Ranked: HurricaneJ213 vs Prycele$$

[HurricaneJ213]

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maximum of 10 bars (that's 20 lines just for verification)
due by Thursday @ 3 pm EST (24 hours from now)


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[Prycele$$]

sounds good.. ill have my shit dropped tonight..

[HurricaneJ213]

I’m Armani and you’re K-Mart, yeah I’d say your Pryce~le$$
Like a nice dress cause there's woman in you too, please confess

Your name’s a crisis, how you pretendin’ to get paid large?
when your lyrics are like a dead battery…free of charge

I’m a rap tsunami, even you agree I’m a tropical storm
I strew debris like your rhymes whenever my verses form

How will you diss? The lamest ‘Hurricane’ jokes yet?
When I come through there's no rain, girls still get wet

I have to expose you, as your sig says, “since they ‘Wanna Know’”
Elkhart’s in Indiana, you bump Obie Trice while drivin’ a backhoe

I’ll break your arm and then laugh…to me that’s humorous/humerus
Overwhelm you like a welterweight boxer, punches are numerous

You’re delusional if you think it’s possible beating me
that’s like the hit single from a Mariah Carey cd…

{singing} a sweet sweet Fantasy, baaaaby {singing}

Your an embarassment like drunks doing karaoke

I’m a lyrical felon, words the dope I’m sellin’, snitch…no tellin’
or else I’ll punch ya melon and leave ya “All Mixed Up” like 311

[Prycele$$]

eh.. keystyle.. i almost forgot bout this lol..

Dude im in a garden, i get my cabbage bitch
so niggas touch my bread, there will be action followin, like adjectives..
dude hold his chain up, imma be jackin him
i think we got our names mixed up, cuz they be callin me hurricane after i blow past this win..
its inevidable ill win in this rap battle so dont show tention
cause this dude blows past L's like intensive smoking sessions..
i take the bat.. and u get hit in the face hard..
ya rankin sux and its gettin pushed down more then the space bar
ok im done swingin, im waitin, u fight now?
look nigga, u can throw fuckin walmart at me, u aint bringin this pryce down..
i rip dudes, i swear that my tec tears..
so when i get done killin hurricane yall gon say im a breath of fresh air..

[Prycele$$]

votes lets go..

[Jah Wise]

HurricaneJ
I’m Armani and you’re K-Mart, yeah I’d say your Pryce~le$$
Like a nice dress cause there's woman in you too, please confess
good opener
Your name’s a crisis, how you pretendin’ to get paid large?
when your lyrics are like a dead battery…free of charge
dope
I’m a rap tsunami, even you agree I’m a tropical storm
I strew debris like your rhymes whenever my verses form
nice
How will you diss? The lamest ‘Hurricane’ jokes yet?
When I come through there's no rain, girls still get wet
ight
I have to expose you, as your sig says, “since they ‘Wanna Know’”
Elkhart’s in Indiana, you bump Obie Trice while drivin’ a backhoe
lol good
I’ll break your arm and then laugh…to me that’s humorous/humerus
Overwhelm you like a welterweight boxer, punches are numerous
ight
You’re delusional if you think it’s possible beating me
that’s like the hit single from a Mariah Carey cd…
filler
{singing} a sweet sweet Fantasy, baaaaby {singing}

Your an embarassment like drunks doing karaoke
ight
I’m a lyrical felon, words the dope I’m sellin’, snitch…no tellin’
or else I’ll punch ya melon and leave ya “All Mixed Up” like 311
nice multis

Pryce
Dude im in a garden, i get my cabbage bitch
so niggas touch my bread, there will be action followin, like adjectives..
dope opener
dude hold his chain up, imma be jackin him
i think we got our names mixed up, cuz they be callin me hurricane after i blow past this win..
good
its inevidable ill win in this rap battle so dont show tention
cause this dude blows past L's like intensive smoking sessions..
filler
i take the bat.. and u get hit in the face hard..
ya rankin sux and its gettin pushed down more then the space bar
nice
ok im done swingin, im waitin, u fight now?
look nigga, u can throw fuckin walmart at me, u aint bringin this pryce down..
lmao nice
i rip dudes, i swear that my tec tears..
so when i get done killin hurricane yall gon say im a breath of fresh air..
ight closer

Hurricane came a bit weak on this one. I'm a bit disappointed. Pryce won this by a feather. Very very close battle. Hurricane had more filler and his punches were somewhat off. Pryce GMV

[GodFather]

Had to fix this post:

Originally Posted by HurricaneJ213

if by filler you mean using 3 bars to set up a punchline...

