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Ethics · 02-22-2007, 09:23 PM

Not ranked battle
EDIT: 3 bars for now.
House rules
No feeding
Due tonight.

Thanks Jah for the outline.

Jah Wise-Sureloc
Aril-Rizzle
Iverson-Sureloc

Score currently 2-1 for 'Loc.

K-Rizzle · 02-22-2007, 09:25 PM

I'm in. (First battle on this site finally).

**Robert Are** · 02-22-2007, 09:37 PM

Check. I am going to destroy you.

Anyways, good luck.

**Robert Are** · 02-22-2007, 10:00 PM

aight...

you're nuthin' at all to me except for a stink dud
how'd you get your name?...
sit at home tryin' to come up with the wackest shit you could think of?
nobody is excited by your words, you're just an e-hoax
only time O's follow K...
is after I've aquired three votes!
and fuck ya crew bitch, i'll leave ya group dead
your name just proves...
that you hang off every single word that Snoop says!

good luck
keystyle

K-Rizzle · 02-22-2007, 10:11 PM

Perceive this....~It's the way my lyrics change ya perception~,
"Get destroyed", ~Such a sad mis-conception~,

First flow - First time, ~Let em' show me some love~,
I stay a heavy hitta, ~Somethin' like Tyson wearin' Holyfield's gloves~,
And if I'm an "e-hoax", ~This kid is an "e-thug"~,
Let me see him rhyme about, ~"Yo, I smoke some drugs"~,

Fuck ya rank, Fuck ya flow, ~And first off - Fuck you~,
I come back harder than seasons, ~Son, they call me the flu~,
Comparison? ~I wear Timbs, he wears Lugz for shoes~,
"Sureloc" was sure he was winning, ~Please, someone give him a clue~.

EDIT: Judges?

~K-Rizzle.

Jah Wise · 02-22-2007, 10:17 PM

Sureloc Holmes
you're nuthin' at all to me except for a stink dud
how'd you get your name?...
sit at home tryin' to come up with the wackest shit you could think of?
good opener
nobody is excited by your words, you're just an e-hoax
only time O's follow K...
is after I've aquired three votes!
dope
and fuck ya crew bitch, i'll leave ya group dead
your name just proves...
that you hang off every single word that Snoop says!
lol nice closer

K-Rizzle
Perceive this....~It's the way my lyrics change ya perception~,
"Get destroyed", ~Such a sad mis-conception~,
good opener
First flow - First time, ~Let em' show me some love~,
I stay a heavy hitta, ~I'm like Tyson wearin' Holyfield's gloves~,
And if I'm an "e-hoax", ~This kid is an "e-thug"~,
Let me see him rhyme about, ~"Yo, I smoke some drugs"~,
ight
Fuck ya rank, Fuck ya flow, ~And first off - Fuck you~,
I come back harder than seasons, ~Son, they call me the flu~,
Comparison? ~I wear Timbs, he wears Lugz for shoes~,
"Sureloc" was sure he was winning, ~Please, someone give him a clue~.
nice closer

Uhh...I think K-Rizzle did 4 bars. Nevertheless, Sureloc GMV cuz of flow, punches, wordplay...you get the picture

Aril Problym · 02-22-2007, 10:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sureloc Holmes

aight...

you're nuthin' at all to me except for a stink dud
how'd you get your name?...
sit at home tryin' to come up with the wackest shit you could think of?
nobody is excited by your words, you're just an e-hoax
only time O's follow K...
is after I've aquired three votes!
and fuck ya crew bitch, i'll leave ya group dead
your name just proves...
that you hang off every single word that Snoop says!

good luck
keystyle

(Poor opener, Overall filled with weak filler and lacked your usual wordplay and lyricism. The stand out line was "Only time O's follow K" other than that your verse had no real stand out lines. THe closer was horrible. I thought Sureloc could've came one hundred times better.)

Quote:

K-Rizzle:

Perceive this....~It's the way my lyrics change ya perception~,
"Get destroyed", ~Such a sad mis-conception~,

First flow - First time, ~Let em' show me some love~,
I stay a heavy hitta, ~I'm like Tyson wearin' Holyfield's gloves~,
And if I'm an "e-hoax", ~This kid is an "e-thug"~,
Let me see him rhyme about, ~"Yo, I smoke some drugs"~,

Fuck ya rank, Fuck ya flow, ~And first off - Fuck you~,
I come back harder than seasons, ~Son, they call me the flu~,
Comparison? ~I wear Timbs, he wears Lugz for shoes~,
"Sureloc" was sure he was winning, ~Please, someone give him a clue~.

