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chillin...watchin the rain hit the pavement
the wind carries lost souls like a slaveship the devil comin for his payments from his clients that traded their souls for flawless diamonds instead of puttin time in must've got blinded by they own diamonds now they just lyin to themselves destined for hell cuz they trapped like jail and they skull is the cell nothin left to sell so now they livin in hell i try to free em but they got no bail i try to see em but they under a veil of purple haze on they way to the grave in the fast lane livin out they last days in pain and rage like a slave with AIDS steady goin insane and go to church in vain like they prayin with the crack in they veins they say life is priceless but when the eyes is lifeless the knife is bout as temptin as a nice bitch its essential that we dream cuz we livin nightmares right here we fight fears and wipe dry tears from our cheeks as we search for peace with the wrong coordinates my niggas in the crib with me like an orphanage screamin fuck errythang like we all whores with dicks just subordinates but we claimin to be bosses niggas wana live honest and try to go college and students puttin bullets in their head like knowledge we runnin from the problem but we cant ignore it cuz sooner or later we gonna have to pay for it i got a problem that lives in the bottom of the bottle that i swallow from slave to the alcohol hopin god'll come my soul weighs a fuckin ton cuz its soaked in rum prolonged suicide without a rope or gun it used to be for fun now look what ive become enraged at the world when i have none lookin at my girl thinkin bout my future son will he suffer for what i had done when i was young and dumb or could it be undone or shall i be shunned a prisoner to this liquid cage steady drownin in my own dismay on my knees i pray that the day i die my soul rests in heaven inflation takin the food out the faces of my children so im hustlin gotta make a fuckin livin everyday riskin the chance of a life sentence just a man tryin to get by whats the difference showin repentance and askin god for forgiveness for my sins, slappin bitches, and illegal business ignorin victims while i envision gettin riches despite the wisdom foggy vision got my mind twisted im indifferent to the system that allowed lynchin and the killin of the innocent without conviction any black male in a hoodie fits their description they dont want the truth, infatuated with the fiction so they dont listen when we try to better our condition just dismiss us like a bunch of fuckas in detention until we take up arms and scheme like we on a mission its a concrete jungle and these niggas livin in the trenches and if we were to perish doubt anyone would miss us soldiers with no glory in the same gory story tellin god this life aint for me but he chooses to ignore me so with each new dawn i push through like a newborn conscience gone walkin chin up through the devil's storm waist-deep in the flood but my spirit is never torn i just march on like a soldier in an endless war till the clothes is torn as my chest explodes in gore and i fall dead to the floor that transforms to a shore and the skies part as god himself welcomes me through the door so many places to explore as i just let my soul soar i was thinkin i could go to heaven chill by myself or kick it with my fallen brethren while we burnin in hell with roastin bodies everywhere gettin used to the smell dont miss happiness no more cuz we forgot how it feel call my niggas in a huddle strategize to beat the struggle keep our asses out of trouble and our minds upon the hustle a king is a fool to kill a pawn and go to prison so i leave that to my righthand man i call the bishop then i got the knights that end your life on sight and the rooks murder crooks that be givin funny looks they say vision is the art of seein the invisible so if im a visionary i must be damn near invincible a simple task to me is what these niggas callin difficult if you cant get a grip then switch to a different stroke stay original if you love somethin love it with a passion dont be ashamed to slow down if it feel like you crashin im here but you cant see him cuz magic you dont believe in its tragic what i be seein tellin jesus every evening i think im ready to meet him eyes wide open while im dreamin cuz these demons they be creepin in my room while i be sleepin on my conscience they be feedin like its crack and they be feenin on my life these killers schemin like my death would make it even all my love these haters thievin game so cold these bitches freezin i know it doesnt seem like it flows at times as your readin it. but rest assured when i spit it out loud its beautiful ![]() The One Criminal Mind Last edited by SkeetOnBeezies; 05-14-2008 at 02:05 AM.. |
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Rap GodFather
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gawd.....!? text and out loud is different...man...it was good long winded as hell but good..I actually read all of it....lol...I like how you articulate the everyday struggles the people go through some who are less fortunate....keep that concept alive....it was like I was at a seminar on the real...when I was reading this piece...u brought that crack that damn near split my head from excessively reading this joint!....lol keep postin man..look forward to it...holla...
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