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no feeding explained votes only.. bar by bar breakdowns preferably g'luck
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Join Date: Dec 2006
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leave this pimp slapped.. against me victories you see none..
counting his losses to me the closest he'll ever get to a threesome this'll be the fourth dun.. and check this is how the shit is wrote we've finished three battles... ...and in two of them you didn't get a single vote! I've dealt you a loss in every battle.. so why you aint actin right in those three you got eight.. just like ya record on BraggingWrites! you keep tryin to get one win.. really just stop it please me winning this should be expected... ...I'm known for openin up Loc with keys for real your a bitch.. sweet like candy.. so you lose no buts my punchlines hit hard.. fold you over and leave this fruit rolled up this battle aint even.. you never had a chance to thrive at all get on your level?.. I dunno how anyone could survive that fall g'luck & after Loc drops.. voters.. if you need something explained.. ASK
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its up to Sureloc, idc either way
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yeah. it don't matter to me. cool shit. i'll drop later...or will I? stay tuned.
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your punches are dope as fuck, but really there's no skill in this especially when you have HUNDREDS of other dope cats as your ventriliquist Area is played as hell, and you'll always only have potential all your set-ups 'lead' to wack... and you didn't need to grab a pencil i'll kung fu the shit outta you, my Feet'll kick your kids but you're in no position to talk... cuz your Fetal just proves how much of a bitch you is he never drops classics, but he suck and ain't got nines you could've Cent whatever... and Fifty STILL couldn't drop dimes he sucks dicks, a faggot with a prepared mouth and i ain't speakin' on arguments... when i say that Are out Good luck. Votes. And like Area said, ask if you don't get any lines.
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str8 verse yo
vote up ppl
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leave this pimp slapped.. against me victories you see none.. counting his losses to me the closest he'll ever get to a threesome played this'll be the fourth dun.. and check this is how the shit is wrote we've finished three battles... ...and in two of them you didn't get a single vote! nice I've dealt you a loss in every battle.. so why you aint actin right in those three you got eight.. just like ya record on BraggingWrites! good you keep tryin to get one win.. really just stop it please me winning this should be expected... ...I'm known for openin up Loc with keys dope for real your a bitch.. sweet like candy.. so you lose no buts my punchlines hit hard.. fold you over and leave this fruit rolled up lol nice nice this battle aint even.. you never had a chance to thrive at all get on your level?.. I dunno how anyone could survive that fall good closer Sureloc Holmes your punches are dope as fuck, but really there's no skill in this especially when you have HUNDREDS of other dope cats as your ventriliquist decent opener Area is played as hell, and you'll always only have potential all your set-ups 'lead' to wack... and you didn't need to grab a pencil ight i'll kung fu the shit outta you, my Feet'll kick your kids but you're in no position to talk... cuz your Fetal just proves how much of a bitch you is nice he never drops classics, but he suck and ain't got nines you could've Cent whatever... and Fifty STILL couldn't drop dimes dope he sucks dicks, a faggot with a prepared mouth and i ain't speakin' on arguments... when i say that Are out very dope closer Ehh...this was a very close battle. Area and Sureloc both started off kinda weak and progressed. Area51 GMV only because Sureloc's flow was a bit off |
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Join Date: Feb 2007
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I dont do the whole breaking down thing unless I feel it's necessary
To me this goes to........ Area 51 Area 51 I can see you spitin' this bruh .... ya opener wasn't strong but it got better and you came through with some good personals like mentioning his battle record and even using his name good shit bruh Doom-well man you pretty much admitted he got you when you put that quote above ya drop...and seeing how you came second and actually had a chance to see his flow..ya could've came harder you definitley have a vocabulary... I haven't seen "ventriliquist" used in a battle in a hot one Just try to make a little more sense of ya rhymes because most of ya lines left me wondering "what did you mean?" like when you typed: "Area is played as hell, and you'll always only have potential (was this a compliment??) all your set-ups 'lead' to wack... (lead to wack...how?) and you didn't need to grab a pencil (once again...wouldn't it be a good thing that he didn't use a pencil??) anyways...good battle and much respect to you both -FLaMEz |
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