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Thug
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5 bars
house rules maximum 2 days to post after the 1st one did u check in and we can start the battle u can go first good luck
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Rap GodFather
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yeah ill start
yo im gonna slap you like crack said to the mexicans// and bye the way that new game style it aint workin// you a bitch ass nigga fo username need fo weed// need fo weed huh?nigga you nead need emergency in yo face// we doin house rules whel then i do it to my rules// i kriss kross you like adam brocky did in the summer park// im kikkin it freestyle homie you kickin itt like weak child huh?//
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Thug
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okaaaay... that was 3 'bars' and one line.....
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ok i think this should be enough...here's my verse:
Back like the Doctor’s Advocate, it’s time to spit my verse// U see ur words can’t even touch me while mine smack u down like a curse// This pussy got 2pac as a pic, I think I should slap her// Cause u lack like Lil’ Wayne but atleast he can be called rapper// I’m a criminal but I guess it’s not illegal to tell u this// Ur verse fell apart but u still think it’s a diss// U’re ablasphemy for ev’ryone ever spitted a rhyme// Cause with the crap that u write, it’s same as committing a crime// That was it, from bar one to bar five// Feelin happy now cuz unlike ur “shit” my verse’s still alive//
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Thug
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shit bar 4..............it's a blasphemy....
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Rap GodFather
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Keighley, England
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need fo weeds was the best
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Rap GodFather
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Rapper:
what the fuck happened ...to yo third bar ? shyt dont rhyme ...i know you staRTIN' off but you need to polish yo skillz in diss the rapper above you threaD....everything in yo verse was lacking ...and learn how to structure yo bars ...and lyrics .... need fo weed yo drop was mehhh...wont nothing special either but you structured yo verse , u had flow , u lacked punches , and lyricism , but u kept a certain balance ...to it and it even'd out .... My vote goes to ....((((DRUM ROLL PLEASE!))))) Need FO Weed |
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