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Old 07-12-2008, 08:26 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Im the best in the game, go and tell it to ya mama
Thats as obvious as saying Jesse's jealous of Obama
Your wack, Im not impressed with your incredulous concepts
Motherfucker who hasnt regressed from the Oedipus complex
Delusions of competence of being adept at rappin
But as soon as he spit, you could guess what happened
Nobody gave a shit, cause he was less than average
But they engaged in my shit, so next is marriage
Niggas try and test me, but my rep's established
So I stay strapped, like I was having sex with Paris
Niggas invest in carats, to wear around their necks
Got top producers, to ensure that their sound is fresh
This increases the budget, so they mount the debt
So the only i thing that seems to bounce is checks
Hes broke, so he is forced to put down his quest
He thought that we'd worship the ground he stepped
All these failures can provoke or account for stress
So he sits in his rooms and smokes an ounce of cess
It seems like hip hop has drowned to death
But Ill provide CPR until I hear the sound of breath
I ask all the haters to put the doubt to rest
Keep writing till the day that I'm announced the best
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Old 07-13-2008, 10:08 PM   #2 (permalink)
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like this joint...kinda reminded me of Jay Z spittin that minority report shyt...im feelin this public announcement real talk...dude u slept on for real these niggas need to stop sleeping!...lol...they need to wake the fuck up!...
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Old 07-14-2008, 05:04 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I co-sign you my brother.....Dope verse!!! Theres only a couple folks on here whom I respect what they do.......Your one of them homes and this is coming from a King like myself....
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Old 07-15-2008, 01:26 PM   #4 (permalink)
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ya joints always pack a solid message.. dope piece.. there was too many quotables in this joint... catchy lyricism, brilliant metaphors... nice read...
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Old 07-15-2008, 01:27 PM   #5 (permalink)
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do you write these pieces to a beat??
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Old 07-15-2008, 01:40 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I really appreciate all of you always reading and feeding my shit. Believe me on that i really respect your opinions which has undoubtedly helped me develop my writing. To be honest, your my only outlet or reliable source of feedback, and I really appreciate what you do.


To answer G-Rated's question, it really depends on what inspires me to write. Sometimes I hear a beat and write to that, but most of the time I hear a word, saying, or expression in the course of regular day life that propels me to go to my computer and write something creatively based on that. Lyrically I tend to borrow Nas and Talib's broad message and mix it with my own individual inputs and beliefs.
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Old 07-15-2008, 05:47 PM   #8 (permalink)
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word...I get my inspiration from nas too...him ...redman...talib..mos def...blackthough...jean grae..all dat fresh clean shyt. I just mix it up...but some people say im more of a story teller..like slick rick for real for real...dats my mentor right...there. lol....keep the skillz hot DX u got it.....I see u my dude...
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^^^ appreciate that Lyah
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Old 07-16-2008, 05:12 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Real nice piece man... Do you do audio??
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