rated: your shit did started off alittle soft, but then i got some of your bone concepts which was alittle noticable without really thinking of much. Anyway it was a good drop to me overall. Vote: G-Rated
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12-14-2006, 12:24 PM
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we use it over here aswell
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