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Old 06-25-2008, 09:22 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I really dont know what to call this and the hook, I dont really like either so any suggestions would be greatful.

I am a broke ass motherfucker, broke as sin,
Livin in the hard streets, my life is getting thin
Getting high, shootin up with some heroin,
Deaths the only thing I know, Satan is gonna win
Don’t know what to do next, will I rot out here?
Will I survive another day? Death is my fear
Hand me the gun so I can end this great misery
I’ll be a ghost and the next fuckin mystery
I welcome all to my funeral I am now paralyzed,
Throughout life I’ve really been hated and demised,
Fuck this shit, give me a blade and I’ll slit my wrists,
While grasping a tight grip and formin delicate fists
Blood drippin down, is this how I am goin to die?
In a pool of my own blood? God-damn it! WHY!?
Lord this is a cry for help, Save me from the devil
If you really are the savior bring up to your level

Hook: Conscience
“Everything is gonna be cool, just relax
Dawg, just live your life out to the max
Keep everything simple but yet gentle
itll play out, keep me goin and mental"

If I took time to process everything over the years
If I broke down and you’d see a river of tears
The cry for help but no one understands
I am not in control nor am I in command
Schizophrenia controls my thoughts and perception
With a misconception, I will never be an exception
Livin all these years through the tough times
Livin in hell but yet Im able to write these lines
Showin my skin the blade, splittin the skin
Life throwin more curves than Tom Glavine
Opening up the vains and watchin the blood squirt
Blood on my shirt, I need to change my shirt
Cut right down to the bone, can see pure white
By end of this night, I’ll see the glowin light
Come and take me away “it’s not your time”
Why not? “you haven’t completed your rhymes”
Fuck

Hook: 2x

I'm also plannin to write a third verse aswell.
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Old 06-25-2008, 04:53 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 06-27-2008, 09:31 PM   #3 (permalink)
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yo anthrologic....im feeling this drop man....u should have posted this with reason to live...but I see you got a whole lot to get out on wax...and its deep ....keep writing I feel like you got a story to tell...I enjoy reading your material ...its real talk...
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Old 07-04-2008, 11:15 AM   #4 (permalink)
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if I had posted this with reason to live, that song woulda been madd long, ya'now? If I had 6 verses for one song I know people wouldnt read it and get bored half way through besides Ive never seen a song with 6 verses in it. thanks for the feed though. anyone else?
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