Illustration vs. Aril Problym

[Aril Problym]

No bar max or MIn......first to 5 votes...(explained votes)......3-0 ko....You wanna make this Ranked,Ill?!

[Illustration]

Ya make it ranked..and make it NO MORE than 12 lines..

[Aril Problym]

YOOOO forgot about this......You still trying to do this right?

[Illustration]

Ya whenever u wanna do it

[Illustration]

Just match me...

The only REAL problem you ever fuckin' lacked came with spellin'
So I'll pull a Gallagher on you..pull out the hammer n smash ya melon *
To me? Ariel is another victim..just another one of the dead guys
N for some reason..you still 'force' punches like boxing 'Jedis'
Shoulda known..to battle me...you musta did somethin' special
Cause I dug thru the fuckin' planet just to stoop to your level
You're at ROCK bottom and honestly..never put fear in me
I barely took you as a 'threat'...so why would I take you seriously?
Heres my advice to you..take flight n move..try another site or two
Find BETTER punches..paste or bite a few..then you MIGHT get thru
So this was a 5 minute key and still..your wack without a crew
N I'm laughin cause my punches knocked the 'sense' in n outta you

*Click the word Gallagher to get the pic..it should make sense

[Aril Problym]

Illustration complacent with his simplistic gibberish/
Statistics proves This net critic Illiterate/
HOLD UP...........
That was a bad opener...Huh?
I'll supply a better opener when I open you up!
As lyrical machetes ready to shred him/
I contemplate to poke him up or Behead him/
Hellacious preparations cause hell is where he heading/
Dress you up in all Black for you and deaths Wedding/

I could obliterate you with out words,Call it verbal elimination/
Reiterate Your wake,the way ya mouth move call that Oral Illustration/
This flaming flag showing off his rainbow flag like a floral demonstration/
My flow sells and the way I house this bitch Call it Ril estate/
Peel this fake,smacking you, flatten you til Ill U Straight(Illustrate)/

[Aril Problym]

Sorry I took so long...dun!! Lets get votes on this fam!!

[Robert Are]

Ill
The only REAL problem you ever fuckin' lacked came with spellin'
So I'll pull a Gallagher on you..pull out the hammer n smash ya melon *
good jab
To me? Ariel is another victim..just another one of the dead guys
N for some reason..you still 'force' punches like boxing 'Jedis'
lol. I liked this
Shoulda known..to battle me...you musta did somethin' special
Cause I dug thru the fuckin' planet just to stoop to your level
seen this flipped before but I was feelin this
You're at ROCK bottom and honestly..never put fear in me
I barely took you as a 'threat'...so why would I take you seriously?
nice
Heres my advice to you..take flight n move..try another site or two
Find BETTER punches..paste or bite a few..then you MIGHT get thru
good
So this was a 5 minute key and still..your wack without a crew
N I'm laughin cause my punches knocked the 'sense' in n outta you
good closer


vs.

Aril
Illustration complacent with his simplistic gibberish/
Statistics proves This net critic Illiterate/
aight
HOLD UP...........
That was a bad opener...Huh?
I'll supply a better opener when I open you up!
heard that waaaay too many times
As lyrical machetes ready to shred him/
I contemplate to poke him up or Behead him/
filler
Hellacious preparations cause hell is where he heading/
Dress you up in all Black for you and deaths Wedding/
eh aight
I could obliterate you with out words,Call it verbal elimination/
Reiterate Your wake,the way ya mouth move call that Oral Illustration/
This flaming flag showing off his rainbow flag like a floral demonstration/
no
My flow sells and the way I house this bitch Call it Ril estate/
Peel this fake,smacking you, flatten you til Ill U Straight(Illustrate)/
nah


v- Ill

Aril: it seems like you focus too much on trying to out-vocab your opponent, which never works. i didn't really see many disses in your verse towards Ill, just alot of tough talk that went nowhere.

