RANKED - Iverson_Fan Vs. Da Birthday Boy

[Iverson_Fan]

5 bars max
Due by midnight TONIGHT!!!!!
3-0 KO
4-1 TKO
Otherwise first to 5 votes wins
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This is my check...

Good luck

[Da Birthday Boy]

Checkkkk

[Da Birthday Boy]

I am very scared....

[Iverson_Fan]

Here we go...

You thought you were gonna CELEBRATE, well Im sorry yo,
Im bout to defeat KING KOOPA as if I was Mario

To beat me, you need a code, and you cant crack this,
Youre not a challenge, so unlike AI, Im doin this for practice (Yall know about the practice speech I hope...)

When my rhymes hit you, it'll feel like a cyclone,
How you reppin a rapper that got dissed by Mike Jones?

When you try and battle me, youre dyin surely,
Fuckin a dude with no condom only time you RIDIN DIRTY

You reppin Cham, Im reppin Iverson, no way I can lose,
Wait, hold up, IS CHAM WEARIN IVERSON'S SHOES?

[Da Birthday Boy]

Don't be "LIKE IVERSON" don't shoot, pass up the shot
You try to come at me but like the pop-ups on RGF you get blocked.

My rhymes like wearing a bulletproof vest, facing you I'm not affected.
Like you was watching ABC I got you LOST, need help where to be directed.

You straight CORNY, no SECRET I could make you POP.
I RIP- you to the -LEY you wondering if can BELIVE it or NOT.

Like a clothesline back in the day, you get hung and dried out.
Your rhymes get boring, and turn more gray then old whiteout.

Like Baby Boy Da Prince, beating you is the way I live cause I'm the boss.
Facts are facts, this match is over all I got to say is GGGGGGGGGG-ULOST.



-If you have any questions on the bars just ask.

[Jah Wise]

Iverson_Fan
You thought you were gonna CELEBRATE, well Im sorry yo,
Im bout to defeat KING KOOPA as if I was Mario
nice opener
To beat me, you need a code, and you cant crack this,
Youre not a challenge, so unlike AI, Im doin this for practice (Yall know about the practice speech I hope...)
good
When my rhymes hit you, it'll feel like a cyclone,
How you reppin a rapper that got dissed by Mike Jones?
lol nice
When you try and battle me, youre dyin surely,
Fuckin a dude with no condom only time you RIDIN DIRTY
dope
You reppin Cham, Im reppin Iverson, no way I can lose,
Wait, hold up, IS CHAM WEARIN IVERSON'S SHOES?
lmao good closer

[/u]Da Birthday Boy[/u]
Don't be "LIKE IVERSON" don't shoot, pass up the shot
You try to come at me but like the pop-ups on RGF you get blocked.
nice
My rhymes like wearing a bulletproof vest, facing you I'm not affected.
Like you was watching ABC I got you LOST, need help where to be directed.
very nice
You straight CORNY, no SECRET I could make you POP.
I RIP- you to the -LEY you wondering if can BELIVE it or NOT.
kinda played out
Like a clothesline back in the day, you get hung and dried out.
Your rhymes get boring, and turn more gray then old whiteout.
pretty good
Like Baby Boy Da Prince, beating you is the way I live cause I'm the boss.
Facts are facts, this match is over all I got to say is GGGGGGGGGG-ULOST.
ok closer

Very good battle. Both had very good punches. But Da Birthday Boy slipped up with that one bar that was played out and the closer. Iverson_Fan GMV

[Iverson_Fan]

Thanks for votin Jah, 1-0 me

[Wreck]

Originally Posted by Iverson_Fan

Here we go...

You thought you were gonna CELEBRATE, well Im sorry yo,
Im bout to defeat KING KOOPA as if I was Mario
- nicee opener, good multi

To beat me, you need a code, and you cant crack this,
Youre not a challenge, so unlike AI, Im doin this for practice (Yall know about the practice speech I hope...)
-i am familiar with the AI speech, good analogy

When my rhymes hit you, it'll feel like a cyclone,
How you reppin a rapper that got dissed by Mike Jones?
-not bad

When you try and battle me, youre dyin surely,
Fuckin a dude with no condom only time you RIDIN DIRTY
-eh this was ok, you needed acouple more words to fill this bar out

You reppin Cham, Im reppin Iverson, no way I can lose,
Wait, hold up, IS CHAM WEARIN IVERSON'S SHOES?

-change one of them to AI cuz u say iverson too much, nevertheless nice ending bar


B Day Boy

[quote=Da Birthday Boy;1680440]Don't be "LIKE IVERSON" don't shoot, pass up the shot
You try to come at me but like the pop-ups on RGF you get blocked.
-eh ok

My rhymes like wearing a bulletproof vest, facing you I'm not affected.
Like you was watching ABC I got you LOST, need help where to be directed.
-nice bar, good punch
You straight CORNY, no SECRET I could make you POP.
I RIP- you to the -LEY you wondering if can BELIVE it or NOT.
- i like the rip- ley believe it or not line but the ley didnt fit
Like a clothesline back in the day, you get hung and dried out.
Your rhymes get boring, and turn more gray then old whiteout.
-not bad

Like Baby Boy Da Prince, beating you is the way I live cause I'm the boss.
Facts are facts, this match is over all I got to say is GGGGGGGGGG-ULOST.
-eh, ok ending


overall, AI fan stayed consistent with his bars, birthday boy had some nice punchlines but he also had alot of filler and that one ripleys believe it or not almost worked but it didnt, AI' had nice punchlines but both flows were not bad, needed a few words in both verses to fill out the bars

overall, both came consistent

My Vote: Iverson_Fan

[Wreck]

shit, some of my breakdowns got smushed together for birthday boy's breakdown, try 2 read

[Da Birthday Boy]

- i like the rip- ley believe it or not line but the ley didnt fit

How did that not fit I put Rip and Ley you have to put it together.