Comic Book Shit

[Thirteen]

Wrote this real quick and haven't revised it much, just wan2 get a quick bit of feedback to let me know what people think. I'm in a slightly centimental mood as of late so i thought why not make a sorta throwback-verse, takes me back to when i was ten watching spiderman on TV. haha Feedback will be propped. Peace

Thirteen mutated, look what it made him,
I am the streets angel, now look how they hate him,
X-Man, I’m like spiderman and captain America,
Batman and superman but daredevil need his Elektra,
A lil miss to marvel at my capital and I ain’t talking DC,
My money mint, not a mimic like a freebee,
I need miss to bump me in her CD, papers wana flash me,
But I dash like the flash, splash cash out the kitty,
On a kitty or a rogue, leave me breathless with her touch,
I want a Jean Gray up on me, to arise from the dust,
I never been Arizona, but I got phoenix dreams,
Cuz I need a girl that heal me, like the insides of wolverine,
Tell the truth, she gotta watch for the Sabertooth,
So I can make ‘em like the Cyclops, watching what the laser do,
She gotta watch me like Xavier, so I can be a blue beast on the beat
And when I hulk up, She hold the thing up for me,
I’m fantastic, I’m math-a-matic when I speak,
I need a girl that gone hold that semi-automatic at mystique,
I’m the street-clothed magneto, But a King Pin need a queen,
Waiting on Lois Lane, Coz Mary Jane ain’t for me,
No weed, Gotta stay away from the green chronic,
Lil’ miss Kryptonite, Wonder Woman with her knowledge,
Watching for the jokers and the enemies, lil’ miss menacing.
But a friend of me, The only one who know my secret identity.

[tappz.]

ish is pretty dope so far i like all the similies

I never been Arizona, but I got phoenix dreams,
Cuz I need a girl that heal me, like the insides of wolverine,

^^ Dope line

[AeroFX]

Man, this shit is the best and it was brave to experiment with this sorta concept, but you pulled it off way to good for it to be ignored, good drop.

[Thirteen]

bizzump to the fullest