~K-Rizzle.

Not bad for a "first timer" but I don't know if I believe that this is your "first time". Thats neither here or there though. NIce opener. Overall had a decent put together verse. NIce flow and rhyme scheme matched with decent wit and agressiveness. Should've tried better set ups and shouldve came a bit more lyrical and work on ya multis.

Overall K-rizzle barely won. Surelocs verse beat itself with horrible set ups, alot of weak filler and inconsistency. K-rizzle work on ya lyricism...dude and ya creativity. Overall K-rizzle's verse was more enjoyable. Eh...weak battle guys~!! Couldve came alot better~! My Vote: K-Rizzle

Go vote on my battle with ghost-ex
Ghost-ex vs. Aril Problym

Iverson_Fan · 02-22-2007, 10:28 PM

Sureloc Holmes...

you're nuthin' at all to me except for a stink dud
how'd you get your name?...
sit at home tryin' to come up with the wackest shit you could think of?
Aiight opener
nobody is excited by your words, you're just an e-hoax
only time O's follow K...
is after I've aquired three votes!
LOL nice
and fuck ya crew bitch, i'll leave ya group dead
your name just proves...
that you hang off every single word that Snoop says!
Decent closer

K-Rizzle...

Perceive this....~It's the way my lyrics change ya perception~,
"Get destroyed", ~Such a sad mis-conception~,
Decent opener
First flow - First time, ~Let em' show me some love~,
I stay a heavy hitta, ~Somethin' like Tyson wearin' Holyfield's gloves~,
And if I'm an "e-hoax", ~This kid is an "e-thug"~,
Let me see him rhyme about, ~"Yo, I smoke some drugs"~,
Uhm I think a bar is 2 lines lol...but aiight lines
Fuck ya rank, Fuck ya flow, ~And first off - Fuck you~,
I come back harder than seasons, ~Son, they call me the flu~,
Comparison? ~I wear Timbs, he wears Lugz for shoes~,
"Sureloc" was sure he was winning, ~Please, someone give him a clue~.
Again, that was 2 bars...good closer tho

K-Rizzle...How you gon say "fuck ya rank, fuck ya flow, then put AND FIRST OFF FUCK YOU lol, that would be thirdly...and you spit 5 bars not 3...the closer wasnt bad, good nameplay, but Sureloc got this one for flow and punches. Not bad if that was your first time tho, good shit tho yall.

My Vote - Sureloc Holmes

Ethics · 02-23-2007, 04:27 PM

We need 1-2 more judges.
Will prop judges.

Jah Wise · 02-23-2007, 04:30 PM

02-22-2007, 09:23 PM	#1 (permalink)
Ethics Don Join Date: May 2006 Location: The 'Dot Posts: 2,351	K-Rizzle vs Sureloc Not ranked battle EDIT: 3 bars for now. House rules No feeding Due tonight. Thanks Jah for the outline. Jah Wise-Sureloc Aril-Rizzle Iverson-Sureloc Score currently 2-1 for 'Loc. __________________ [b] Last edited by Ethics; 02-22-2007 at 10:54 PM..

02-22-2007, 09:25 PM	#2 (permalink)
K-Rizzle Rookie Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Groton, CT, USA Posts: 18	I'm in. (First battle on this site finally). __________________ ~US Navy~ ~Protect them, protect wealth, ~Protect that U.S. Health~, But don't think for a second, ~That I'll protect you from myself~ Last edited by K-Rizzle; 02-22-2007 at 09:31 PM..

02-22-2007, 09:37 PM	#3 (permalink)
Robert Are Wherewolves Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Scream Phoenix, AZ Posts: 20,012	Check. I am going to destroy you. Anyways, good luck. __________________ www.myspace.com/wherewolvesattackfromspace

02-22-2007, 10:00 PM	#4 (permalink)
Robert Are Wherewolves Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Scream Phoenix, AZ Posts: 20,012	aight... you're nuthin' at all to me except for a stink dud how'd you get your name?... sit at home tryin' to come up with the wackest shit you could think of? nobody is excited by your words, you're just an e-hoax only time O's follow K... is after I've aquired three votes! and fuck ya crew bitch, i'll leave ya group dead your name just proves... that you hang off every single word that Snoop says! good luck keystyle __________________ www.myspace.com/wherewolvesattackfromspace