1-0 Prycele$$

Originally Posted by ¤Glõ8ÂL¤

Hurricane
I’m Armani and you’re K-Mart, yeah I’d say your Pryce~le$$
Like a nice dress cause there's woman in you too, please confess
not bad opener/good one
Your name’s a crisis, how you pretendin’ to get paid large?
when your lyrics are like a dead battery…free of charge
Real nice!
I’m a rap tsunami, even you agree I’m a tropical storm
I strew debris like your rhymes whenever my verses form
nice!
How will you diss? The lamest ‘Hurricane’ jokes yet?
When I come through there's no rain, girls still get wet
OK
I have to expose you, as your sig says, “since they ‘Wanna Know’”
Elkhart’s in Indiana, you bump Obie Trice while drivin’ a backhoe
nice one
I’ll break your arm and then laugh…to me that’s humorous/humerus
Overwhelm you like a welterweight boxer, punches are numerous
good
You’re delusional if you think it’s possible beating me
that’s like the hit single from a Mariah Carey cd…
OK
{singing} a sweet sweet Fantasy, baaaaby {singing}

Your an embarassment like drunks doing karaoke
OK
I’m a lyrical felon, words the dope I’m sellin’, snitch…no tellin’
or else I’ll punch ya melon and leave ya “All Mixed Up” like 311
rhyme after rhyme/NICE!

Pryce

Dude im in a garden, i get my cabbage bitch
so niggas touch my bread, there will be action followin, like adjectives..
good opener
dude hold his chain up, imma be jackin him
i think we got our names mixed up, cuz they be callin me hurricane after i blow past this win..
nice
its inevidable ill win in this rap battle so dont show tention
cause this dude blows past L's like intensive smoking sessions..
good
i take the bat.. and u get hit in the face hard..
ya rankin sux and its gettin pushed down more then the space bar
i like this one/good
ok im done swingin, im waitin, u fight now?
look nigga, u can throw fuckin walmart at me, u aint bringin this pryce down..
lol nice!
i rip dudes, i swear that my tec tears..
so when i get done killin hurricane yall gon say im a breath of fresh air..
good closer

this was a very close one!...i was thinking of not voting cuz it was so close...I enjoyed pryce's verse alot...it was all good...than there was hurricane's verse...which was full of really good bars...and bars that didnt do it...u know i get the feeling they were just thrown in...they just werent enough to win....
my vote: Prycless

[HurricaneJ213]

2-0 Prycele$$

[G-Rated]

Originally Posted by HurricaneJ213

I’m Armani and you’re K-Mart, yeah I’d say your Pryce~le$$
Like a nice dress cause there's woman in you too, please confess
Nice Opener...
Your name’s a crisis, how you pretendin’ to get paid large?
when your lyrics are like a dead battery…free of charge
Dope concept...Dope wordplay
I’m a rap tsunami, even you agree I’m a tropical storm
I strew debris like your rhymes whenever my verses form
Nice flip, to throw off the usual 'Hurricane' disses
How will you diss? The lamest ‘Hurricane’ jokes yet?
When I come through there's no rain, girls still get wet
Aiite...
I have to expose you, as your sig says, “since they ‘Wanna Know’”
Elkhart’s in Indiana, you bump Obie Trice while drivin’ a backhoe
hahaha...DOPE, nice personal...
I’ll break your arm and then laugh…to me that’s humorous/humerus
Overwhelm you like a welterweight boxer, punches are numerous
Aiite....
You’re delusional if you think it’s possible beating me
that’s like the hit single from a Mariah Carey cd…

{singing} a sweet sweet Fantasy, baaaaby {singing}

Your an embarassment like drunks doing karaoke
Borderline filler, but the humor makes up for it a bit...
I’m a lyrical felon, words the dope I’m sellin’, snitch…no tellin’
or else I’ll punch ya melon and leave ya “All Mixed Up” like 311
Closer full of lyricism, Nice...

