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young pun · 03-19-2007, 11:50 PM

Ok 5 Bars

Young Pun Do His Thang I Bang Wit Orangutans
Gorillas Heathaens Guns Aint Jelly Cuz They Never Jam

Shank You And Laugh While You Bleedin Gat Stop
Ya Heart From Beetin Plastic Bag Over Your Head Stop

Your Breathing Hit Ya Head Wit A Bat Witout A Care
Dude You All Sweet Like An Eclair Before You Declair

This Rap War Wit Me I Hope You Send A Prayer To God
Aint Shit Real Bout You B Honsetly You A Complete Fraud

Must You Insist In Runnin Ya Lips Like A Bitch That
Gossip All Day In A Hair Salon What The Fucks Up Wit That

young pun · 03-19-2007, 11:50 PM

Your Turn B

Varcity · 03-20-2007, 12:38 AM

Damn b u wasted no time..well I thought u wuz gone attack dis tommorrow but I guess not..im a have to get at dis tommorrow cuz I gotta hit da sheets homie,so expect a verse,2morro...

young pun · 03-20-2007, 10:39 PM

Come On B

Prycele$$ · 03-20-2007, 11:57 PM

Postin up for Varcity

Sense u on that shoot-em-up shit,peep.......Why hate me?

I'm more ruthless than this gay guy thinks--
Pun can get his "BACK SLASHED" like a "Myspace Link"--
He talk about guns,well,he might think he militant--
But last time he seen a MAG,was at the CHRYSTLER'S DEALERSHIP--
You more ass than Cupid's Arror,yea I took off--
But I stay with SUBWAY guns cuz they all about a FOOTLONG!!--
See that crook's wrong,he talk about 8's and guns--
But I'm a send em to heaven,like Halle Barry,he can RACE THE SUN!!--
Erase dumb Pun wanna-be,ya breath aint existant--
Ask Saddam,he'll tell you he aint see as much Death Sentences--

Sum'in Liiiiiiiiiight

**G-Rated** · 03-21-2007, 12:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by young pun

Young Pun Do His Thang I Bang Wit Orangutans
Gorillas Heathaens Guns Aint Jelly Cuz They Never Jam
Flow is off, bad rhyming...Not a good opener
Shank You And Laugh While You Bleedin Gat Stop
Ya Heart From Beetin Plastic Bag Over Your Head Stop
No punch...
Your Breathing Hit Ya Head Wit A Bat Witout A Care
Dude You All Sweet Like An Eclair Before You Declair
With better wording, you could have did something with this...
This Rap War Wit Me I Hope You Send A Prayer To God
Aint Shit Real Bout You B Honsetly You A Complete Fraud
Still no punch...
Must You Insist In Runnin Ya Lips Like A Bitch That
Gossip All Day In A Hair Salon What The Fucks Up Wit That
Bad closer, no punch...

Pun lacked lyricism, punches, and wordplay...

Quote:

Originally Posted by Varcity

I'm more ruthless than this gay guy thinks--
Pun can get his "BACK SLASHED" like a "Myspace Link"--
Good wordplay...Nice Opener
He talk about guns,well,he might think he militant--
But last time he seen a MAG,was at the CHRYSTLER'S DEALERSHIP--
Not feelin this...
You more ass than Cupid's Arror,yea I took off--
But I stay with SUBWAY guns cuz they all about a FOOTLONG!!--
Not much creativity here, okay...
See that crook's wrong,he talk about 8's and guns--
But I'm a send em to heaven,like Halle Barry,he can RACE THE SUN!!--
Good...
Erase dumb Pun wanna-be,ya breath aint existant--
Ask Saddam,he'll tell you he aint see as much Death Sentences--
With better word choice this would have been dope, decent closer...

Varcity had the punches, flow, and wordplay...He takes this easily...

My Vote: Varcity

Illmattic · 03-21-2007, 10:29 AM

Quote:

Young Pun Do His Thang I Bang Wit Orangutans
Gorillas Heathaens Guns Aint Jelly Cuz They Never Jam
aight, played a bit
Shank You And Laugh While You Bleedin Gat Stop
Ya Heart From Beetin Plastic Bag Over Your Head Stop
not a strong punch, decent
Your Breathing Hit Ya Head Wit A Bat Witout A Care
Dude You All Sweet Like An Eclair Before You Declair
...good
This Rap War Wit Me I Hope You Send A Prayer To God
Aint Shit Real Bout You B Honsetly You A Complete Fraud
naw
Must You Insist In Runnin Ya Lips Like A Bitch That
Gossip All Day In A Hair Salon What The Fucks Up Wit That
ok closer

Quote:

I'm more ruthless than this gay guy thinks--
Pun can get his "BACK SLASHED" like a "Myspace Link"--
hahaha good opener
He talk about guns,well,he might think he militant--
But last time he seen a MAG,was at the CHRYSTLER'S DEALERSHIP--
good
You more ass than Cupid's Arror,yea I took off--
But I stay with SUBWAY guns cuz they all about a FOOTLONG!!--
good
See that crook's wrong,he talk about 8's and guns--
But I'm a send em to heaven,like Halle Barry,he can RACE THE SUN!!--
ha
Erase dumb Pun wanna-be,ya breath aint existant--
Ask Saddam,he'll tell you he aint see as much Death Sentences--
aaaa, decent closer

aight so this is a no brainer to me. Varcity had the punches and all pun's verse wont bad but it had NO punches that were like OH SHIT, nothing at all. SO varc gets the vote.

