Sureloc Holmes vs. Checka Fred

[Checka Fred]

16 lines
House Rules
Don't matter who drop 1st

Umm....g'luck, I'll drop in a min...

[Checka Fred]

...it's pretty obvious, i'm better than you, flat out...
...so fuck around, get 'broken...holmes/homes' like a crack house...
...talkin bout you nice nigga, yeh that's quite wrong...
...it's obvious, you got it screwed up like Mike Jones...
...WHO!? not me that you fuckin wit...
...i'm make it rain and drown niggas wit my money, bitch...
...i'm new to site, but not to rap, so this sucker's dead...
...got mad style like Lita....SO I'M CUTTING EDGE!...
...i'm tryna tell you, since you don't wanna listen up...
...i gotta 'serve niggas' like wendy's and chicken hut!...
...you don't do the game justice, real talk, wow...
...no one else does, so i gotta keep shit on lock now...
...but i couldn't trust you to win, you fail...
...badly, so to have it all on 'loc' would be stupid as hell!...
...and you could try to change ya style, but i'm real as fuck...
...it's only 'loose change' and you fuckin wit a 'million bucks'!...

[Checka Fred]

Bump...

[Robert Are]

checkkk...i'll drop on this later. or maybe in the next few minutes, depends.

[Robert Are]

Originally Posted by Checka Fred

...WHO!? not me that you fuckin wit...
...i'm make it rain and drown niggas wit my money, bitch...

^^you ain't drownin' shit, you'll be sicker when you dead
and yeah i might get a few cuts on me...when some nickels hit my head

don't speak tongue in cheek, or i'll move to smack you there
your name's Checka?...
well, I guess it just proves that you square
and don't pretend you G, or from an insane place
or i'll hit you so hard...
when you have kids, they'll have a bruise in that same place
never be as good as I, i'm just sickly choosin' poem
Fred? bitch, you're gonna need Lucy & Ricky to be Holme
you love when guys suck your dick, i know what you been about
i know this because dude's testin' the mic always got you in their mouth
mic check one two, one two...even three votes won't hurt me
cuz when rappers spit that^^...only time this dude noteworthy
i'm the champion bitch!...always steady hurtin' thee
i'll make ya brain explode...when I spoon feed Freddy Mercury



Go ahead and tell me I was feeding. Me not give no fuck.

[Wreck]

..it's pretty obvious, i'm better than you, flat out...
...so fuck around, get 'broken...holmes/homes' like a crack house...
-sick line, nice punch
...talkin bout you nice nigga, yeh that's quite wrong...
...it's obvious, you got it screwed up like Mike Jones...
- good shit, nice mj reference
...WHO!? not me that you fuckin wit...
...i'm make it rain and drown niggas wit my money, bitch...
- lol nice add onto the last punch
...i'm new to site, but not to rap, so this sucker's dead...
...got mad style like Lita....SO I'M CUTTING EDGE!...
-nice flow
...i'm tryna tell you, since you don't wanna listen up...
...i gotta 'serve niggas' like wendy's and chicken hut!...
- not bad, makin me hungry
...you don't do the game justice, real talk, wow...
...no one else does, so i gotta keep shit on lock now...
- not bad, wordplay needs alil help at the end, instead of wow and now but still nice regardless
...but i couldn't trust you to win, you fail...
...badly, so to have it all on 'loc' would be stupid as hell!...
- another good straightforward bar
...and you could try to change ya style, but i'm real as fuck...
...it's only 'loose change' and you fuckin wit a 'million bucks'!...
- sick closer, nice


don't speak tongue in cheek, or i'll move to smack you there
your name's Checka?...
well, I guess it just proves that you square
- move all of this onto one line next time so dumb ppl on here dont confuse it for 3 lines, nice punch tho
and don't pretend you G, or from an insane place
or i'll hit you so hard...
when you have kids, they'll have a bruise in that same place
-eh ok bar, seems kind of choppy
never be as good as I, i'm just sickly choosin' poem
Fred? bitch, you're gonna need Lucy & Ricky to be Holme
-lol sick ass bar, ur best bar by far
you love when guys suck your dick, i know what you been about
i know this because dude's testin' the mic always got you in their mouth
-nice diss line
mic check one two, one two...even three votes won't hurt me
cuz when rappers spit that^^...only time this dude noteworthy
- pretty good
i'm the champion bitch!...always steady hurtin' thee
i'll make ya brain explode...
when I spoon feed Freddy Mercury
-good wordplay, nice flow for an end bar too


overall this was a real good battle, both battlers kept focus and straightforward with their diss bars and both had controlled/good flow, although checka fred seemed to come out with more punches at sureloc in every line/bar, but sureloc had alittle bit better wordplay and checka fred needs to work on his multis alil bit despite ur real good verse, both were good but:

due to better punches i believe

my vote goes to: checka fred


p.s. go and vote in my battle with South Up in the cage, thanks

[Kunnin']

Originally Posted by Checka Fred

...it's pretty obvious, i'm better than you, flat out...
...so fuck around, get 'broken...holmes/homes' like a crack house...

Ok wordplay but coulda been used way more effectively 5/10

...talkin bout you nice nigga, yeh that's quite wrong...
...it's obvious, you got it screwed up like Mike Jones...

