Decible vs Wreck (topical battle)

[Wreck]

16-20 bars im thinkin unless u wanna go unlimited? topical battle, free topic for both of us, state topic before spittin, 3-0 KO, no biting, no dickriding votes/no hatred/one sided votes, voters must quote both verses and break both down bar for bar, then give feedback followed by the final vote, consider this my check in, whassup Decible, check this once u see it in the cage, good luck

[Decible]

checkin in
might not drop in a couple of hours
cuz like i gotta shower and church but ill respond today
and my topic
struggle

[Wreck]

yea not a bad topic, im about 2 spit in frankly 3/4 mins, just 2 say

[Wreck]

topic: Wreck's life through family situations and music




no religion can pidgeon hold my pricked in position
appaulled and wishin, that stars beyond bars remain intuitions towards my life's mission

never quitting, but tricked into thinking i was so fresh so clean like washing soap and dishes
wrote through passion, pitchin my bat to picken the bliss i stress and to pick it up to listen (like my bliss got ears)

anxiety attacks, was stressin stricted and slated areas of my profession
had to get me up and out my job, had to teach my suddle brain a lesson

locked in pain, alice with chains is like wreck with no game
got the call of my relative's death in that phonebooth like farrell amidst the rain

reciting lines from Wreck's Bible, fallen from earth like airplanes to Cory Lidle
the piano tells storys of my trips across seas and keys, here lies the poetic recidal

got Gods wipin my forehead,
no gold watch crutches the crushing of the people that touched me
went from drinkin Corona to writing lyrics to changing personas while laying on the floor dead
the streets had to see the new me like John Gruden to Chucky (his nickname)

a camp david accord here knock knocking on heaven's door
if death is the path through the bruises and bickering, then life stands as the spore

premium prophecies got this prolific prodigy breeding honesty
God's looking down over rotten seas, spotting all the deviant g's like me performing mahogonay





lines 11-15 (the line starting with, got gods wiping my forehead)- the flow for these 4 lines is different, line 1 rhymes with line 3 and line 2 rhymes with line 4 in those bars

^^ just to clarify in case somebody says all the bars/lines didnt rhyme


good luck decible :th_jackson:

[Wreck]

edit: fallen from heaven like airplanes to Cory Lidle, instead of fallen from Earth, didnt edit the post, just sayin

[Wreck]

decible, when u gona spit man

[Wreck]

spit deciblee

[Wreck]

decible opted out, forfeit