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Old 04-25-2008, 09:34 PM   #1 (permalink)
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She the one to have you reeling, unforgettable/
Ungettable but the feelings unregrettable/
Unsexual, in love with the mind of this divine dime/
She in every rhyme, so your soul is undressable/
Try to leave it behind, but your pride is inedible/
Unquestionable, but somehow inexpressable/
And you feel this girl with every decibel/
Turn up the radio, coz this world is incredible/
If she say no, you crazy low, unbearable/
The best if she say yes, get you high like hysterical/
Inexplicable, You tripping, dreaming on visuals/
Where you together forever, inextricable/
But she un-kissable, miss un-missable/
Incapable of capture, its inequitable/
Got you lyrical when you speak, deeply spiritual/
Past physical, miss got you envisioning miracles.

check, i wasn't tryna just drop big words, and yanah i'm a sucka for luv. ha
please holla and tell me how u feel bout it. Yanaw, help always gud.
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Old 04-26-2008, 09:30 PM   #2 (permalink)
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It's kool, i like the rhymescheme in

Ungettable but the feelings unregrettable/
Unsexual, in love with the mind of this divine dime/
She in every rhyme, so your soul is undressable/
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Old 05-02-2008, 12:27 AM   #3 (permalink)
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i was feelin this one. im no good at the love drops but the way we try to construct the rhymes in our lines is lightweight similar.
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