[Area51]

Originally Posted by Illustration

The only REAL problem you ever fuckin' lacked came with spellin'
So I'll pull a Gallagher on you..pull out the hammer n smash ya melon *
pretty cool opener..
To me? Ariel is another victim..just another one of the dead guys
N for some reason..you still 'force' punches like boxing 'Jedis'
nice...
Shoulda known..to battle me...you musta did somethin' special
Cause I dug thru the fuckin' planet just to stoop to your level
your right not as good as mine :P..lol fuckin with ya.. this is pretty good..
You're at ROCK bottom and honestly..never put fear in me
I barely took you as a 'threat'...so why would I take you seriously?
not really feellin this..
Heres my advice to you..take flight n move..try another site or two
Find BETTER punches..paste or bite a few..then you MIGHT get thru
ehh..
So this was a 5 minute key and still..your wack without a crew
N I'm laughin cause my punches knocked the 'sense' in n outta you
eh..

first half of your verse was cool.. wasn't feelin the second half as much..

Originally Posted by Aril Problym

Illustration complacent with his simplistic gibberish/
Statistics proves This net critic Illiterate/
no punch.. just a bunch of multis..
HOLD UP...........
That was a bad opener...Huh?
I'll supply a better opener when I open you up!
alright.. I liked this even though it was simple..
As lyrical machetes ready to shred him/
I contemplate to poke him up or Behead him/
no punch
Hellacious preparations cause hell is where he heading/
Dress you up in all Black for you and deaths Wedding/
again no punch..
I could obliterate you with out words,Call it verbal elimination/
Reiterate Your wake,the way ya mouth move call that Oral Illustration/
This flaming flag showing off his rainbow flag like a floral demonstration/
ehh....
My flow sells and the way I house this bitch Call it Ril estate/
Peel this fake,smacking you, flatten you til Ill U Straight(Illustrate)/
ehh.... the wordplay didn't really hit..

Illustration had this pretty easy.. Aril barely had any punches.. in text you need more than threats to win..

v/Ill

[Iverson_Fan]

Illustration...

The only REAL problem you ever fuckin' lacked came with spellin'
So I'll pull a Gallagher on you..pull out the hammer n smash ya melon *
LOL aiight opener
To me? Ariel is another victim..just another one of the dead guys
N for some reason..you still 'force' punches like boxing 'Jedis'
Ehhh, was just aiight to me
Shoulda known..to battle me...you musta did somethin' special
Cause I dug thru the fuckin' planet just to stoop to your level
Not bad, aiight
You're at ROCK bottom and honestly..never put fear in me
I barely took you as a 'threat'...so why would I take you seriously?
Kinda weak
Heres my advice to you..take flight n move..try another site or two
Find BETTER punches..paste or bite a few..then you MIGHT get thru
AHH, if you coulda ended on a better note I think this woulda been SICK, wasnt feelin the very end tho, aiight tho
So this was a 5 minute key and still..your wack without a crew
N I'm laughin cause my punches knocked the 'sense' in n outta you
LOL decent closer

Aril Problym...

Illustration complacent with his simplistic gibberish/
Statistics proves This net critic Illiterate/
Good rhyming
HOLD UP...........
That was a bad opener...Huh?
I'll supply a better opener when I open you up!
Wasnt feelin it
As lyrical machetes ready to shred him/
I contemplate to poke him up or Behead him/
Wasnt feelin this one either
Hellacious preparations cause hell is where he heading/
Dress you up in all Black for you and deaths Wedding/
Ehhhh, wasnt feelin this one either
I could obliterate you with out words,Call it verbal elimination/
Reiterate Your wake,the way ya mouth move call that Oral Illustration/
This flaming flag showing off his rainbow flag like a floral demonstration/
good rhyming, not a very good punch tho
My flow sells and the way I house this bitch Call it Ril estate/
Peel this fake,smacking you, flatten you til Ill U Straight(Illustrate)/
DOnt think the wordplay worked very well

Ive seen WAY better from Aril, and Ive seen better from Ill too, both came just aiight to me in this one, but Ill was much better. Aril, not too many punches in this one, wasnt feelin a lotta your lines. Ill, you had some aiight ones in there, but nothin too hard hittin, took it easy tho...

My Vote - Illustration