Wallie Vs Maniak

[wallie]

Here it is man,

ill drop first

imma do 4 bars, sorry for that, but i got shit to handle to, so:

My shit is transatlantic like the first flight from the airbus380
While youre struggeling ill become a legend like the late Jay D
B, your always braggin bout bangin them fine ass hoes,
But your just an stuntdick inserted by them pros.
Talkan bout it, when i see a women i feels like my dick is alive,
i call him the 1.5 million dollar man, its like my dick's signed to Jive
So, you wanna battle, this shit was top of the head,
Its that i cant type much in a minute or else you had to face 20 bars instead

im out, as i said, go thangs do to, but man, good luck

[maniak]

fuck nigga i do this quick, who u wit, my words so hard they'll even
bruise ur whip,
i choose to flip, birds at these fools that spit, like dudes the shit, and they don't know who they foolin wit
grab a gar stuff it light pass the gar, i think it's sweet u got a picture of ur
moms as ur avatar,
i'm laughing hard, "WESTSIDE" praise Alla, Betty lotten in the House! grams is raw,

I justed match I got 3 sreaming kids ready to goto Wal-Mart

maybe someother time we'll go for the long haul

[wallie]

Originally Posted by maniak

maybe someother time we'll go for the long haul

copy that man

and the votes can start now

[GLO]

Wallie:

My shit is transatlantic like the first flight from the airbus380
While youre struggeling ill become a legend like the late Jay D
nope...
B, your always braggin bout bangin them fine ass hoes,
But your just an stuntdick inserted by them pros.
an stuntdick? just fucked ur flow...nope...
Talkan bout it, when i see a women i feels like my dick is alive,
i call him the 1.5 million dollar man, its like my dick's signed to Jive
now this bar dont even have a punch...
So, you wanna battle, this shit was top of the head,
Its that i cant type much in a minute or else you had to face 20 bars instead
its the best one of ur bars...but still aint good

maniak:

fuck nigga i do this quick, who u wit, my words so hard they'll even
bruise ur whip,
ok...not great, but good multis
i choose to flip, birds at these fools that spit, like dudes the shit, and they don't know who they foolin wit
ok...good multis
grab a gar stuff it light pass the gar, i think it's sweet u got a picture of ur
moms as ur avatar,
nice!...again multis
i'm laughing hard, "WESTSIDE" praise Alla, Betty lotten in the House! grams is raw,
lol...nice...

easy to determine winner on this...maniak got this one for sure, he put in multis, punches plus creativity...and wallie lacked punches and sense to his verse...man u gotta use some creativity, use imagination, make ur bars connect and try buildin up to make ur verse come out hard at the end, ya dig?!
maniak GMV

[maniak]

thanx glo8al for voting

[G-Rated]

Originally Posted by Wallie

My shit is transatlantic like the first flight from the airbus380
While youre struggeling ill become a legend like the late Jay D
Not a good opener...Setup was better than the 2nd line
B, your always braggin bout bangin them fine ass hoes,
But your just an stuntdick inserted by them pros.
Not feelin this, no punch!!
Talkan bout it, when i see a women i feels like my dick is alive,
i call him the 1.5 million dollar man, its like my dick's signed to Jive
Uhh...No! Are you or yo dick battlin? Straight FILLER!!
So, you wanna battle, this shit was top of the head,
Its that i cant type much in a minute or else you had to face 20 bars instead
Bad closer, no punch!!

This verse lacked everything; flow, punches, wordplay, personals...Your concepts went no where and most of your lines were filler...Try incorporating punches and structure your verse better...

Originally Posted by Maniak

fuck nigga i do this quick, who u wit, my words so hard they'll even
bruise ur whip,
Nice rhyming, but that's about it...No solid punch here...
i choose to flip, birds at these fools that spit, like dudes the shit, and they don't know who they foolin wit
Once again, no punch!!
grab a gar stuff it light pass the gar, i think it's sweet u got a picture of ur
moms as ur avatar,
i'm laughing hard, "WESTSIDE" praise Alla, Betty lotten in the House! grams is raw,
hahaha...Nice personal, good...

Overall, this verse had the flow and multies but lacked solid punches...The personal attempts with the avy/grandmoms shit, won this tho...

My Vote: Maniak


Yall keep elevatin

[wallie]

haha, thanks for voting but
you don't now papoose man?

[Area51]

Originally Posted by wallie

My shit is transatlantic like the first flight from the airbus380
While youre struggeling ill become a legend like the late Jay D
self gloryish..
B, your always braggin bout bangin them fine ass hoes,
But your just an stuntdick inserted by them pros.
weak
Talkan bout it, when i see a women i feels like my dick is alive,
i call him the 1.5 million dollar man, its like my dick's signed to Jive
self glory
So, you wanna battle, this shit was top of the head,
Its that i cant type much in a minute or else you had to face 20 bars instead
no punch

Originally Posted by maniak

fuck nigga i do this quick, who u wit, my words so hard they'll even
bruise ur whip,
weak but at leasst its a punch
i choose to flip, birds at these fools that spit, like dudes the shit, and they don't know who they foolin wit
nope
grab a gar stuff it light pass the gar, i think it's sweet u got a picture of ur moms as ur avatar,
i'm laughing hard, "WESTSIDE" praise Alla, Betty lotten in the House! grams is raw,
[b]eh.[b]

aight, wallie was structered better, but it wasnt really a battle verse, too much self glory & that doesnt win anything, focus on dissing your opponent instead of talkin about yourself
Maniak takes this cuz he had punches dissing u.. & slightly better ones @ it..

v/ Maniak

keep elevatin

[need fo weed]

aight it seems like a k.o for maniak

[grillzman859]

maniak destroyed u wallie