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D|E|A|T|H · 12-13-2006, 09:01 PM

house rules
24 hours

damn you said alright but nuthing heres my check in and verse

You call yourself G-rated... well meet Death im triple X
your name i will degrade it cuz your mate is already checked

your boyfriend sureloc dosnt like me i told him drink some haterade
i dont care for all his gay jokes cuz im ghetto like flav-o-rade

ill try and take your advice but im not fond of metaphors
trust me i'm nothing like you i would never date a whore

G's supposed to mean gangsta even though your community is gated
i was raised in the hood so imma change my name to OG-rated

flav-o-rade is generic kool-aid for all those kids raise in the burbs who dont know about goverment cheese and powdered milk

D|E|A|T|H · 12-14-2006, 01:36 PM

what you got G-rated??? this fool taking his time like i have the belt or some shit

**G-Rated** · 12-14-2006, 02:06 PM

Kid I just seen this shit...Fall tha fuck back...

Ill bring a key of 4 bars, maybe less...I wont need much

**G-Rated** · 12-14-2006, 02:23 PM

Why this kid wanna battle...Looks like you made a deadly decision
Listen nigga...Ill bring death to ya quicker than head-on collisons
Who's this lame's kiddin...Fuck a belt, nigga death has arisen
You should have gotten tha apparition to send you a written
Smitten nigga, why you bitchin...Heres tha real..Ya records in a slump
My skills'a cut ya many ways like circumscison surgeons when drunk
You Fake chump...So in more ways than one Im still ahead of you
This was EZ..Now rest in peace ya bitch like OD's hippies after curfew

**G-Rated** · 12-14-2006, 02:41 PM

Damn just noticed..suppose to be *OD'd...

**Robert Are** · 12-14-2006, 08:43 PM

i dont know why death feels the need to diss me in every thread...i already lyrically bitch slapped him...

ANYWAYS...Death...if you are serious about battling, and wanna improve, work on your punches and better wording/vocabulary...You have very simple rhymes and schemes. Work on that

With that being said
MY VOTE: G-Rated...better overall verse

sigma45 · 12-14-2006, 09:06 PM

G-rated

Varcity · 12-14-2006, 09:52 PM

G-rated won this,Easily but I will explain..

Metaphors: G
Flow: both
Punchlines: G
Enjoment: G
Personals: wasn't much but G
Wordplay: G

G took this,his punches were way brauder and affective and made more sense...D's was very basic and he sounded kinda young minded as I was flowin with his bars... D had sum lines but they were very played and trash to my perseverence...

Vote: G

D|E|A|T|H · 12-14-2006, 10:54 PM

i thought this one would be over by now lol.. thanks for all the advice ya'll it's just some simplistic shit maybe i gotta spend more time on my verses.. eh... if it sounds played i just started this shit so not like im copying anything... and in response "trash to my perseverence" perseverence is not a word. if you meant to say perseverance then it just plain dosnt make sense..
basic and young minded >>> ignorant

Varcity · 12-15-2006, 12:28 AM

That's the word,but this is the internet dogz,so I didn't feel the urge to actually find the correct spelling of the word..and as for the terms "young minded & basic" it means elevate and put some complexity into your bars..sum of ur lines weren't appealing and were on a youth's level...no disrespect but that's how I feel...I'm being a critic dog don't take it to the heart

12-13-2006, 09:01 PM	#1 (permalink)
D\|E\|A\|T\|H Outlaw Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 179	Death vs G-rated house rules 24 hours damn you said alright but nuthing heres my check in and verse You call yourself G-rated... well meet Death im triple X your name i will degrade it cuz your mate is already checked your boyfriend sureloc dosnt like me i told him drink some haterade i dont care for all his gay jokes cuz im ghetto like flav-o-rade ill try and take your advice but im not fond of metaphors trust me i'm nothing like you i would never date a whore G's supposed to mean gangsta even though your community is gated i was raised in the hood so imma change my name to OG-rated flav-o-rade is generic kool-aid for all those kids raise in the burbs who dont know about goverment cheese and powdered milk __________________ If you stand for nothing, you will fall for anything It's better to be hated for what you are then loved for what you are not.

