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08-11-2008, 08:42 PM
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Coherent vs. Sureloc Holmes
8 Bars
House Rules Due 24 After Check This is my check Use These Cats or the vote don't count Punches: Personals: Wordplay: Creativity: Multies: Enjoyment: Overall:
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08-12-2008, 03:31 AM
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Wherewolves
 
Join Date: Jan 2006
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Dropping now.
Fuck you and your wack shit. ..my landlord hates me f'real, i don't ever stack dimes but this month i might actually pay the 'rent...just so he'll stop writin wack rhymes .hey its cool ur wack...but just quit it, honestly shit, i'll even battle you twice just to hand you a parallels like geometry ur shit is always long-winded and boring...i'm like, 'finish lame' ..ppl told him to get to the points so much he thought he'd put it in his name i'm truly sorry that your chicks starting to look old and all that ..i left my nuts on her forehead so long, she has wrinkle imprints from my ball sack and this cat claims he's ill but really you ain't foolin me ..'here lies so much you'd think he was delivering his own eulogy thats all you get sucka.
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08-12-2008, 04:04 PM
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Rookie
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Nice verse Holmes.....
Ah Hem.... I’ma ‘Sure Lock’ This Battle, And I Ain’t Talkin ‘Secure Homes’ (Holmes) Cause You Wouldn’t Be ‘On My Level’ If I Was A Fuckin Gnome I Roam(Rome)Threw Ya Streets Like The Vatican, You Just A Back Up Man With Lack Of Fam, Like That Little Orphan Ann His Travel Plan? Exit RGF On The Nearest Flight Now Look How Quick He Moves Just To Get Out Of ‘Sight’(Site) No Fight In This Dog At All, No Will To Write Cause If He’s As ‘Aggressive’ As He Says, He’s Sure To ‘Bite’ I Ain’t Playin Duke, So Watch Ya Tone, You Never Off The Dome! You Couldn’t Be ‘Off The Hook’ If Ya Dropped Ya ‘Phone’ Dude Doesn’t Get My Drift, He’s Weaker Than Months His Verse Will Get Ate Quick, He Must Be ‘Out To Lunch’ Bound To Crunch, Like Landfill Equipment, He’s Trash Smash And Thrash Your Scripts Like Rockers In Mash
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08-12-2008, 10:11 PM
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Wherewolves
Join Date: Jan 2006
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Votes.
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08-15-2008, 02:39 PM
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Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: In VA...Clearing Her Mind...
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aight ..aight ...
let me break this shyt down ..nice battles to both ...i applaud .. Welcome Back Surelocholmes.... aight... Creativity: Both Played Punches - (man coherent u had a lot man man -1 ) Style of Originality-Sureloc Punches-Sureloc Momma Plays or ya Girl lines-Sureloc man some things dont ever change dawg . lol -1 Wordplay-Coherent Metaphors-Sureloc Enjoyment-Sureloc.. Sureloc -came wit his usual style ...like back in the dayz ...still u got the girl and momma lines ..dude that shyt aint hot no more . i wout feeling dat . work on it . Coherent - yo punches was kinda played , dawg u had a lot ...that were played . seriously man . work on originality . Vote - Sureloc by a hair . Last edited by Tyme Lyne; 08-15-2008 at 02:41 PM.. |
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08-15-2008, 06:44 PM
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Wherewolves
Join Date: Jan 2006
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WTF. I had one girl line!
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08-15-2008, 09:11 PM
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i'm truly sorry that your chicks starting to look old and all that
..i left my nuts on her forehead so long, she has wrinkle imprints from my ball sack and this cat claims he's ill but really you ain't foolin me ..'here lies so much you'd think he was delivering his own eulogy >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> coherents whole verse
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08-19-2008, 05:14 PM
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RGFMod
Join Date: Dec 2005
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Punches: Sure
Personals: None Wordplay: Both Creativity: Sure Multies: uhh neither had complex multies Enjoyment: Sure v/Sure |
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