Ranked: stoneyq2 vs hurricanej213

[stoneyq2]

[HurricaneJ213]

yeah thanks for fixing this, I forgot to put that it was ranked

check-in

[stoneyq2]

good luck bruh..


your hobby is trivial.. commentate on color with mixed visuals
answer what i spit at you, MJ black or white? u just as much a riddle dude/

im the boss round here.. listen to my ordinates u bitch, u snitch
this battle is harmful to ya career.. u couldnt coordinate a risk for shit/

im something like Hova's prayer.. do peep tha 'Stona-Wear'
'Clothing Line' u got? outside ya house, strung up.. ova there/

my rap skills are 'solid'.. and im also 'down to earth'
not even a Hurricane can lift this 'stone'.. a result of the girth/

on the net too much?.. man get a bitch.. i do it easily
call sluts too much?.. he pay for sex like he pay for VIP/

just stay in tha chris rock room.. u wannabe pornstar
this lame couldnt get a 'dime' if he robbed a damn coinstar/


I'll prolly get hate for doing this but just wanted to break it down for ya'll incase you don't get something..

1) RGF's color commentator
2) His occupation; Risk Coordinator
3) Clothing line, dry ur clothes wit
4) self explanatory
5) on the net too much, had to pay for VIP
6) coinstar has 1000's of dimes in it

[HurricaneJ213]

nice man..you came strong, im gonna post up in a couple minutes

[HurricaneJ213]

I supplied your housing, that’s my job, its no hoax
I’m on the net too much? You got over 3000 posts

You’re a fucking pedophile, saw you on Law & Order S~V~U /
your 4 year old victim made ya sig, look at the mess~he~drew /

I’m top shelf grocery product, your li’l scrappy ass shouldn’t even try
the meat in my lyrics is hard to reach, the steaks (stakes) are too high

This is a battle, your lack of lyrical fitness disgusts
My punches got ya exhausted, like runnin’ after the bus

I’ll drive the bus in reverse, to see you get re-tired
takin’ L’s in the Cage? This mod needs to be fired

I know “You mad”, but don’t attempt to retaliate
save your breath, and use that hot air to blow up your ‘date’

[stoneyq2]

Originally Posted by HurricaneJ213

I’m on the net too much? You got over 3000 posts

Cmon pimpn you didn't need to feed tho, I know ur better than that. :th_ban:

Haha just playin, great battle fam, uppin 4 votes.

[Tyme Lyne]

HAHAHHAHA @ hurricane's Verse ...damn ..

This is a boyz II Men Battle ...Stoney brought his inner child out, and Hurricane did the grown man thing ...like a father and son shyt..

Stoney : Hey Boo ? What's UP ? Glad u back in the cage i see u ...

*Clears her throat * LOL

Stoney u had some punches ....it was kinda thrown off as far as flow , u lacked in that area ...but i understood your perpective so i know where u were going wit that , your structure was a bit shakyt , and almost run-on, so get that rust out ya craninum and start polishin' yo skillz a bit more, get that dust off ya brain dude , cuz the shyt making me sneeze !!! naw im just playing . I love you STONEY !!!! Overall Verse Average 8.0

YO Hurricane!!!!!: why yo flow look like something a three piece suited up dude would say ? Shyt damn near Proper . LOL naw im just fuckin' wit ya....
U wear them clip=on ties dont you ?

Anyways , ur punches , vocabulary , creativity , flow, structure, and wordplay was nice dawg i give you that . Peoples be trying to spell words wit ebonicz and shyt and sometimes that joint be looking horrible but u kept it consistent man ... Overall Average Verse 8.5


Punches- Hurricane
Creativity-Hurricane
Flow-Hurricane
Structure-Hurricane
wordplay-Hurricane
Overall Enjoyment- Hurricane

Vote- Hurricane

[Prycele$$]

Originally Posted by stoneyq2

good luck bruh..


your hobby is trivial.. commentate on color with mixed visuals
answer what i spit at you, MJ black or white? u just as much a riddle dude/
this was iight for opener..


im the boss round here.. listen to my ordinates u bitch, u snitch
this battle is harmful to ya career.. u couldnt coordinate a risk for shit/
hahah good punch


im something like Hova's prayer.. do peep tha 'Stona-Wear'
'Clothing Line' u got? outside ya house, strung up.. ova there/
Not feelin..


my rap skills are 'solid'.. and im also 'down to earth'
not even a Hurricane can lift this 'stone'.. a result of the girth/
nice nameplay


on the net too much?.. man get a bitch.. i do it easily
call sluts too much?.. he pay for sex like he pay for VIP/
i see where u was goin wit this.. needs more depth tho


just stay in tha chris rock room.. u wannabe pornstar
this lame couldnt get a 'dime' if he robbed a damn coinstar/
hahah nice closer, i like this bar the most

Hurricane is next..

[Prycele$$]

Originally Posted by HurricaneJ213

I supplied your housing, that’s my job, its no hoax
I’m on the net too much? You got over 3000 posts
wouldve worked better as a reg bar, need more fire for opener.. was iight bar tho


You’re a fucking pedophile, saw you on Law & Order S~V~U /
your 4 year old victim made ya sig, look at the mess~he~drew /
the opener line was nice and couldve led into somethin better.. good bar tho


I’m top shelf grocery product, your li’l scrappy ass shouldn’t even try
the meat in my lyrics is hard to reach, the steaks (stakes) are too high
Best bar so far in your drop, feelin this one

This is a battle, your lack of lyrical fitness disgusts
My punches got ya exhausted, like runnin’ after the bus
not feelin..


I’ll drive the bus in reverse, to see you get re-tired
takin’ L’s in the Cage? This mod needs to be fired
not feelin either

I know “You mad”, but don’t attempt to retaliate
save your breath, and use that hot air to blow up your ‘date’
hahah good closer

This came close.. but i dont like the way hurricane sets up his punches.. he needs to work on depth too..
it took me a sec to realize what he ment by 'blow up your date', he couldve said sumthin bout a doll or sumthin to hint to it.. ya know?

stoney was more consistant and i was feelin his flow, he needs more depth too..

but Stoney gets my vote.. for more consistency.. good battle..

[HurricaneJ213]

Originally Posted by Prycele$$

This came close.. but i dont like the way hurricane sets up his punches.. he needs to work on depth too..
it took me a sec to realize what he ment by 'blow up your date', he couldve said sumthin bout a doll or sumthin to hint to it.. ya know?

stoney was more consistant and i was feelin his flow, he needs more depth too..

but Stoney gets my vote.. for more consistency.. good battle..

If it took you a minute to get that one, you probably missed a bunch of shit

thx

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