VARC GMV

Jah Wise · 03-21-2007, 04:46 PM

Young Pun
Young Pun Do His Thang I Bang Wit Orangutans
Gorillas Heathaens Guns Aint Jelly Cuz They Never Jam
ehh...ight
Shank You And Laugh While You Bleedin Gat Stop
Ya Heart From Beetin Plastic Bag Over Your Head Stop
weak wordplay
Your Breathing Hit Ya Head Wit A Bat Witout A Care
Dude You All Sweet Like An Eclair Before You Declair
good
This Rap War Wit Me I Hope You Send A Prayer To God
Aint Shit Real Bout You B Honsetly You A Complete Fraud
gettin better
Must You Insist In Runnin Ya Lips Like A Bitch That
Gossip All Day In A Hair Salon What The Fucks Up Wit That
ok closer

Varcity
I'm more ruthless than this gay guy thinks--
Pun can get his "BACK SLASHED" like a "Myspace Link"--
o shit
He talk about guns,well,he might think he militant--
But last time he seen a MAG,was at the CHRYSTLER'S DEALERSHIP--
ight ight, not bad
You more ass than Cupid's Arror,yea I took off--
But I stay with SUBWAY guns cuz they all about a FOOTLONG!!--
Cupid's Arror?
See that crook's wrong,he talk about 8's and guns--
But I'm a send em to heaven,like Halle Barry,he can RACE THE SUN!!--
lol nice
Erase dumb Pun wanna-be,ya breath aint existant--
Ask Saddam,he'll tell you he aint see as much Death Sentences--
dope closer

Varcity GMV

Varcity · 03-21-2007, 05:02 PM

Thanx for the votes peeps....and I meant ARROW Jah,but gud battle b....1

GLO · 03-21-2007, 05:06 PM

Young Pun:

Young Pun Do His Thang I Bang Wit Orangutans
Gorillas Heathaens Guns Aint Jelly Cuz They Never Jam
good enough opener
Shank You And Laugh While You Bleedin Gat Stop
Ya Heart From Beetin Plastic Bag Over Your Head Stop
ok
Your Breathing Hit Ya Head Wit A Bat Witout A Care
Dude You All Sweet Like An Eclair Before You Declair
not bad
This Rap War Wit Me I Hope You Send A Prayer To God
Aint Shit Real Bout You B Honsetly You A Complete Fraud
no punch...
Must You Insist In Runnin Ya Lips Like A Bitch That
Gossip All Day In A Hair Salon What The Fucks Up Wit That
not bad, ok closer...

Varcity:

I'm more ruthless than this gay guy thinks--
Pun can get his "BACK SLASHED" like a "Myspace Link"--
good
He talk about guns,well,he might think he militant--
But last time he seen a MAG,was at the CHRYSTLER'S DEALERSHIP--
yesss, nice
You more ass than Cupid's Arror,yea I took off--
But I stay with SUBWAY guns cuz they all about a FOOTLONG!!--
hehe yea, good
See that crook's wrong,he talk about 8's and guns--
But I'm a send em to heaven,like Halle Barry,he can RACE THE SUN!!--
ok, not bad
Erase dumb Pun wanna-be,ya breath aint existant--
Ask Saddam,he'll tell you he aint see as much Death Sentences--
lol, good good...

Varcity GMV...easy to determine, better lyrics, better punchs, flow better...whatever this was a clear battle good job!

03-19-2007, 11:50 PM	#1 (permalink)
young pun Underboss Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: STRAIGHT OUTTA BADLANDS Posts: 1,035	Ranked: Young Pun Vs Varcity Ok 5 Bars Young Pun Do His Thang I Bang Wit Orangutans Gorillas Heathaens Guns Aint Jelly Cuz They Never Jam Shank You And Laugh While You Bleedin Gat Stop Ya Heart From Beetin Plastic Bag Over Your Head Stop Your Breathing Hit Ya Head Wit A Bat Witout A Care Dude You All Sweet Like An Eclair Before You Declair This Rap War Wit Me I Hope You Send A Prayer To God Aint Shit Real Bout You B Honsetly You A Complete Fraud Must You Insist In Runnin Ya Lips Like A Bitch That Gossip All Day In A Hair Salon What The Fucks Up Wit That __________________ BORICUA

03-19-2007, 11:50 PM	#2 (permalink)
young pun Underboss Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: STRAIGHT OUTTA BADLANDS Posts: 1,035	Your Turn B __________________ BORICUA