Not bad 6/10

...WHO!? not me that you fuckin wit...
...i'm make it rain and drown niggas wit my money, bitch...

Stereotypical line. 2/10

...i'm new to site, but not to rap, so this sucker's dead...
...got mad style like Lita....SO I'M CUTTING EDGE!...

Not to shabby 7/10

...i'm tryna tell you, since you don't wanna listen up...
...i gotta 'serve niggas' like wendy's and chicken hut!...

Average and stereotypical again 4/10

...you don't do the game justice, real talk, wow...
...no one else does, so i gotta keep shit on lock now...

Average 5/10

...but i couldn't trust you to win, you fail...
...badly, so to have it all on 'loc' would be stupid as hell!...

No rhyming poor attempt at a punch 3/10

...and you could try to change ya style, but i'm real as fuck...
...it's only 'loose change' and you fuckin wit a 'million bucks'!...

The bat doesn't flow along the same topic 5/10

Originally Posted by Sureloc Holmes

^^you ain't drownin' shit, you'll be sicker when you dead
and yeah i might get a few cuts on me...when some nickels hit my head

Feeding is against the house rules, I think 0/10

don't speak tongue in cheek, or i'll move to smack you there
your name's Checka?...
well, I guess it just proves that you square

Didn't get this 'bar' 5/15

and don't pretend you G, or from an insane place
or i'll hit you so hard...
when you have kids, they'll have a bruise in that same place

Generically impossible, but inventive 9/15

never be as good as I, i'm just sickly choosin' poem
Fred? bitch, you're gonna need Lucy & Ricky to be Holme

Not bad 6/10

you love when guys suck your dick, i know what you been about
i know this because dude's testin' the mic always got you in their mouth

Bar of the battle 10/10

mic check one two, one two...even three votes won't hurt me
cuz when rappers spit that^^...only time this dude noteworthy
i'm the champion bitch!...always steady hurtin' thee
i'll make ya brain explode...when I spoon feed Freddy Mercury

Hmm.... not bad, but not great 13/20

Sure = 43

Checka = 38

I feel as though I over-rated Sureloc, he has disappointed me in the last two battles, although he got my vote on this one. It's obvious Checka is new to battling and has a 'commercial style' talking about money and such. Sureloc came harder with the punches, even tho he feed once.

Sure GMV.

[Robert Are]

Yep, thats me. Sureloc the overated bastard.

[Wreck]

1-1 in this bitch

[G-Rated]

*Feeding is not against the house rules...You can feed if it's not disclosed at the start of the battle...Only weak doods initiate the no feeding clause...My advice, if youre worried about feeding, then both battlers should send their drops to a mod and let them post the verses...*

Originally Posted by Checka Fred

...it's pretty obvious, i'm better than you, flat out...
...so fuck around, get 'broken...holmes/homes' like a crack house...
Nice nameplay...Good opener...
...talkin bout you nice nigga, yeh that's quite wrong...
...it's obvious, you got it screwed up like Mike Jones...
"screwed up"/texas rapper comparisons are PLAYED!! Not feelin this...
...WHO!? not me that you fuckin wit...
...i'm make it rain and drown niggas wit my money, bitch...
FILLER...
...i'm new to site, but not to rap, so this sucker's dead...
...got mad style like Lita....SO I'M CUTTING EDGE!...
Okay...
...i'm tryna tell you, since you don't wanna listen up...
...i gotta 'serve niggas' like wendy's and chicken hut!...
Another played concept, could have been more creative here...
...you don't do the game justice, real talk, wow...
...no one else does, so i gotta keep shit on lock now...
Setup is horrible...Are you forgetting that this is a text battle?? No punch...
...but i couldn't trust you to win, you fail...
...badly, so to have it all on 'loc' would be stupid as hell!...
Okay...
...and you could try to change ya style, but i'm real as fuck...
...it's only 'loose change' and you fuckin wit a 'million bucks'!...
Decent Closer...

Originally Posted by Sureloc Holmes

^^you ain't drownin' shit, you'll be sicker when you dead
and yeah i might get a few cuts on me...when some nickels hit my head
haha...Nice Opener...
don't speak tongue in cheek, or i'll move to smack you there
your name's Checka?...
well, I guess it just proves that you square
Okay..Could have expanded this concept more...
and don't pretend you G, or from an insane place
or i'll hit you so hard...
when you have kids, they'll have a bruise in that same place
Aiite...
never be as good as I, i'm just sickly choosin' poem
Fred? bitch, you're gonna need Lucy & Ricky to be Holme
haha...Creative concept...Nice play on his name...
you love when guys suck your dick, i know what you been about
i know this because dude's testin' the mic always got you in their mouth
Nice...
mic check one two, one two...even three votes won't hurt me
cuz when rappers spit that^^...only time this dude noteworthy
Pretty good...
i'm the champion bitch!...always steady hurtin' thee
i'll make ya brain explode...when I spoon feed Freddy Mercury
Good closer...

Sureloc takes this battle easily...Better punches, more creativity and original concepts...Checka had alot of played concepts that he tried to flip but didnt do so very effectively...

My Vote: Holmes