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RGF's Phantom...
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8 bars..aka..16 lines you will battle using your opponents picture It would be to your advantage to base your verse around their picture... NO BITING all votes must be explained with these cats Flow Multis Punches Creativity Personal (who went at the pic better) first to 5 wins..no 3-0 KO JDaKidd ![]() Liyah ![]()
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Rap GodFather
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I aint gonna holla at you cuz ya girl lookin over ya head,
u cant be human with that nose u must be an ogre instead, tryin to look hard in yo sisters room, shyts pathetic , for get it, the mug shot look dont make them girls wet it , u lookin' down , like joc it's goin' down ? NOT!!! , A G u are not, best believe ya grill fucked up cuz ya lipz bulgin in a knot, this illiterate dude, must be slow ...hell ..he in his sisters room, god........now all he needs in his barbie tea party, is a hat and balloons, look at this dudes ears u got the lead role in robin hood did ya? , all pointed up in the pictcha/(picture), i can see him now readin' the scriptcha/(scripture), "DAMNNNN......." this baby jada, lookin' like a lil tyreese on crack, but pause that...wit a lil facial hair who ever "thought" he would look like "Black" (Black Thought...from The Roots) These last four bars, oh my ...damn u look hard .... HHAHHAAA...naw , if you was thuggin' it , yo stamina would be up by far, you need a Hook up with ya phonics skills , read a novel, fo u get stuck like "shit " cringin' deep in the Bowel, |
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Conartist
Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 10,487
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This chick ugly, like her face, She have to Make Upgrade (Make Up)
Your shrit represent your career cuz it's just a eazy fade What you SPIT SUCK, do you like Reeboks and GET PUMP She look like the lead singer from Alvin and the CHIPMUNCKS Better do like a antimated CD and try to make a advance This chick breast saggin more than a pair of Jim Jones pants Mouth is fucked up, smileing for what? You just GOT THE WHIP It look like someone took a BB gun and SHOT UP YA LIP You like tryin to study a day before a test, just shit to cram So your beaver teeth the only thing you got to make'em say dam (Damn) GLOCK SPREAD, have blood all over your body like you ROCK RED She like Mario bumpin for coins,......Call her a BLOCKHEAD Your SHIT LACK, you like a HACK, quick to get CRACK Even her boyfriend BLACKJACK gotta REJECT THAT (Blackjack is herr vibator) But I can tell you what would make you look better in that pic Take about 5 steps back and try to push down that swicth |
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Rap GodFather
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good shit JDA ....
WE NEED VOTES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EDIT* meant to say " These Last four lines" what ever ....some mutha fuckas on this site still think a bar is one line instead of two .LOL !!!! |
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Conartist
Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 10,487
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Single Bar = 1 lines Double bar = 2 lines in this cage bars are double half the time, so I just go with the flow so we dont have to get confused in this peace but anyway Votes |
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Rap GodFather
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word ........but this is rhymin' ...so ...that's how that shyt go ...
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Rap GodFather
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flow:Liyah
lyrics:JDaKidd multis:both punches:JDaKidd creativity/enjoyment:JDaKidd Liyah that YoungJoc line killed you 4 me it ruined ya verse cuz it was good until then
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Underboss
Join Date: Jan 2006
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Ok not a great battle..
Liyah..i liked the barbie line and the sisters room..but the punches didnt really connect, the structure was poor and some of your lines were mad stretched as well., i think u cloulda played on the ogre part, like call him the black shrek or summink.. JD..some lines were maaad corny, but i liked the jim jones line, and the bb gun line..you had good structure, but i think the multis were forced..but overall i think you won because your punches hit harder and you had a better structure V-JD
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