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Hitman
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 474
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I really dont know what to call this and the hook, I dont really like either so any suggestions would be greatful.
I am a broke ass motherfucker, broke as sin, Livin in the hard streets, my life is getting thin Getting high, shootin up with some heroin, Deaths the only thing I know, Satan is gonna win Don’t know what to do next, will I rot out here? Will I survive another day? Death is my fear Hand me the gun so I can end this great misery I’ll be a ghost and the next fuckin mystery I welcome all to my funeral I am now paralyzed, Throughout life I’ve really been hated and demised, Fuck this shit, give me a blade and I’ll slit my wrists, While grasping a tight grip and formin delicate fists Blood drippin down, is this how I am goin to die? In a pool of my own blood? God-damn it! WHY!? Lord this is a cry for help, Save me from the devil If you really are the savior bring up to your level Hook: Conscience “Everything is gonna be cool, just relax Dawg, just live your life out to the max Keep everything simple but yet gentle itll play out, keep me goin and mental" If I took time to process everything over the years If I broke down and you’d see a river of tears The cry for help but no one understands I am not in control nor am I in command Schizophrenia controls my thoughts and perception With a misconception, I will never be an exception Livin all these years through the tough times Livin in hell but yet Im able to write these lines Showin my skin the blade, splittin the skin Life throwin more curves than Tom Glavine Opening up the vains and watchin the blood squirt Blood on my shirt, I need to change my shirt Cut right down to the bone, can see pure white By end of this night, I’ll see the glowin light Come and take me away “it’s not your time” Why not? “you haven’t completed your rhymes” Fuck Hook: 2x I'm also plannin to write a third verse aswell. |
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yo anthrologic....im feeling this drop man....u should have posted this with reason to live...but I see you got a whole lot to get out on wax...and its deep ....keep writing I feel like you got a story to tell...I enjoy reading your material ...its real talk...
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Hitman
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 474
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if I had posted this with reason to live, that song woulda been madd long, ya'now? If I had 6 verses for one song I know people wouldnt read it and get bored half way through besides Ive never seen a song with 6 verses in it. thanks for the feed though. anyone else?
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