03-20-2007, 12:38 AM	#3 (permalink)
Varcity Rap GodFather Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: R.I.P STACK BUNDLEZ & CAVLAR Posts: 7,276	Damn b u wasted no time..well I thought u wuz gone attack dis tommorrow but I guess not..im a have to get at dis tommorrow cuz I gotta hit da sheets homie,so expect a verse,2morro... __________________ RIP GRANDPA,FOREVER

03-20-2007, 10:39 PM	#4 (permalink)
young pun Underboss Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: STRAIGHT OUTTA BADLANDS Posts: 1,035	Come On B __________________ BORICUA

03-20-2007, 11:57 PM	#5 (permalink)
Prycele$$ Don Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Elkhart, dat C.O.E niggas... Posts: 2,747	Postin up for Varcity Sense u on that shoot-em-up shit,peep.......Why hate me? I'm more ruthless than this gay guy thinks-- Pun can get his "BACK SLASHED" like a "Myspace Link"-- He talk about guns,well,he might think he militant-- But last time he seen a MAG,was at the CHRYSTLER'S DEALERSHIP-- You more ass than Cupid's Arror,yea I took off-- But I stay with SUBWAY guns cuz they all about a FOOTLONG!!-- See that crook's wrong,he talk about 8's and guns-- But I'm a send em to heaven,like Halle Barry,he can RACE THE SUN!!-- Erase dumb Pun wanna-be,ya breath aint existant-- Ask Saddam,he'll tell you he aint see as much Death Sentences-- Sum'in Liiiiiiiiiight __________________ Jews In Space > Super Spicey DopeSauce. dumbfuck.

03-21-2007, 04:46 PM	#8 (permalink)
Jah Wise Rap GodFather Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Hamilton Posts: 30,933	Young Pun Young Pun Do His Thang I Bang Wit Orangutans Gorillas Heathaens Guns Aint Jelly Cuz They Never Jam ehh...ight Shank You And Laugh While You Bleedin Gat Stop Ya Heart From Beetin Plastic Bag Over Your Head Stop weak wordplay Your Breathing Hit Ya Head Wit A Bat Witout A Care Dude You All Sweet Like An Eclair Before You Declair good This Rap War Wit Me I Hope You Send A Prayer To God Aint Shit Real Bout You B Honsetly You A Complete Fraud gettin better Must You Insist In Runnin Ya Lips Like A Bitch That Gossip All Day In A Hair Salon What The Fucks Up Wit That ok closer Varcity I'm more ruthless than this gay guy thinks-- Pun can get his "BACK SLASHED" like a "Myspace Link"-- o shit He talk about guns,well,he might think he militant-- But last time he seen a MAG,was at the CHRYSTLER'S DEALERSHIP-- ight ight, not bad You more ass than Cupid's Arror,yea I took off-- But I stay with SUBWAY guns cuz they all about a FOOTLONG!!-- Cupid's Arror? See that crook's wrong,he talk about 8's and guns-- But I'm a send em to heaven,like Halle Barry,he can RACE THE SUN!!-- lol nice Erase dumb Pun wanna-be,ya breath aint existant-- Ask Saddam,he'll tell you he aint see as much Death Sentences-- dope closer Varcity GMV __________________

03-21-2007, 05:02 PM	#9 (permalink)
Varcity Rap GodFather Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: R.I.P STACK BUNDLEZ & CAVLAR Posts: 7,276	Thanx for the votes peeps....and I meant ARROW Jah,but gud battle b....1 __________________ RIP GRANDPA,FOREVER

03-21-2007, 05:06 PM	#10 (permalink)
GLO Underboss Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Reppin:: Long Island//NY Posts: 1,389	Young Pun: Young Pun Do His Thang I Bang Wit Orangutans Gorillas Heathaens Guns Aint Jelly Cuz They Never Jam good enough opener Shank You And Laugh While You Bleedin Gat Stop Ya Heart From Beetin Plastic Bag Over Your Head Stop ok Your Breathing Hit Ya Head Wit A Bat Witout A Care Dude You All Sweet Like An Eclair Before You Declair not bad This Rap War Wit Me I Hope You Send A Prayer To God Aint Shit Real Bout You B Honsetly You A Complete Fraud no punch... Must You Insist In Runnin Ya Lips Like A Bitch That Gossip All Day In A Hair Salon What The Fucks Up Wit That not bad, ok closer... Varcity: I'm more ruthless than this gay guy thinks-- Pun can get his "BACK SLASHED" like a "Myspace Link"-- good He talk about guns,well,he might think he militant-- But last time he seen a MAG,was at the CHRYSTLER'S DEALERSHIP-- yesss, nice You more ass than Cupid's Arror,yea I took off-- But I stay with SUBWAY guns cuz they all about a FOOTLONG!!-- hehe yea, good See that crook's wrong,he talk about 8's and guns-- But I'm a send em to heaven,like Halle Barry,he can RACE THE SUN!!-- ok, not bad Erase dumb Pun wanna-be,ya breath aint existant-- Ask Saddam,he'll tell you he aint see as much Death Sentences-- lol, good good... Varcity GMV...easy to determine, better lyrics, better punchs, flow better...whatever this was a clear battle good job! __________________

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