12-14-2006, 01:36 PM	#2 (permalink)
D\|E\|A\|T\|H Outlaw Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 179	what you got G-rated??? this fool taking his time like i have the belt or some shit __________________ If you stand for nothing, you will fall for anything It's better to be hated for what you are then loved for what you are not.

12-14-2006, 02:06 PM	#3 (permalink)
G-Rated RGFMod Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: ★☆ Texas ☆★ Posts: 7,816	Kid I just seen this shit...Fall tha fuck back... Ill bring a key of 4 bars, maybe less...I wont need much __________________ Back To My Roots.

12-14-2006, 02:23 PM	#4 (permalink)
G-Rated RGFMod Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: ★☆ Texas ☆★ Posts: 7,816	Why this kid wanna battle...Looks like you made a deadly decision Listen nigga...Ill bring death to ya quicker than head-on collisons Who's this lame's kiddin...Fuck a belt, nigga death has arisen You should have gotten tha apparition to send you a written Smitten nigga, why you bitchin...Heres tha real..Ya records in a slump My skills'a cut ya many ways like circumscison surgeons when drunk You Fake chump...So in more ways than one Im still ahead of you This was EZ..Now rest in peace ya bitch like OD's hippies after curfew __________________ Back To My Roots.

12-14-2006, 02:41 PM	#5 (permalink)
G-Rated RGFMod Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: ★☆ Texas ☆★ Posts: 7,816	Damn just noticed..suppose to be *OD'd... __________________ Back To My Roots.

12-14-2006, 08:43 PM	#6 (permalink)
Robert Are Wherewolves Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Scream Phoenix, AZ Posts: 20,012	i dont know why death feels the need to diss me in every thread...i already lyrically bitch slapped him... ANYWAYS...Death...if you are serious about battling, and wanna improve, work on your punches and better wording/vocabulary...You have very simple rhymes and schemes. Work on that With that being said MY VOTE: G-Rated...better overall verse __________________ www.myspace.com/wherewolvesattackfromspace

12-14-2006, 09:06 PM	#7 (permalink)
sigma45 Rap GodFather Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: wherever i am at the time Posts: 16,572	G-rated __________________

12-14-2006, 09:52 PM	#8 (permalink)
Varcity Rap GodFather Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: R.I.P STACK BUNDLEZ & CAVLAR Posts: 7,276	G-rated won this,Easily but I will explain.. Metaphors: G Flow: both Punchlines: G Enjoment: G Personals: wasn't much but G Wordplay: G G took this,his punches were way brauder and affective and made more sense...D's was very basic and he sounded kinda young minded as I was flowin with his bars... D had sum lines but they were very played and trash to my perseverence... Vote: G __________________ RIP GRANDPA,FOREVER

12-14-2006, 10:54 PM	#9 (permalink)
D\|E\|A\|T\|H Outlaw Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 179	i thought this one would be over by now lol.. thanks for all the advice ya'll it's just some simplistic shit maybe i gotta spend more time on my verses.. eh... if it sounds played i just started this shit so not like im copying anything... and in response "trash to my perseverence" perseverence is not a word. if you meant to say perseverance then it just plain dosnt make sense.. basic and young minded >>> ignorant __________________ If you stand for nothing, you will fall for anything It's better to be hated for what you are then loved for what you are not.

12-15-2006, 12:28 AM	#10 (permalink)
Varcity Rap GodFather Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: R.I.P STACK BUNDLEZ & CAVLAR Posts: 7,276	That's the word,but this is the internet dogz,so I didn't feel the urge to actually find the correct spelling of the word..and as for the terms "young minded & basic" it means elevate and put some complexity into your bars..sum of ur lines weren't appealing and were on a youth's level...no disrespect but that's how I feel...I'm being a critic dog don't take it to the heart __________________ RIP GRANDPA,FOREVER

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