Originally Posted by Prycele$$

Dude im in a garden, i get my cabbage bitch
so niggas touch my bread, there will be action followin, like adjectives..
Wrong word choice...Nice concept, but a failed attempt with the execution of the literal meaning of this bar...Weak Opener
dude hold his chain up, imma be jackin him
i think we got our names mixed up, cuz they be callin me hurricane after i blow past this win..
Weak setup....Basic concept....
its inevidable ill win in this rap battle so dont show tention
cause this dude blows past L's like intensive smoking sessions..
Played concept....
i take the bat.. and u get hit in the face hard..
ya rankin sux and its gettin pushed down more then the space bar
Nice...
ok im done swingin, im waitin, u fight now?
look nigga, u can throw fuckin walmart at me, u aint bringin this pryce down..
DOPE....
i rip dudes, i swear that my tec tears..
so when i get done killin hurricane yall gon say im a breath of fresh air..
Okay closer...

Pryce had a few basic concepts and one that was played...His opener would have been dope if the intended meaning was stated correctly....His best bar was the Walmart one IMO....

Hurricane got this for his creative concepts and DOPER lines that actually connected with Pryce...He was more original and he executed his overall verse better...He had a few dope lines including the 'free of charge' line, the 'backhoe' line and his closer....Overall I enjoyed his more....

Nice job to both...

My Vote: Hurricane

[Checka Fred]

HurricaneJ213

I’m Armani and you’re K-Mart, yeah I’d say your Pryce~le$$
Like a nice dress cause there's woman in you too, please confess
I see where you was going with it but...no, didn't hit
Your name’s a crisis, how you pretendin’ to get paid large?
when your lyrics are like a dead battery…free of charge
woulda been iight if worded better
I’m a rap tsunami, even you agree I’m a tropical storm
I strew debris like your rhymes whenever my verses form
umm, naw, not woriking
How will you diss? The lamest ‘Hurricane’ jokes yet?
When I come through there's no rain, girls still get wet
this kinda shit is mad played
I have to expose you, as your sig says, “since they ‘Wanna Know’”
Elkhart’s in Indiana, you bump Obie Trice while drivin’ a backhoe
not a good punchline
I’ll break your arm and then laugh…to me that’s humorous/humerus
Overwhelm you like a welterweight boxer, punches are numerous
decent
You’re delusional if you think it’s possible beating me
that’s like the hit single from a Mariah Carey cd…
ok...so where's the point of this line?
{singing} a sweet sweet Fantasy, baaaaby {singing}
Your an embarassment like drunks doing karaoke
hell...no
I’m a lyrical felon, words the dope I’m sellin’, snitch…no tellin’
or else I’ll punch ya melon and leave ya “All Mixed Up” like 311
coulda been better

Prycele$$

Dude im in a garden, i get my cabbage bitch
so niggas touch my bread, there will be action followin, like adjectives..
pretty good opener
dude hold his chain up, imma be jackin him
i think we got our names mixed up, cuz they be callin me hurricane after i blow past this win..
ehh, kinda played
its inevidable ill win in this rap battle so dont show tention
cause this dude blows past L's like intensive smoking sessions..
kinda played also
i take the bat.. and u get hit in the face hard..
ya rankin sux and its gettin pushed down more then the space bar
direct hit!
ok im done swingin, im waitin, u fight now?
look nigga, u can throw fuckin walmart at me, u aint bringin this pryce down..
direct hit 2x!
i rip dudes, i swear that my tec tears..
so when i get done killin hurricane yall gon say im a breath of fresh air..
damn...you had me goin till i saw the closer, not too good but it's iight

Ok, lets see. Hurricane's punches were played and wtf @ tryna sing in ur verse. If you want ppl to hear you, do audio. Verse wasn't well put together, with the exception of 1 (maybe 2) decent lines. Pryce's verse was decent. A few played lines here and there but those two middle lines was on point. Those two and a good opener gave you the battle, IMO.

Winner- Prycele$$