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Hitman
Join Date: Oct 2006
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here are the rules.
no wack shit. 16 bar maximum, 8 bar minimum (a real emcee's bars, not that fake shit) you can spit whenever. i'ma get at this soon. one. Sunny.
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Underboss
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Atlanta, GA
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explain to me what "no wack shit" and "a real emcee's bars, not that fake shit" is supposed to mean
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Hitman
Join Date: Oct 2006
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ok...i guess this loser wanted to continue his streak
while i fill concert halls H's venue is bleek he's a chump, Cam'ron at the end of that movie snitchin on his kinfolk, the reason i extended the uzi i'm tempted to shoot 'em - fuck it, i'll just dishonor instead like a Stephen King pause, ha - comma, youre dead. Sunny's the truth like Paul Pierce, you know we heard the name stop you from eatin in the cage like the real Hurricane you from the sticks, so how many battles you really been in? i'm the type to see your sister and steal your brethren Pennsylvania's only good for Yuengling, so stop this rap shit you couldnt spit nasty flows ingestin rat shit fuck sixteen, my pitch' mean. i'm prestine, i'll smash you treat you like a pill-head and kill you like a capsule.
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Hitman
Join Date: Oct 2006
Posts: 410
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not more than a verse and no less than half a verse.
no biting, feeding, crew votes, all that shit. holla back.
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Underboss
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Atlanta, GA
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Thought this was a lay-up? Wrong! Called for travelin’
Soon you’ll get my point like you fell on a javelin Quit babblin’, your verse like a crappy sock that’s unravelin’ While my words burst your appendix and cramp up your abdomen Y’all rhyme the same, feel like I’m watchin’ bad re-runs We hunt 'round here, unlike you it’s fact that I’ve shot guns I’m just warming up son…Your punches are so lame Time for the game, I’ll win this strictly mocking your name The sun’s a gaseous element ignited, this was scientifically learned That and my rhymes show you’re the ONLY one getting burned You call yourself sunny cause you think that you shine I run on solar power, I’m still first to the finish line My verse looms large, I’m eclipsing your words You couldn’t put it together if I cut it in thirds Even your love life cloudy and cold according to weather reports I heard your first date was last winter and you came in your shorts This dude is my bitch, only way he could serve me if he brought me eggs Sunny-side up and Black coffee
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FLOW- HURR
PUNCHES- HURR WORDPLAY- BOTH CREATIVITY- BOTH METAPHORS- NEITHER REALLY HURRICANE GMV sunny,you just seem to much like u in the streets,we on da comp,no disrespect im just saying..like come wit some creativity to modify ur ability to be able to just diss him instead of relating to guns and killing and drugs in every bar...you had a couple of gud lines in which i liked but u went bak to the violence..i mean it''s gud for 1-2 bars but,thats it,we get ya point.."your a killer"..now DISS HIM! as far as hurricane,he came consistant with the attacks and i liked most of his punches..his creativity is what captured me and thats why he GMV...
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Hitman
Join Date: Oct 2006
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hurricane, you went over 16 bars.
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Rap GodFather
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i thought it looked over limit,but i jus thought it was the bold that did it..
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