"4,3,2,1" freestyle

[Lynx]

it's been a while since i dropped that verse:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yxK2-0H_ZbU&eurl

"The knowledge i be droppin' be burning dictionaries
Too much vocabulary to stretch that ain't even necessary
Edumacation is important to understand what i'm saying
Kindergarten is over, now time to stop playing
And start being serious about real shit that matters
R.I.P. to those who will be missed including the latter
Cause there's too much bullshit that gets flies disgusted
Brothers on the block getting either shot or busted
Don't be another one! I'm just trying to set an example
Never grew up there but my vision is quite ample
Elephants in the path, be careful cause they might trample
Waiting to be sued for 'stealing' another sample
I also got money on my mind but i don't just live about it
It's very hard to imagine waking up one day without it
Not a dime or a nickel, not even 50 cents
Get rich or die trying, and don't count rents
The power of the dollar is beyond comprehension
Since it takes money to grab someone's attention
Now buckle up as we travel to another dimension
Where you're caught doing nothing and still go to detention
Living by the gun and dying by the slugs
That's the deal nowadays with most of these 'thugs'
Exterminator in the game to kill all these bugs
Infesting the world with drugs lifting them like lugs
So take in mind all these words that i say
Cause it's no big deal here, it's just another day!"

yeah, i know this beat asked for something more 'hardcore' but that's just me... lol what do you guys think? sounds like it may flow with that instrumental IMO. i don't rap though...

[Tyme Lyne]

well its a start i guess keep writing and you will get there ....its okay ...but u cant just play around wit rhymes to make it seem like its a creation you got to live and breathe rhymes to make it come out to a certain point like this is how i feel? so tell me how you really feel then drop another post . ill holla .