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Old 11-10-2007, 08:30 PM   #1 (permalink)
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The marijuana calms me, feel the THC carress my chest gently
Mary's my wifey, I pipe her nightly..euphoria's where she sends me
Jetplanes couldnt sustain Janes Range, im in the stratosphere
Spark'd a L n had a beer...herb bangin in my brain, about ta shatter ears
I smoke bags of joy, these kids puffin sacks'a fear..everything I blow is grown gifted
Resin drippin from my nose shows im lifted,
N my clothes 'rock trees'..THIS IS THE 'ROLLIN STONED CHRISTMAS'
I treat a dutch like an enemy, split em n take the guts out then I roll on the crime scene
But they aint even worth'a dime'a thai green, get the picture, this fine line is blinding!!!


Im too high kids, you needa cop anotha L
turn a youngin ta my lungs n make em suffer hell
fuck thuggin bustin shells, me? I got the iron lung
If ya steppin to the buddah guru, i think you need ta wisen some


Chief blunts like tree trunks, they say 'he stunk like 3 skunks'
In dreams I see the green dutch, diagnosed a higher dose of weed lust
Hand ta hand sack sales n trips ta the corner store before I score some more
Proud ta see em bow ta me for smokin Maui hourly, not just when im sorta bored
Got me smokin J's durin short breaks on court dates, even a pipe in my locker at work
even in collars of shirts, whats all'a this worth...
They say that drugs'a bad i've heard enough'a that, theres alot that are worse
n if it stimulates minds then you emulate lies, n try ta abbreviate rights
by shortening freedom and enforcing your reason, we cant appreciate life


Im too high kids, you needa cop anotha L
turn a youngin ta my lungs n make em suffer hell
fuck thuggin bustin shells, me? I got the iron lung
If ya steppin to the buddah guru, i think you need ta wisen some


I smoke more then I shower, at least 3 freaks in my cigarette case
tryna sell mid grade, the bigger hit that it takes the more I figure its fake
you slitherin snakes, I'll re-up on the true chronic these dudes wanted
if you bong it, you'd vomit...true? honest! so sticky ya thinkin theres glue on it
I got the best sativa of cheebas, ya need ta achieve the peak'a the ces trip
been handed the best piff, damagin chest hits..
im left restless from hittin blunts the siza'a my heads width, you left breatheless
my only depression is if you mention my droors empty n I couldnt afford any
or maybe if I cought cancer, but before I'd explore where the lord sent me...
I'd get tore to the floor if its 4:20...


Im too high kids, you needa cop anotha L
turn a youngin ta my lungs n make em suffer hell
fuck thuggin bustin shells, me? I got the iron lung
If ya steppin to the buddah guru, i think you need ta wisen some

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Old 11-11-2007, 03:59 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Chief blunts like tree trunks, they say 'he stunk like 3 skunks'

was a sick line
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Old 11-12-2007, 12:59 AM   #4 (permalink)
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yo casper ....as usual u fucked up , same o'l shyt Nice topic to fit the drop man , and they way you crafted yo high into this piece ...straight up realness . now put the weed down and give me a Hug YO !!!!!!
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Dope piece multies were sick fam!! imagery was amaziiinnnn

This right here was my fav section:

I smoke more then I shower, at least 3 freaks in my cigarette case
tryna sell mid grade, the bigger hit that it takes the more I figure its fake
you slitherin snakes, I'll re-up on the true chronic these dudes wanted
if you bong it, you'd vomit...true? honest! so sticky ya thinkin theres glue on it
I got the best sativa of cheebas, ya need ta achieve the peak'a the ces trip
been handed the best piff, damagin chest hits..
im left restless from hittin blunts the siza'a my heads width, you left breatheless
my only depression is if you mention my droors empty n I couldnt afford any
or maybe if I cought cancer, but before I'd explore where the lord sent me...
I'd get tore to the floor if its 4:20...
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Old 11-14-2007, 06:00 AM   #6 (permalink)
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loved ti

Chief blunts like tree trunks, they say 'he stunk like 3 skunks'

was a sick line
thankya much...

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yo casper ....as usual u fucked up , same o'l shyt Nice topic to fit the drop man , and they way you crafted yo high into this piece ...straight up realness . now put the weed down and give me a Hug YO !!!!!!
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Dope piece multies were sick fam!! imagery was amaziiinnnn

This right here was my fav section:

I smoke more then I shower, at least 3 freaks in my cigarette case
tryna sell mid grade, the bigger hit that it takes the more I figure its fake
you slitherin snakes, I'll re-up on the true chronic these dudes wanted
if you bong it, you'd vomit...true? honest! so sticky ya thinkin theres glue on it
I got the best sativa of cheebas, ya need ta achieve the peak'a the ces trip
been handed the best piff, damagin chest hits..
im left restless from hittin blunts the siza'a my heads width, you left breatheless
my only depression is if you mention my droors empty n I couldnt afford any
or maybe if I cought cancer, but before I'd explore where the lord sent me...
I'd get tore to the floor if its 4:20...
thanks yo, that was my favorite piece aswell...
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Old 11-14-2007, 06:04 AM   #7 (permalink)
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any feed on the chorus? how is it?
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Old 11-14-2007, 11:27 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Chrous was ehhhh....could have been worked more couple of lines were a bit short like they were missing a word or something i like the chorus like i said i liked the way you crafted yo high in this piece !!!!! Thanx for the hug man !!!!!! *MUAH*
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i think tha chorus was decent.. def heard a ton worse thought it could be better

n if it stimulates minds then you emulate lies, n try ta abbreviate rights
by shortening freedom and enforcing your reason, we cant appreciate life
^^ hot line fam.. straight honesty no lie
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