02-22-2007, 10:11 PM	#5 (permalink)
K-Rizzle Rookie Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Groton, CT, USA Posts: 18	Here's Ya "Clue" Perceive this....~It's the way my lyrics change ya perception~, "Get destroyed", ~Such a sad mis-conception~, First flow - First time, ~Let em' show me some love~, I stay a heavy hitta, ~Somethin' like Tyson wearin' Holyfield's gloves~, And if I'm an "e-hoax", ~This kid is an "e-thug"~, Let me see him rhyme about, ~"Yo, I smoke some drugs"~, Fuck ya rank, Fuck ya flow, ~And first off - Fuck you~, I come back harder than seasons, ~Son, they call me the flu~, Comparison? ~I wear Timbs, he wears Lugz for shoes~, "Sureloc" was sure he was winning, ~Please, someone give him a clue~. EDIT: Judges? ~K-Rizzle. __________________ ~US Navy~ ~Protect them, protect wealth, ~Protect that U.S. Health~, But don't think for a second, ~That I'll protect you from myself~ Last edited by K-Rizzle; 02-22-2007 at 10:19 PM..

02-22-2007, 10:17 PM	#6 (permalink)
Jah Wise Rap GodFather Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Hamilton Posts: 30,933	Sureloc Holmes you're nuthin' at all to me except for a stink dud how'd you get your name?... sit at home tryin' to come up with the wackest shit you could think of? good opener nobody is excited by your words, you're just an e-hoax only time O's follow K... is after I've aquired three votes! dope and fuck ya crew bitch, i'll leave ya group dead your name just proves... that you hang off every single word that Snoop says! lol nice closer K-Rizzle Perceive this....~It's the way my lyrics change ya perception~, "Get destroyed", ~Such a sad mis-conception~, good opener First flow - First time, ~Let em' show me some love~, I stay a heavy hitta, ~I'm like Tyson wearin' Holyfield's gloves~, And if I'm an "e-hoax", ~This kid is an "e-thug"~, Let me see him rhyme about, ~"Yo, I smoke some drugs"~, ight Fuck ya rank, Fuck ya flow, ~And first off - Fuck you~, I come back harder than seasons, ~Son, they call me the flu~, Comparison? ~I wear Timbs, he wears Lugz for shoes~, "Sureloc" was sure he was winning, ~Please, someone give him a clue~. nice closer Uhh...I think K-Rizzle did 4 bars. Nevertheless, Sureloc GMV cuz of flow, punches, wordplay...you get the picture __________________

02-22-2007, 10:28 PM	#8 (permalink)
Iverson_Fan Rap GodFather Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: P-Town Cali Posts: 4,406	Sureloc Holmes... you're nuthin' at all to me except for a stink dud how'd you get your name?... sit at home tryin' to come up with the wackest shit you could think of? Aiight opener nobody is excited by your words, you're just an e-hoax only time O's follow K... is after I've aquired three votes! LOL nice and fuck ya crew bitch, i'll leave ya group dead your name just proves... that you hang off every single word that Snoop says! Decent closer K-Rizzle... Perceive this....~It's the way my lyrics change ya perception~, "Get destroyed", ~Such a sad mis-conception~, Decent opener First flow - First time, ~Let em' show me some love~, I stay a heavy hitta, ~Somethin' like Tyson wearin' Holyfield's gloves~, And if I'm an "e-hoax", ~This kid is an "e-thug"~, Let me see him rhyme about, ~"Yo, I smoke some drugs"~, Uhm I think a bar is 2 lines lol...but aiight lines Fuck ya rank, Fuck ya flow, ~And first off - Fuck you~, I come back harder than seasons, ~Son, they call me the flu~, Comparison? ~I wear Timbs, he wears Lugz for shoes~, "Sureloc" was sure he was winning, ~Please, someone give him a clue~. Again, that was 2 bars...good closer tho K-Rizzle...How you gon say "fuck ya rank, fuck ya flow, then put AND FIRST OFF FUCK YOU lol, that would be thirdly...and you spit 5 bars not 3...the closer wasnt bad, good nameplay, but Sureloc got this one for flow and punches. Not bad if that was your first time tho, good shit tho yall. My Vote - Sureloc Holmes __________________ "Stevie Wonder hustler, cant see yourself touchin them keys" - Cardi

02-23-2007, 04:27 PM	#9 (permalink)
Ethics Don Join Date: May 2006 Location: The 'Dot Posts: 2,351	We need 1-2 more judges. Will prop judges. __________________ [b]

02-23-2007, 04:30 PM	#10 (permalink)
Jah Wise Rap GodFather Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Hamilton Posts: 30,933	__________________

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